Ok, I couldn't stand the format, so I decided to repost this, yeah, yeah, I'm upset that I have to start over but I only had 3 reviews so I wont die, so yeah enjoy!!
A/N: This is what I think was running though Lucy's (such a boring name for her) head when she killed those kids. That was her first kill (took place 8 years before she met up with Kouta again). Enjoy -
Disclaimer: I do not own Elfin Lied but I will tape it one day .
Bloody Rain
The dog whimpers and whines its cries are heard throughout the room
The monsters beat him more and more until the he had reached his doom
But the boys are still upset the want to beat him more
They claimed he died too fast they wanted to see more gore
A pool of blood flows out the dog all I could do is stare
The boys laughed and played it's like the dog was never there
I couldn't even cry for him I wanted shout and yell
But they didn't even care one called out "oh well"
My "friend" runs into the room her face was full of despair
"What are you doing?" she cried Truth was she didn't care
She pretended to be upset with them she pretended to feel bad
But inside she was laughing like them causing me to build up all the rage I had
She told them where to find the dog she told but I don't know why
The way the treat me is horrible they all deserve to die
They hate me because I'm different they're scared because of my ears
They want me to be inferior they bully me out of fear
You hate me because I'm not like you; you assume I'm a monster too
Well look in the mirror you little brats "The real monsters are you"
Warm red liquid splatters from behind me I hear cries of pain
Blood splatters all around and now there's a bloody rain
A/N: Sorry if it was way too long. I personally like it. It's my first poem based of an anime. If you're confused it might be because you never saw episode 8 in Elfin Lied (great episode .). If you see it that might clear things up or just email me and I'll tell you what's happening. Well I hope you liked it!!
its...still not good... i dont know what to do anymore...