Hawk kept on running. He didn't know where the cat was but he was sure it wasn't far from him. He was sure that if he stopped his tiny neck would of been pierced by long white claws. His mother was dead. Killed by the same cat he was running from. He and his mother, DappleBreeze,were loners. He was only 6 moons old when a black cat attacked them. DappleBreeze was being ambushed and knew she was going to die. She took her only kit and her final words were "Run". So Hawk ran as fast as he could as DappleBreeze was killed. The black cat, NightWing, saw Hawk running and chased after the defenseless kit.
So here we are now. A young light brownish kit with dark brown stripes being chased after a black cat with long claws. Hawk didn't know how much longer he could run. Unfortunately he tripped over a twig and saw Nightwing pouncing over him. He closed his eyes and waited for the pain, but none came. When he opened his eyes what he saw shocked him.
A grey cat had jumped up and tacked NightWing down, and they were now clawing each other. The grey cat then sliced NightWing in the throat, killing the cat walked over to Hawk "Hi I am GreyFur, the deputy of Snakeclan, what are you doing here all alone?"."?I am sorry I was just attacked by that cat and my mother whose a loner, was killed"Hawk then had a sad expression on his face "I am very sorry for your lost, little kit ,would you like to join SnakeClan? And whats your name?. Hawk didn't know whether to trust the cat. It was either go with him and have a place for the night and possibly be killed by GreyFur who tricked stay here and possibly be killed by a fox or another cat. Either way he could be killed. He decided it is best to go with did kill NightWing. "My name is Hawk and I would like to join SnakeClan". GreyFur's expression softened up a bit when he heard that. "Great let's go!"
After walking for a while they came across a clearing and entered. There were cats everywhere. Some were big as GreyFur and some as small as Hawk. There were many different dens and there was the leaders den and GreyFur was looking up at that den. "SnowStar!" Greyfur yelled at the den. A white cat with black paws came out " Yes, GreyFur? What did you find on the patrol? And who is this kit here?". GreyFur pushed Hawk up to SnowStar " This is Hawk.I found him during my patrol. His mother's a loner and she was killed by NightWing and he almost killed Hawk here if it wasn't for me. He wants to join the clan." . Snowstar inspected Hawk "I see, he seems to be tough if he's a kit and he survived being attacked by NightWing. How old are you Hawk?". Hawk looked up to the leader. "I am 6 moons old and is NightWing a bad cat here?". SnowStar lept down from the den he was on and walked to Hawk."He is the deputy in FoxClan. FoxClan is a very nasty clan. When they here about this...it won't be pretty. Your ready to become a apprentice! Follow me!"
Hawk followed SnowStar up to the den. "This is HighRock little cat, you will learn more about this tomorrow. Attention clan cats I have a clan meeting in order!" All the other cats stopped what they were doing and walked to HighRock in order to hear what SnowStar has to say. "Today GreyFur found Hawk who was being chased by NightWing. GreyFur killed NightWing and both cats featured amazing amounts of bravery today. So I am allowing Hawk to join our clan. But that is not all!". SnowStar turns to Hawk. "This brave kit is also 6 moons old. So he is ready to become a apprentice! Say hello to HawkPaw!". The cats then chanted his new name "HawkPaw! HawkPaw!". SnowStar then turned her gaze to GreyFur who was also with with them both on HighRock. "GreyFur I am leaving you to mentor HawkPaw because you found him and killed NightWing". GreyFur nodded and all the cats left HighRock. HawkPaw was starting to get tired and went to the Apprentice's Den. GreyFur and SnowStar walked over to the den and SnowStar whispered in his ear "Welcome to SnakeClan HawkPaw". They then went to their own dens.
Meanwhile, BranchStar,the leader of FoxClan who is a dark brown cat has discovered NightWing's body on the ground. He sniffed the air and smelled the scents of SnakeClan. "SnakeClan will pay". And then he walked into the darkness.
I hope you like the first chapter of this story. It will get more interesting! This was actually fun to write! Please review too!