This is the original story as opposed to my other one Gruesome secrets. Like I said it only is connected to what Ponyboy's going through in that story. This one is the real deal. It is the first one I started writing. So if you read both and wonder which one has the thoughts I first came up with it's this one. Again this one is alternate and is only connected to what happend to Ponyboy in the story Gruesome secrets. Sodapop gets to stay home in this one. Also Ponyboy's foster guardian's lines sound strange because of her accent.

Most of the gang were all at the Curtis house today. Soda and Steve were playing poker, Darry was reading the newspaper in his chair, Two-bit was watching Mickey, and Ponyboy was on the couch reading.

Johnny and Dally were out of town at a rodeo though.

Everything was going great until they heard a knock at the door. So Darry got up and opened it and was met with the face of their social worker.

Ms.Tearioni walked in without an invite and just got straight to the point. "Darrel Curtis I'm sorry to drop in unannounced like this but the state has come to the conclusion that this home is not fit for your youngest brother Ponyboy."

The gang looked up in shock. Two-bit and Steve looked angry, and Darry, Soda, and Ponyboy all looked ready to burst into tears.

"Ponyboy go get your things packed. Your coming with me. We already have a woman looking to foster you." Mrs.Tearioni said.

"When can we take this to court?" Darry asked.

"You must wait at least 6 months before you can schedule a court hearing." She said.

"Fine." Darry then looked to Ponyboy who had tears in his eyes. "We will get you back Pony. Don't worry." He said.

So Pony packed his things and left with the horrible woman to go to his temporary foster home.

5 hours later they pulled onto a long road that only held the house they were going to. It was covered in a forest of trees and it was now sunset in the town Ponyboy had never heard of; Crowndane. The town was small but it had much to do even though there weren't many people.

They pulled into a nice, big, black house that looked pretty fancy. So they got out, Ponyboy got his stuff and Ms.Tearioni led him up the steps to the door.

Once opened they were met with a woman who had long brown hair with purple streaks in it. "Hellu yu moost (must) be Ponyboy." She said with a Romanian accent. Although she was a bit difficult to understand he voice sounded sweet and rich. She sounded like a teenager. She looked like one too, with the jeans, boots, black shirt, and black jacket she was wearing. She looked like a young, beautiful, witchy model. "I'm Rodella yur (your) foster guardian. I don't like being referred to as a parent. Ples (please) come in." She said.

So they walked inside and were greeted with what looked like the inside of a big mansion. "I should be able to tek (take) it from here. I'm sure yu have plenty things to do Ms.Tearioni." Rodella said.

"Yes I do. I will make monthly stops to check in on Ponyboy though, just to let you know." Then she left.

"Ponyboy come vith (with) me. I vant (want) to show yu something." Rodella said just as she was sure Ms.Tearioni had left.

So Ponyboy followed Rodella down to the basement were they entered a small room lit by a red light. She moved over to a small, hidden button near the wall to reveal a hidden room. He then followed her in and the door shut as the next red light turned on.

Rodella then dragged him over to a chair and asked him to sit down. He didn't think much of it and when He wasn't looking Rodella hit another button and strapped him in.

Hey what's going on?" Ponyboy asked.

"Vell (well) yu see Ponyboy, I'm what yu would cool (call) a vitch (witch). One who turns young humans into von (one) of the supernatural if they have the potential. Not many have the potential though, but it seems to me that yu do." Rodella told him.

She then went over to a small lever and hit it. The wall then slid to the right to reveal a bunch of bloody syringe needles. So Rodella went over and grabbed one.

She went over and grabbed one then walked back over to Ponyboy and said "calm down. I am von't (won't) hurt you. I am only going to turn you."

"Turn me into what?" He asked.

"We vill (will) see." She Then injected him with the needle and said "I don't know what kind of blood this is but we are about to find out."

He then began hissing in agony as the blood entered his system. He grew sharp fangs were his canine teeth were and his iris's in his eyes turned red while his sclera turned black.

"What did you do to me?" He asked.

"It looks like the blood I injected yu vith (with) vas (was) predatory." She said.

"What does that mean?" He asked sounding nervous.

"It means yu are now a wampire (vampire)." Rodella said.

"I'm a vampire!" Ponyboy yelled.

"Yu air (are) indeed." She said.

She then untrapped him and said "let us go upstairs and I vill (will) explain."

For some reason he trusted her and followed.

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