Author's Note:
So, this is my very first story. Please go easy on me, any criticism or tips on bettering my work will be accepted. Read and review ^^ Also, this is an AU fanfic so please, no flames.
Chapter 1
Maka's POV
I still remember that day…
"Maka, me, Angus and Jake are going to the park!" said her faithful husband Markus
"Okay honey, stay safe!" I replied
I should've gone with them to the park
'Knock knock'
I opened the door and saw police officers "Yes, do you need something?" I asked.
One of them looked at me and stepped forward "Ma'am, I am sorry to say this but Markus and Jake Dharryl died in a car accident nearby the Central Park" I dropped the glass I was holding and fell on my knees
"You're joking right?! That cannot happen! I demand that you show me my husband!" I yelled "Ma'am please calm down-!" "NO! I will not calm down until you take me to Markus!"
Why did it happen?
They brought me to the hospital with an unpleasant feeling in my stomach
They brought to a room labeled "Morgue" I then knew that I was about to be faced with the stench of a cold, chilling iron-y liquid.
I never should've opened that door
I slowly reached for the door, the feeling in the pit of my stomach getting worse each second my hand gets closer to the handle
I took a deep breath and opened the door
There lay two dead bodies, each covered in a white sheet. One was bigger, definitely an adult and the other smaller, definitely a child.
Why did this happen to me? I never did anything wrong
I reached for the larger person's sheet and slowly uncovered it. I wish I hadn't.
There, pale and lifeless, was Markus. I fell on my knees and quickly uncovered the other body, there lay Jake. I sobbed loudly "Why?! What the hell did I ever do to you god?! Tell me!" I looked at my husband and son, it was like all the happiness and life I had inside me vanished into thin air. I let out one last yell "NOOOO!" I stood up, still crying but realized that Angus wasn't there. "Where's Angus?!" I yelled at the policemen "You mean the dog? He's at the animal center not far from here, he's the only one who survived the crash"
I woke up from my dream and found something wet on my cheek and quickly wiped it off. I heard a whimper and I looked to my left and saw Angus, my trusted golden Labrador, a gift from Markus on our 3rd anniversary. "It'll be alright Angus, we're almost there" he nudged his head under my hand and I started petting him to sleep.
"How much farther to Death City?" I asked the taxi driver
"We're already here as a matter of fact" he said.
So how was it? Good or bad? I'll try to update as soon as I can and I'll also try to make my chapters longer
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