Hey sorry I haven't been on in so long. I have THE LONGEST writer's block ever. I hope you would like this poem. It is in the point of view of a girl who is reincarnated over and over only to died in her soulmate's arms. Her soulmate is a vampire who can't save her because it is too late to turn her.
Forever Love
Every time I die
I die in your arms
Your tears running down
your moon kissed cheeks
You told me
not to leave you again
You said
that you can't wait for me again
only to see me die
every single time
And you couldn't anything
to save me
You whisper
I love You
Over and over again
Knowing I would
once again leave
I whisper
Until next time
You keep saying no
That this time you would follow
I shake my head a little
Knowing you would understand
I look at you
for the last time
and said
I Love You
Please review. Give me some suggesetions on how to make my poems better or give me some ideas you like me to write a poem or story about.