Okay, just saying, Otterkit is the big brother type, he would do anything for his sisters and Shadekit, and is very over-protective. Shadekit is outgoing and loves to tease his siblings. Dawnkit is the small one, she is quiet and always sticks with Otterkit. Fernkit is always rolling her eyes at her brothers antics, and tries to help Dawnkit. I just said so much, and you haven't even met the characters! So here's the allegiances and prologue , hope you enjoy!
Okay, okay, here's the disclaimer.
Willowbreeze: come on Otterkit! Say it!
Otterkit: But I don't want to!
Willowbreeze: *stares angrily*
Otterkit: Fine! Willowbreeze does not own warrior cats or anything else. Okay?
Willowbreeze: Good!
Allegiances
Leader:
Rosestar, a sandy-colored she-cat with the power of telekinesis.
Deputy:
Archrain, a dark brown tabby tom with the power to change the weather around him.
Medicine cat:
Amberleaf, a golden she-cat with strong hearing, sight and smell.
Warriors:
Thrushheart, a light brown tom who can speak to animals other than cats.
Brightsplash, a normally calico she-cat who can mimic the pelt pattern of other cats.
Fallowshine, a small grey she-cat who can turn into a deer
Apprentice, Briarpaw
Swiftturn, a silver tabby tom who can stop time
Apprentice, Cloverpaw
Tigerdapple, a ginger and black tabby she-cat who can make fire
Halfkip, a injured white tom who can slow down others
Frostfoot, a albino she-cat who makes frost everywhere she walks
Apprentice, Rustpaw
Aspenbranch, a lanky brown tom with darker flecks who can't be hurt in battle
Apprentices:
Briarpaw, a light brown and white she-cat who can control minds
Cloverpaw, a brown and white tabby who can grow flowers and plants
Rustpaw, A dark grey tom with ginger paws who can move metal
Queens:
Bluewhisper, a blue-grey queen who can hear whispers or far away sounds
Kits, Otterkit, Shadekit, Dawnkit, Fernkit
Stormbreeze, a light brown queen with longer legs then normal, no powers.
Expecting Aspenbranch's kits
Darkstrike, a black she-cat who can surround herself in darkness
Kits, Mosskit, Lightkit, Vinekit
Elders:
Stormsteap, an old grey tom who can mold earth
Kits:
Otterkit, A large brown tom who can breath underwater
Shadekit, a almost grey tom who can turn invisible
Dawnkit, a light brown she-cat who can make light anywhere
Fernkit, a light brown she-cat with white paws who can heal anyone
Mosskit, a short haired grey she-cat, undiscovered powers
Lightkit, a golden tom who can make anyone calm down
Vinekit, a lanky brown tom who can create plants or animals
Prologue:
Bluewhisper looked down at her new kits, two she-cats and two toms. She faintly noticed Amberleaf calling in Archrain, and his amazed expression at their lovely kits. She felt a surge of pride, before Archrain turned to her.
"What will we name them?" He asked softly as to not wake the kits. Bluewhisper had known he would be a great father.
She purred. "How about we name this one.." She pointed with her tail to a small she-kit. "Dawnkit?"
"Yeah! And this one Otterkit for his sleek fur?" He suggested, looking at the large tom.
Bluewhisper looked at another she-kit, noticing how much she looked like her mother. "How about Fernkit for this one, after Fernbreeze?" Arcrain agreed, commenting about how much she looked like her namesake.
Archrain pointed down at the last kit. "How about Shadekit, for his dark pelt?"
They both agreed on the names, and Archrain went to see Amberleaf. As soon as he stepped into the den, he knew something was wrong. Her eyes lit up and she mumbled "The Darkness, The New Dawn, The Healer, And The Protector, Will Guide Their Clan To Peace Or Misery. I When The Answer Is Chosen, Seek Starclan's Origins."His eyes widened, and Amberleaf passed out. He ran outside and into the nursery, and looked down at his four sleeping kits, already having a load of responsibility on their backs.
What do you think? Good? Bad? To mary sue or gary sueish? I want feedback! THERE'S TOO MANY KITS…..
-Willowbreeze