*Hey guys this is going to be my first ever story Like or hate I'll make it and try to Continue it any way.
CHAPTER ONE: The Man In Gray and The Bright School
In a world named Remanent there were two teams of outstandingly combat skilled teens but not every story revolves around the most popular. There was once a boy who was left by his mother dressed in a white battle skirt and had a cloak in an abandoned farm house. He cried and whimpered till he couldn't no more. He was getting surrounded by creatures known as Grimm and their class type seemed to be Beuwolf. He then saw a man in gray suit with a brown dusty cloak. Then the Beuwolf were distracted by a girl with banana colored hair and a sleeping little red headed girl around his age. The man in gray swiped with one swoop and sliced the Beuwolf into shreds the little boy who had no voice to cheer was awed. The man in gray then said in a concerned manner, "What are you doing here Yang your father will worry and we don't want him to be saddened than he already is…"
He then lifted the two girls and put them on his shoulder and vanished to what seemed like smoke with the girls as well seem to be gone. The bot noticed that he left his Scythe behind the little boy with Crimson hair and silver eyes stood up and guarded the scythe. The boy was getting tired because he has been there for 4 hours. The boy then heard some rustling near some bushes and kept his guard up. Then that's when a Giant Ursla appeared out of nowhere and swiped the boy ripping the boy's chest and leaving the boy to bleed out when, the man in gray showed up once again slicing the Giant Beast cutting every tendon, flesh, bone, and finally the head. The man in gray then grabbed him and the boy was suddenly at a hospital. The man looked concerned and the doctors seemed to rush to keep the poor lonely boy alive. Then the boy's vision started to turn black…
Crimson's POV
The boy woke up in the hospital with the man holding his hand he was frightened at first because he didn't know anyone else but, his mom in white.
The man in gray woke up and said, "Good Morning kiddo."
I tried speaking and that's when I realized my voice was back, "I'm okay mister."
He said, "Why were you alone in the farm house?"
I said, "I was with my Mother and she left me there."
He said, "Your mother..? Why would she leave you there and who is she."
I said, "She left me there because we were ambushed by the black monsters and my mom she. Umm. She…" tears swelled from my eyes and I didn't know why I couldn't speak I didn't want to.
The man said, "It's okay you don't have to tell me okay boy, but I am really curious what is your name."
I said, "My name is Crimson Rose… My mom's name was… Summer Rose.
The man's eyes opened so much I thought his eyes would pop out their sockets. He told me, "Oh I see Crimson you are a very special person to a certain energetic family…"
He told me, "I will put you into training till I see you are the best fighter in all of the 4 kingdoms." He put his word to it he has trained me for nine years and sent me to a school named Beacon Academy. He said, "Find the Academy and tell them you're with QROW.
I set of to my journey and I may have gotten lost and gotten into a few fights but, I'm still in one piece. I then saw a woman in a very fancy looking scarf and she had glasses. I wanted to ask her direction then I heard a giant crash and blade clashing nearby. When I turned to talk to the woman she disappeared. I then went into the 24/7 shop and bought some of my favorite apple flavored mints then I saw a fight on the roof top. I wanted to keep myself hidden as possible but, then I saw a ship fly by me so the most logical thing to do as a man is to of course jump on it. I was on the ship for what seems to be an hour so I decided to take a nap. I then woke up at a docking bay. I went on my own mission now because these guys looked very suspicious with their hundreds of elemental dust from the Schnee CO. As clumsy as I may be I thought this would be a piece of cake but, of course I trip on my cloak can reveal myself. I take out the Blood Moon my High Impact Sniper Scythe.
WARNING I AM NEW TO THIS SO THIS MIGHT BE A BAD FIGHT SCENE. Help me make it better by reviewing it.
Being me I rushed into the crowd of bone masked cat people and used my technique Big Bro Qrow taught me. I jumped onto my Blood Moon and shot him I launched up into the air and used the height to my advantage like what Bro taught me to. I shot and sliced till everyone was unconscious. Till a man with a very nice looking hat and a Girl dressed in red with her Dress glowing orange shot bolts of fire and ice at me. I was hit in the arm but it didn't faze me, "But was a scratch" I thought to myself and then the woman I saw a hours ago showed up and saved me.
TOLD YOU GUYS I'm NOT THE BEST SO HELP ME IMPROVE
I woke up lying in a dark room with a single source of light with a man in green and a cane standing under it.
He said, "How are you? You seem tired so, I have a couple of questions to ask who are you and have I met you before you look very familiar.
I said, "Don't know you and I need to get to Beacon Academy!"
The man in green said, "You're in luck child you are in Beacon."
I said, "So you're Professor Ozpin?"
He nodded and asked, "Why is such a young man looking for my Academy?"
I responded with, " I'm here because Big Bro QROW sent me here."
He nodded and gave me a piece of paper and said, "Go to this room and you will be starting class here tomorrow."
I walked outside my room and I was looking around and a lunatic red haired girl crashed into me. She stood up and said sorry and I was really confused because and she looked young and beautiful. I asked her if she goes to this school and I know I think that was very offensive. She looked very red for some reason I don't know why. I then realized that I was holding her chest I quickly pull back and say sorry. Then a yellow haired girl ran up to me and tried punching me but, I disappeared and left behind red rose petals and walked away. I looked behind me and they looked very confused. I found my class and it was a pretty boring class about an old man telling stories of his young days. The only good thing about the place I had the red haired girl as a seatmate for all my class periods which was awkward because a group of people were looking at me especially the yellow haired woman who was glaring daggers into me. Then the worst part of my day is P.E. Ms. Goodwitch class and she made me fight someone who volunteers and the one who volunteered was Yang the Yellow head girl. She said that she will never forgive me for touching Ruby I guess she is talking about the Red Haired Girl. Ms. Goodwitch started the match and the yellow haired girl lunged at me with flaming hair. Everyone in the crowd SCREAMED, "WHAT DID YOU DO TO GET HER SO MAD!"
I ran and vanished as much as I could when she finally hit me I thought her punches would hurt but, I couldn't feel it. I then stared to go on the offensive. Everyone was shocked even Ms. Goodwitch was shocked because my Aura level always stayed Green it never dropped. I shot up into the Air and disappeared into the sky and shot her sliced her till her Aura dropped to red. Then Ms. Good called the match off everyone was awed. Then Ms. Good said my name out loud and Ruby's group and Yang gasped. The bell rang and Ms. Good ended the class period and Ruby's Group and I think Team JNPR was their name. I turned around when I was going into my room door and said, "What do you want?"
Ruby and Yang said, "Are you our brother?!"
Ruby said very fast, "Woahihaveabrotherthatisverycoolimeanialwayswantedabrotherihopeyouknowwheremomisbutifyoudontthatsokay…"
I said, "Sorry I don't know your mom, my mom's name is Summer Rose and she left me in a shack nine years ago and Big Bro QROW saved me while my mom was out there fighting for her life."
Ruby with tears in her eyes said, "So, you are my long loast brubber."
HOPE YOU GUYS ENJOYED THIS IS THE FIRST EVER FANFIC I MADE I KNOW IT'S PRETTY LONG BUT, THIS IS THE FIRST CHAPTER
AND IF ANYONE IS ASKING WHO CRIMSON MY OC IS? HE IS THE SON OF SUMMER ROSE AND TAIYANG XIAO LONG CRIMSON BIRTH WASN'T REVEALED BY SUMMER BECAUSE HE DIDN'T WANT HIM TO FIGHT. TELL ME ANY THING YOU WANT BECAUSE I HAVE ALL MY INFO A PICTURE OF CRIMSON WITH ME I WILL POST IT IF YOU GUYS WANT ON MY DEVIANT ART!
