A/N: ive been reading fanfiction 4 a long tikme and finlly decided 2 rite my own story, plz review and tell me if u likeed it an if u think I need 2 work on anyting!

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i walkt down da stares in2 da grate hall. My name is lily evens and I go 2 howarts school of wichcraft and wizardry, im in my 7th yr and its been realy hard latly. I work realy hard at school and I have long red hair, it hangs down over my shulders and down my back. I have brite green emereld eyes and very white skin,

"hey lils, whatcha bin up 2?" asked vanessa walters, shes my bestfriend and we share a dormitroy.

"oh not much nessie just doing my hw in the library"

Vanessa has long cascading dark brown hair and large brite dark eyes. shes very smart 2 and her and me always compeeted for da vest gerades in our clases. Shes very pretty and nice and everyone likes her a lot, especially boys, but shes not a whor at all so they want her evn more.

We sat down at the grifinder table and a boy leened over 2 talk 2 me, his name is james poter and hes an annoying prik. I dunno why but hes bin in love wit me since we were in our 3rd yr, he always asks me out it drives me crazy!

"lily dearest will u go out with me?" james asked looking at me wiuth his hazel eyes. james has hzel eyes glasses and messy dark hair, his face is narrow and lots of grils think hes realy hot but I dujnno why.

'I most certainly will NOT go out with u potter u no that! I shouted very aangry as always.

vanessa just rolled her eyes, she knows ill never go out wit james and it drives her crzy!

Then siirisu black came up, hes really tall and goodlooking and lots of gurls r in luv wit him, but I dunno why cuz hes a complte prike just like poter. Remus loopin came over 2 hes nocer then james and siries, hes got light brown hair and blue eyes pretty cute 2 just like his friends. Every1 calls them the maurauders.

Theres also peter petigrew but hes kinda geeky and a loser so they dont hang out with him so much anymore. Hes short fat round and has blond hair end watery blue eyes

LaTer ThAt NiTe!

i wuz in da grfydor comonroom with Vanessa,she was briading my hair into a long french braid, she nos how cuz shes french and speeks it and everything.

Jus then jamse and siriuis and remis came into the room, my friend bethany brunskin wuz with tehm. Behanty has long blond hair and blue eytes, shes really pretty and is tall and slender and she plaays on the gryfinder quiditch teem. She likes remus but vansesa and me dont mind cuz hes the nicest of da maraeuders. we think he kinda likes bethani 2, its realy cute.

'hey gurls,' bethany said, 'hey beth" we said back

'so Bethany I guess ill see u around huh' remis lumpin sed to her ernestly andshe said 'cya remes;

ja,mes looked at me and siriuss loked at vaness a but we both pretended not 2 notice.

Later up in our dormitory bethany siad, "hey guys what do u 2 think about remus/ hes a nice boys rigth?'

Vaness and me lookt at each other and didnt no what to say.

review plz!