We all know the famous, "Starkit's Prophecy" one of the worst stories made on Fanfiction, with a impossible purple cat and rainbow eyes that came to life all the time. But I have come to fix it!

I will try not to make it bad as Starkit's Prophecy xD

And this will take place around the After Last Hope time, but Silverpaw and Shadepaw are NOT in this.

Jayfeather padded in the forest quietly, his ears folded down as he stepped carefully over every branch. That mouse-brain Icecloud, naming one of her kits, Starkit. The blind tabby already felt as if she'd already been rude enough to break the warrior code and mate with a cat outside the clan, but then have the audacity to name the third kit that. The tom shook his head.

Why give her the name, Starkit? He grumbled quietly, "At least she gave Redkit and Lakekit a normal name." He grunted, tossing his head up slightly so his head was pointed up at the sky. He huffed quietly, "What do you intend for her?" He asked quietly, cocking his head to the side, not getting an answer. He huffed loudly, shaking his head again, "Why do I even ask?" He continued to pad ahead, the kit still on his mind.

Icecloud huffed quietly, nuzzling each of her kits, "Oh my beautiful kits... You are so loved." She purred, staring down at the two larger kits. Redkit a reddish-brown she-kit with soft fur and Lakekit, a light brown she-kit with short fur. She then glanced over to her other kit, a very small black she-kit with white splotches on her fur, Starkit. Icecloud knew that the clan would be upset when she named her small kit Starkit, but every time she looked at the small she-kit's pelt it reminded her of the stars in the dark sky.

When she'd told Dustpelt and Foxleap what she was naming the kit, she saw their shock and surprise, but they accepted it quickly. The only problem came was when they asked who their father was. She was still thankful that Thornclaw spoke up saying he was the father. She had barely admitted to Jayfeather that their father was a ShadowClan cat, Owlclaw. The white she-cat let out another huff, nosing Starkit who let out a loud mewl, making Redkit and Lakekit start mewling as well.

Icecloud smiled softly, not noticing a golden-brown tabby padding in from behind, "They are beautiful kits, Icecloud." The she-cat turned quickly to see Thornclaw watching her, a plump squirrel by his paws. Icecloud frowned, lowering her head, "I can't thank you en-" She was interrupted by Thornclaw who gave a flick of his tail, "Don't worry about it, I am doing what I need to do and that is protecting my clanmate."

Thornclaw padded around her, carrying the squirrel again only to sit down, placing the squirrel in front of Icecloud, "I won't ask who their father is, Icecloud. But just know this, even if we're not mates and never have been, just know I will raise them as if they were my own." Icecloud jerked up, "T-t-t-t-t-thank you... Thank you." She mumbled, closing her blue eyes tightly. Thornclaw nodded, "Don't worry about it." He huffed, standing up quickly, "Have you slept? You should, it's best to sleep when you have kits." He padded out of the nursery quickly.

Icecloud turned her head to watch him leave. She let out a slow sigh before resting her head down beside her kits, mumbling, "Sleep well my kits." And soon Icecloud was dragged into sleep.

I know, it doesn't start out like the original Starkit's Prophecy started, but I don't want a prophecy out right.

Oh and I changed the "ShadowClan mother moved to ThunderClan" Because I could really find no cat in ShadowClan that would leave. So I changed it to Icecloud having kits with a ShadowClan tom and then Thornclaw pulls a Thrushpelt and says he will take care of them.

And no, Icecloud and Thornclaw never liked each other romantically, they were friends most likely. Thornclaw did it, because he didn't want her to be in trouble like a good friend.

So anyway, I'm done getting that out of the way.

So review guys~