Hi everyone! This is my first fanfic and I'm really excited about sharing my work for the first time. I love constructive criticism and am in need of a Beta reader. The next chapter should be uploaded in a couple day, but I really need someone to read over it if possible! Thanks so much if you are actually reading this! -Greywolf
Climbing the nearest building, Chat felt alive. Away from his controlling father and consuming fans, Chat could feel his heart racing and muscles burning from the pressure he wasn't used to feeling. That morning he had found a black box sitting on his desk. Shaking it, he was surprised to hear a sound of protest. He opened it and saw what looked like a tiny black cat with wings.
"Hey man! Do you have any cheese? I've been asleep for way too long and I'm starving." The little black creature said, coming out of the box. Adrien, looking shocked, backed away headed towards the door making sure it was closed, not wanting the creature to run away. "Yeah that's probably a good idea, don't want anyone knowing your secret."
"What do you mean? What are you?" "My name is Plaqq and I am a Kwami. You have been chosen to be the next Chat Noir." The little black cat said looking around, "Again do you have any cheese? I'm so hungry!" "Umm, I don't have any on me, but I can go downstairs and grab some. What kind do…" "Camembert! Camembert! It's my absolute favorite."
After getting the little swami his snack Place started to tell his story. "As I said, I am a kwami and kwami's choose and guide heroes. I have chosen you as my partner," Plaqq handed me a ring that was inside the box he had emerged from. "If you wear this ring and say Plaqq claws out you transform into a superhero called Chat Noir."
"So you're trying to tell me that I'm a superhero now? I highly doubt that. Someone has to be playing a joke on me." Adrien said confused.
"Yes, Adrien its true! You even have a partner! To transform you say Claws out.." Adrien took the ring and slipped it one finger and said, "Plaqq claws out!" His body began floating and he felt a very tight but quite comfortable fabric going all over his body. "I didn't mean right now! There still things I nee…" Plaqq tried to say as he was pulled into the ring on Adrien's finger. Touching his head, Adrien felt two triangular flaps appearing.
After the transformation was complete, Chat Noir was amazed. He was wearing a skin-tight black suit. Looking at himself in the mirror, he almost started to laugh. On top of his head were two cat like ears. Also he had a mask, a bell underneath his chin, and a belt that hung off his waist like a tail. Adrien took one look at the ensemble and started to laugh.
Falling on the floor, Chat Noir was finally able to pull himself together. As he stood up, he felt something attached to his back. He grabbed the metal cylinder off his back and examined it closer. On it was a paw-print, which, being the curios cat he was, Chat just had to press.
It extended to the top of his room. Chat then pressed the paw-print again and it went back to its normal size.
Soon after getting used to his new attire, Chat Noir went out his window and into the world below. As he was exploring the city, from his new perch, he saw a huge explosion. Pouncing like a cat, Chat climbed over buildings heading to where he saw the explosion.
When he got there, he saw something he didn't expect to see. Chat saw a giant, gaping crater in the middle of the street. Pushing the button, Chat extended the baton to the street and used it to land in the middle of the crater.
He looked around trying to find the whom or what had caused the destruction. Chat looked at some of the civilians and they were all pointing directly behind him.As Chat turned around, he realized the thing behind him was exactly what he was looking for. The giant entity behind him grinned and punched Chat directly in the face. Chat was hit so hard that he was thrown against the edge of gaping hole.
Using his baton, Chat extended it with him on top. Now that he was higher up he could evaluate the situation. The villain before him had on an odd costume on with curved shoulder pads. The man's facial features reminded him of someone but didn't have time to pinpoint it before the guy attacked him again.
Chat retracted his baton just as he jumped off it onto a car above. From his perch, Chat Noir saw a red flash right before feeling something hit him. The red thing and the cat fell onto the street. Opening his eyes, Chat saw something red directly beneath him. "Oh my gosh! Sorry, I didn't mean to do that." The girl beneath him said.