Ok so, I'm not to sure about this one... but if you guys like this, then I'll continue so yeah I could really use the reviews.
"Wake up fuzz ball!" a tortoiseshell ordered as she prodded a deeply sleeping blood red tom in the ribs with her paw. It was close to sun high in the lush, greenleaf touched hollow. The crimson tom was curled up in a tight ball in a nest of moss ferns and tall grass, hidden in the back of hollow log, with a few others.
The crimson tom groaned in response, "No, beat it." he muttered, bringing his thick tail over his face and curling up tighter.
The tortoiseshell she twitched her ear in annoyance, "So that's how you wanna play…" she muttered, and turned her back, taking a few paces back before turning to face the tom again. She neated the bedding beneath her paws, then pounced, barreling into him, "I said wake up!" she shouted, and both cats around seven moons rolled around in a play fight before the blood red tom let himself be pinned.
"Ok tortoiseshell, you win." he sighed, yawning tiredly and looking into her green and amber eyes with his deep grey ones.
The tortoiseshell let out a playful hiss, "Oh come on Spark, you're no fun!" she exclaimed, giving his a pout expression.
A devilish look crossed the red tom, Spark's face. He roughly jerked his body to the side, rolling out from under her paws, swiftly getting to his paws he rammed into her and pinned her, "No fun you say Kay?" he questioned arrogantly.
The tortoiseshell known as Kay purred, her eyes brimmed with amusement, "That's right Sparkle, dull as pebbles." she responded, and swatted a paw at his nose.
Spark shifted his head back, out of her reach, "Well now, that's not very nice." he said, giving her a false hurt look.
Kay rolled her eyes, "Yeah yeah, hurt, mean whatever. Now get off me." she said. Spark complied stepping gracefully off her and letting her stand, giving his long pelt a quick wash as she straitened out her own.
As he finished, giving his pelt a final lick he curled his thick tail over his paws and looked as her, "Did you need something by the way." he asked.
"Come hunting with me." She said, giving him a bright look.
Spark rolled his eyes, "That's what you woke me up for? I guess I'll go sense you won't let me sleep." he said, she purred and padded out of the den. Spark followed, blinking his eyes to ajest to the sunlight as he left the den.
"About time you woke up. Lazy furball." commented a deep red, grey and black she cat as she saw Spark come into the sunlight. She was laying contently in the sun, sucking up it's warm rays. Be side her was a tortoiseshell, her belly swollen, promising kits.
"Good morning Cardinal, Dapple." Spark responded, trying not to roll his eyes at his mothers words. The tortoiseshell sleepily waved her tail at him.
Cardinal stood and padded over, licking his ear, "And where are you going?" she questioned.
"Hunting with Kay." he responded, returning the gesture of affection. "Hunting with Kay," she repeated, pondering it for a second, "alright, be careful." she said, returning to her original spot in the sun. Spark twitched the tip of his tail happily, then left with Kay. When he and Kay returned, the sun was dropping from the sky. As the two felines went to enter the hollow a brown tom busted out of the entrance and darted past them.
Kay dropped her prey, "That was Twig!" she exclaimed, but Sparked ad already darted into the hollow upon smelling blood. He spotted to sleek pelts a blue grey and silver one, and a black one, and bounded over relief washing over him as he found his mother as well as Dapple and the elderly Icicle where all alive. He turned to the blue grey and sliver cat, his father River.
"What happened?" he demanded, anger bubbling in him when he saw fresh wounds on his mother. With out waiting for an answer, he whipped around and sped past Kay and out of the hollow, intent on hunting down Twig.
"Spark!" he heard his name being called, but ignored it. Soon a weight crashed into his hunches and he was tackled and pinned to the ground in heart beats. The red tom glared into a pair of deep red eyes. The eyes of his older brother, Sleek.
"I'll kill him!" Spark hissed struggling against this sleek pelted brother, who held his smaller form firmly to the ground with out much effort. Sleek waited until Spark's struggles stopped before speaking.
"You're not going to do anything Spark. You're going to go back to the hollow, and stay with Cardinal Dapple Icicle and Kay, while I find our brothers. You're not going to go after him. Got it?" the black tom ordered, teasing Sparks shoulder threateningly by slightly un sheathing his claws.
Spark let out a frustrated sigh, and gave his brother another heated glare which was returned to him, before turning his head, the roots of a tree near his head suddenly becoming interesting, "Fine." he growled quietly.
Sleek reared off of him, letting him up, "Good, now go." he said, then brushed past the younger tom and into the depths of the forest. Spark stared at his paws, his over sized extra clawed paws, letting out an annoyed low yowled he raked his claws through the bark of a tree, before stalking back toward the hollow.
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