Okay so I said I was going to rewrite the story some so this is the rewritten Chapter One. I would love if you guys who have read the first version of this chapter would tell me which one you liked better.
Max's (P.o.v.)
*Flashback*
"I'm sorry Max but this just isn't working out." Cameron says not an ounce of remorse shown on his face.
"What…What do you mean? This isn't about oh my gosh!" I choke out not believing his words
"Max come on Babe you didn't want to give me what I wanted! I mean did you really think someone like me could really want someone like you for you?" he questions amusement appearing clear as day on his face and at that moment my heart breaks into millions of pieces, it feels as though it burst into flames when he chuckles at the tears rolling down my cheeks.
"But…but I love you" I whisper as my knees weaken
Cameron smirks at this "Now Max maybe you shouldn't have pretty much handed me your heart on a silver platter." He says winking at me before walking away.
*End of Flashback*
"But Max I love you!" Sam exclaims looking close to tears. What Sam or any other guy for that matter doesn't understand is that love is a curse.
"Sam please just go grow some and move on!" I grumble closing my locker and strutting towards my next class, feeling no sympathy for the guy balling his eyes out behind me.
Okay so what did you think? I've decided to make each chapter into two or more parts the second part of chapter one is already written I just have to type it.
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~Ce-Ce~