Hi, this is my first fiction so do not expect enything huge. And besides english is not my first language, so I guess I got many mistakes here, but whatever... I am not a huge Beyblade fan, but I am reading a story called Shadows of past, and I really like it. So then I thought it would be fun to write a story like that: ) Hope you like it, and remember to: R&R
Part 1
Chapter 1. In these times
Kai Hiwatari sat in silence with his head resting in his hands. He was sitting on the railing of a stone bridge wich led over an empty road. The ground and trees was covered in snow, and huge snowflakes flew around him, dancing in his hair and in his white scarf. He'd already waited for ten minutes, she should have been there by now! Kai frowned as he wondered if anything had happened. What if she never got out at all! What if his grandfather got her before she managed to escape the building?!
Kai shook his head. No, she was strong! He knew she would come. He looked down at the road underneath him, and thought of stopping a car if it ever would pass by. Maybe someone would be kind enough to help them. What was he thinking?! Kai looked down at his black uniform. With the Biovolt symbol clearly visible on his chest, no one would ever help him.
Suddenly he heard the sound of a car. He looked up and saw a dark green car approaching. He could feel Dranzers bit chip getting warmer in his pocket. Kai stared curiously at the approaching car, and suddenly noticed someone inside staring back at him! It was a boy, maybe a few years younger than him. He looked up at Kai with surprised eyes, and with one hand leaning towards the cold window.
And then, the car drove under the bridge, and was gone from sight. Kai sat there for a while, wishing he could have been that boy. It wasn't fair. He had everything while Kai had nothing. Kai shook his head, and jumped off the bridge. He had to look for her. He couldn't leave without her! He ran into the snow, towards the nightmare he thought he had escaped. The snow continued to fall all night, and the footprints, the only proves that he'd been sitting at the bridge, disappeared, for never to be seen again.
4 years later
17 year old Kai Hiwatari stood outside Tysons place with his launcher ready, pointing it at a beyblade dish. He had no idea how long he had trained, it felt like hours. It was a beautiful day. The sun shone brightly and a gentle breeze swiped over the trees.
The others were sitting on the ground beside him, watching Dranzer as the phoenix appeared in a blinding flash of light. Max, the youngest, sat leaning against the wall. He looked a bit tired, and that was allways a bad sight when it came to the blond boy, since he was the most hyper of them.
Beside him sat Tyson, who watched Kai's every move, in hope of finding some weaknesses he could use against him later. Kai smiled. Never would he give him that pleasure.
Kenny, a brown haired boy, sat with his beloved laptop on his lap, trying to cowince Dizzy to stop arguing with Ray, a cat like boy with black hair, sitting beside them.
Kai called Dranzer back to his blade, catching it in the air. He smirked sattisfied, then launched the blue blade again. If he only could get it perfect. In days now he had tried to shoot it out in a way that would give it more power, but it was harder than he had thought.
"Hey, Kai!" Tyson shouted, sitting up straight. "What about a break? You have been keeping this up for nearly five hours now. Arent you sattisfied yet?"
Kai shook his head, and called Dranzer back again, leaving the dish empty. There was something he did wrong, but what?
"Well, I think I should go inside and do some homework. That damn teacher wants us to write five hundred words about the secound world war. I think she's nuts, but whatever...nothing to do about that." Tyson raised and walked inside.
"Hey guys, I think I should go and help him," Kenny siad, raising too, still holding Dizzy in his arms. "After all, Tyson dont know a thing about the secound world war."
Ray nodded, with a smirk. Then he turned to Kai, who still had his eyes on the spinning blade. "You comming Kai? I think it's time for dinner soon."
"Yeah, I'll be there in a minute"
: Master, something wrong?:
No, he answered. Nothing, it's just...I got a feeling that...
He couldn't finnish, but he was shure Dranzer understood. It was so hard to explain, even to himself. It felt like there was something important he needed to remember, but couldn't figure out what.
A bit later he walked inside the house, only to find Ray and Dizzy in a loud discussion.
"KENNY, DID YOU HEAR WHAT YOUR STUPID LAPTOP JUST CALLED ME??"
"WHO ARE YOU CALLING STUPID, MISTER MINIBRAIN??"
"YOU HEAR?!"
"Of course he can hear you, everyone can," Max said, sighing.
:Master, can you hear me?!:
Kai who had walked trough the room, and was about to go upstairs, stopped when he heard Dranzer's concerned woice.
What do you mean? Of cource I can hear you.
:Master, somethings wrong! Everything is turning black!!:
What?! Dranzer!!
So, what do you guys think? I'm really glad I finnished this chapter now, before the summer holiday. Hope you all liked it: ) I promise you, it will get more exciting in the next chapters. After all, this is only the beginning: )Please Review
