Another creative writing assignment. We had to begin something with "deep in my soul, I saw a vision of fire falling".
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Deep in my soul, I saw a vision of fire falling
On mountains red with autumn leaves
Deep in my soul, I felt the irresistible calling
And my vision led me to the keys.
Deep in my fingers, a celestial urge
To record in detail the flames I had seen
Writing escaped me, but came in a surge
The notes flowing flawlessly onto the keys.
I recorded a fire that burned as none could
I composed a flame with a blood-crimson hood
From the hands of a corpse the leaves flawlessly flew
But if anyone heard it, it wouldn't be you.
Deep underground rose an unholy fire
Untouched, unseen by Heaven's light
Burning with hate rose my musical pyre
The music is calling to serve its desire
And I shall not sleep in my coffin tonight.
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