Soul in my Eyes
This is my first Inuyasha fan-fiction. This is an A/U fic just to let you know. Everyone is in high-school in 11th grade. Some characters may be OOC.
Please be kind in reviewing and no flames please. I will take helpful criticism though but only if it is helpful.
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Chapter 1: Blank Eyes
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She sat at her desk looking out the window not paying any mind to the teacher's mindless babble. There was nothing she was really looking at. She was just sitting there seeing something only she could see. Her brown eyes were blank looking like she had no soul in them whatsoever.
Who knows how long her eyes were like this and who knows why they are. No one knows because she never told anyone. Really there was never anyone to tell the reason to. No one ever bothered getting close to her mainly because she wouldn't let anyone try. She does this for their own protection. Anyone who has ever got close to her leaves her one way or another. Usually because of death.
Her long ebony hair contrasts with her pale skin as always. Her eyes are empty of any emotion like always. This mysterious girl is beautiful and enchanting but she doesn't acknowledge it. She sees herself as no more than a pond playing Life's game. A tortures game with twist and turns all leading to misery at the end.
If she looks at you it feels as if she is seeing right through you as if you were nothing. It is frightening with how her stare is always blank; showing no signs of happiness. Just grief.
No one understands her and by the way she acts, they are all afraid to try. She likes it this way. She can keep everything to herself with no one peering inside and making things complicated.
She was fine living without emotions. 'They only get in the way' is what she tells herself. So maybe she keeps to herself to much or doesn't have any feeling. If she isn't bothered by it, why should she care?
There probably isn't much about this girl that people know. Maybe it is better that way. She hopes no one will ever know. This girl keeps so much to herself and won't let it out. Who knows if she ever will? All they do know is her name
Kagome Higurashi
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So how was it? Was it good, bad, or what? I know it's short but this is just an intro on what Kagome will be like. Please review!
This is my first Inuyasha fan-fiction. This is an A/U fic just to let you know. Everyone is in high-school in 11th grade. Some characters may be OOC.
Please be kind in reviewing and no flames please. I will take helpful criticism though but only if it is helpful.
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Chapter 1: Blank Eyes
*********************
She sat at her desk looking out the window not paying any mind to the teacher's mindless babble. There was nothing she was really looking at. She was just sitting there seeing something only she could see. Her brown eyes were blank looking like she had no soul in them whatsoever.
Who knows how long her eyes were like this and who knows why they are. No one knows because she never told anyone. Really there was never anyone to tell the reason to. No one ever bothered getting close to her mainly because she wouldn't let anyone try. She does this for their own protection. Anyone who has ever got close to her leaves her one way or another. Usually because of death.
Her long ebony hair contrasts with her pale skin as always. Her eyes are empty of any emotion like always. This mysterious girl is beautiful and enchanting but she doesn't acknowledge it. She sees herself as no more than a pond playing Life's game. A tortures game with twist and turns all leading to misery at the end.
If she looks at you it feels as if she is seeing right through you as if you were nothing. It is frightening with how her stare is always blank; showing no signs of happiness. Just grief.
No one understands her and by the way she acts, they are all afraid to try. She likes it this way. She can keep everything to herself with no one peering inside and making things complicated.
She was fine living without emotions. 'They only get in the way' is what she tells herself. So maybe she keeps to herself to much or doesn't have any feeling. If she isn't bothered by it, why should she care?
There probably isn't much about this girl that people know. Maybe it is better that way. She hopes no one will ever know. This girl keeps so much to herself and won't let it out. Who knows if she ever will? All they do know is her name
Kagome Higurashi
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So how was it? Was it good, bad, or what? I know it's short but this is just an intro on what Kagome will be like. Please review!