I'm going to be editing this story, I've edited the prologue so I hope you enjoy the updated version,
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Greek Goddess Of Myths
What had she done? Oh no, what had she done? I thought as I ran outside of grandmother's house with Frey and into the field of corn, I ran along the only road with Frey running right at my heels. We ran and ran until we reached the end of the corn road; I glanced back at the house before glancing in front of me.
This is it then I guess, which is where it's end of the line Rose I thought to myself as spotted dad's car to the left, I ran towards the car and opened it easily before sliding into the front seat. Frey jumped inside before I started to drive, as I drove I kept making mistakes like veer off to the left but still I kept going to the forest.
Why had that stupid person for a sister do? What had she triggered in the book of spells that destroyed everything? Now all of my family had to pay for it, great I thought to myself grimly as I continued towards the forest, we will all die because of one asshole's mistake, I hope I'm not too late… I shook my head and continued driving.
As I continued driving flashes of dear memories flashed straight through my mind, I clutched the drivers' wheel with more certainty. I would save them no matter what; I would let them come back to me. I then remembered grandmothers' kind face and tears started to spill; I stopped the car while I cried silently.
If you just sit there, Rose and cry, you will not be able to do anything much less saving your family I thought as I angrily whipped the tears away, I drove once more and always to the same direction, towards the forest. Frey looked disturbed somehow and I looked over to the side of the car and stopped it, there right on the side was a body.
Its slumped shape gave it a dead appearance quit well, but I could not miss the rise and fall of its back, which indicated it was alive. It's clothes were not odd they were just ripped as if an angry herd of crows decided to teach them a lesson, but blood pooled around it's feet from scratched that littered most of it's body.
What should I do? What if is a trap? I thought as looked over at its slumped shape, I opened the car door and picked a stone before throwing it. It landed on the persons' back and they uttered a groan, you can always come back Rose, for now you need to save your family I thought as I drove off once more.
When I finally reached the edge of the huge forest I told Frey to stay there, he insisted on coming so I placed him secretly in my bag. Then taking a deep breath I glanced back before turning around once more, without another glance I stepped into the thick and strong forest to save my family.
As I walked along the thick forest, I sensed something wrong; I took deep breaths so I do not freak out and head towards the car. I walked along the silent forest with not a pause as I neared the place where I wanted to go, it was the huge cave in the middle of this whole forest and that was where my family was.
I walked more and more as I neared the cave, every step drew me closer to my doom but I did not stop walking nearer. As I walked nearer, I thought about what I would do there or even what I could do there, I walked deeper and deeper into the forest as I neared the cave where something had trapped my family inside.
My mother had called me and had said that they were in the cave when I asked her, she told me not to come but I would because I was not a coward. I walked and walked until I found the rocky entrance of the slightly odd road, it led to the cave so I started walking there with careful steps towards my doom.
I'm really sorry about all the waiting time I might've cause you, but school will be harder this year. I've noticed many mistakes in this story but I won't take everything down, instead I will go from top to bottom with the revised version.