this is my first time writing so hope you like it


Eddie and Jake were having a conversation of the concert he was going to have but Eddie didn't agree

Jake: come Eddie the label wants you to have just this concert

Eddie: Jake have you see me I'm a mess since me and Loren broke up

Jake: I know man have you heard from her

Eddie: no and I don't want to talk about it

Jake: okay man well I think that's all for today

Eddie: okay then well bye

Jake: bye

Eddie went to his penthouse he said hi to Jeffery went up than he sat on his couch then stared to think about Loren and how everybody else who broke them apart then lyrics stared to pop in his head so he went and sat in the piano bench and grab his song and wrote down the lyrics

I can usually drink you right off of my mind
But I miss you tonight.
I can normally push you right out of my heart
But I'm too tired to fight

Yeah the whole thing begins
And I let you sink into my veins
And I feel the pain like it's new
Everything that we were,
Everything that you said,
Everything I did and that I couldn't do
Plays through tonight

Tonight your memory burns like a fire
With every word it grows higher and higher
I can't get over it I just can't put out this love
I just sit in these flames and pray that you'll come back

Close my eyes tightly. Hold on and hope that I'm dreaming
Come wake me up.

Turn the tv up loud just to drown out your voice
But I can't forget
Now I'm all out of ideas
And baby I'm down to my last cigarette

Yeah you're probably asleep
Deep inside of your dreams while I'm sitting here crying and trying to
Sleep
Yeah wherever you are baby now I am sure you've moved on
And aren't thinking twice about me And you tonight

Tonight your memory burns like a fire
With every word it grows higher and higher
I can't get over it I just can't put out this love
I just sit in these flames and pray that you'll come back
Close my eyes tightly. Hold on and hope that I'm dreaming

I know that you're movin' on
I know I should give you up
But I keep hopin' that you'll trip and fall back in love

Cuz I'm feeling anything
Baby this pain is worse than it ever was
I know that you can't hear me but baby I need you to save me tonight

Tonight your memory burns like a fire
With every word it grows higher and higher
I can't get over it I just can't put out this love
I just sit in these flames and pray that you'll come back
Close my eyes tightly. Hold on and hope that I'm dreaming
Come wake me up.
Oh I'm dreaming.
Come wake me up.
Oh, I'm dreaming

then he stared playing and singing what he just wrote then someone came in and Eddie didn't notice until he finish and turn around and was surprise who just heard him singing

Eddie: what are you doing here

person: I came to visit my son

Eddie: so now you care about me

Max: I always cared about you

Eddie: oh really who's the one who took me away from Loren

Max: me but I'm sorry for that

Eddie: sure you are

Max: how can I make it up

Eddie: you can't one reason is because I don't know where she is

Max: I'm sorry

Eddie:(under breath) sure you are

Max: well I guess I'm going

Eddie: well bye

Max open the door and left Eddie went to his room and got ready for bed Max went to his apartment and got a glass of whisky and sat on the couch and got out his phone and called Joe ( I think that his detective name) he came

Max: thank you for coming

Joe: so whats the problem

Max: Eddie he still doesn't want to talk me for what happen

Joe: so what do you want me to do

Max: if you can find Loren Elizabeth Tate

Joe: sure do you have any information of her beside that she dated Eddie

Max: her mom's name is Nora Tate they live in New York I don't know if they move

Joe: anything else

Max: nope

Joe: what about her father

Max: all I know is that his name is Trent

Joe: okay it may take weeks or months or even a year

Max: I don't care I just my son to forgive me

Joe: okay well see you when I get some info

Max: okay and thank you

Joe: I would do anything for my friend

Max and Joe said their good-bye's then Max went out to the balcony then he went in and got ready for bed and fell asleep


Loren: mom can we finish unpacking everything tomorrow im tired and I want to sleep

Nora: sure honey

Loren: okay well goodnight

Nora: goodnight

Loren went to her room and saw unpack boxes on her bed and put then on the floor then look for clothes to sleep then went to go change then fell asleep

Nora was still in the kitchen thinking about what happen two years ago in New York Trent leaving her Loren and Eddie and Max taking him away from her and breaking her girl's heart and now they are here in Tarzana, Los Angeles, CA she went to her room and got ready for bed and fell asleep still wondering if there life will be in their new home not knowing what can happen later


well here's the first chapter of my story hope you guys like it song is by Rascal Flatts and it's called come wake me up