Hey so this is my first fanfic. I hope you enjoy it, please review :D

Darquesse smiled. She could feel his heartbeat. His breath was hot on her neck, his chest raised and fell in a steady rhythm under her hands. His chest mas muscled, he had a six pack, and Darquesse liked it. But she could tell that he was still not sure about what they were doing, fortunately for Darquesse their bodies were so intertwined that pulling away would be difficult for him.

Fletcher suddenly tried to pull away, quickly saying, "Val, I'm sorry but we don't go out any more. This is wrong and I can't do it. We broke up because you cheated on me, remember? You called me saying we had to talk, and now we're shagging each other. It's just not right. I've got to go now Val, sorry." Darquesse was not best pleased, he still thought she was Valkyrie. "Fletcher, I'm Darquesse, not Valkyrie. Valkyrie is gone for now but she will arise again shortly. But for now it's just you and me." Fletcher looked scared but quickly redeemed himself. "I'm not sure I understand. So you are Darquesse but you look like Valkyrie, how?" Darquesse sighed, she was tempted to give Valkyrie her mind back but couldn't yet, she had a plan that she intended to stick to. "I'm part of Valkyrie's subconscious. You don't need to worry about that though. You were enjoying yourself." Fletcher knew he had been enjoying himself, but he still felt bad about it. "So you're basically saying I'm shagging Valkyrie but she doesn't know, does that count as rape?" Darquesse wondered if she should have chosen Caelan, a vampire would have made this more interesting and he would have been more willing. "No, Fletcher this does not count as rape because Valkyrie is still conscious, she knows what's happening. But I'm in control though I could tell you that she's enjoying it too, if that helps."

Once Darquesse knew that she had Fletcher where she wanted him, she let Valkyrie come back.

I'm not really sure what that was. It's also awkward for me to write this because I'm only 13, that's why it's not very long – please review