I haven't been hear for a while but i hope u can forgive me. Feeling in a loving mood when i came back so i wanted to express it. It's difficult to describe who's gonna be together in the beginning but near the end it'll be clear.


A red porcupine was standing in the middle of Tree Park with a purple striped scarf wrapped around her neck. The trees were brown with golden brown leafs and more on the ground. Under the fallen leafs was the light green grass with some parts not growing. The young porcupine was named Flaky, because of the dandruff flakes on her quills. Her reason for being there was her love of Fall. It was her favorite season of the year because of the colors of the leafs. She loved how they fell slowly to the earth from high in the tree. There was also another special feeling she got when it was fall that always happens. Every time she cupped both of her hands, a leaf would land after a few ten seconds. This feeling felt great to her and she loved everything about it. But what she didn't know was she was being watched from above.

"I wonder what's she doing." thought a young raccoon hiding in the trees.

"What's she doing?" his twin brother asked next to him.

The twin raccoon brothers, Shifty, with the Fedora, and Lifty. Both hiding in the trees trying to see what Flaky was doing. Well, not at first. At first they were trying to find someone to rip off or steal but then they spotted the little red porcupine and just stared at her.

"I don't know" Lifty replied, "She's just standing there."

The raccoon brothers have never been interested in

Shifty looked at his brother and shoved him to try to make him fall but he grabbed some branches and got back up.

"What was that for!" he yelled at him angrily for the sudden shove.

"You like her don't you!" he replied back with the same tone.

"Yeah, and!"

"I'm gonna ask her out!"

"What? No your not!" he shoved his brother.

"Yeah I am!" he shoved back.

"I knew her first!" he shoved again

"I saw her first!" he shoved back again.

Suddenly the two started punching, biting, throwing and kicking at each other. Yelling who would ask her first. The brothers fell from the tree and hit the ground pretty heard but continued fighting. Flaky heard something and turned to see no one was there. She kept looking around and started walking towards the noise came from.

"Is someone there?" she asked. No reply. Assuming it was an animal or something, she shrugged and walked away. But behind a tree the two brothers covered each others mouth and hid till she was out of sight.

They put down their hands and sighed simultaneously, "That was close.". They both sat down on the grass and looked at the sky.

"We got a real problem don't we?" Shifty asked Lifty.

"Yep. And money ain't gonna do anything this time." he replied.

Meanwhile, Flaky was walking with a smile on her face and a skip in her step. It felt as if today was going to be a good day.

"Hopefully it stays like this" she thought to herself. The morning was good but what about the rest of the day? Only time could tell her.


Sorry that the intro is so short. Hopefully it started out good. Im trying to complete my other stories again but im havin' difficulties on them. just asking for ideas if u have any. KAYTHXCYA!