I know grammar may not be that great. I did the best I could. I have come back and re-written this story I wrote long ago. I edited it the best I could and changed some of it and I will be updating it. I hope you all enjoy. I tried to capture the characters the best I could, but with my own spin to them.
The Six Golden Tickets
Chapter 1: The Shock
Charlie and Willy Wonka have had been working together over a year now and little did Willy know, Charlie had come up with a surprise for Willy. Charlie from hanging around Willy so much started to pick up some of Willy's traits and ways. You see, one day Charlie thought this would be a good idea at the time, So Charlie had sent out six golden tickets. Now Willy had no idea of Charlie's surprise, until one day…
Willy was sitting in his office. This office was very big. With a big dark chocolate colored desk and a very comfortable office chair sitting at the desk. The desk was located in the center right side of the room near the wall. On this desk was a LCD flat screen monitor. This desk had a special computer tower sized cubby hole on the right side that held a computer that was attached to this LCD flat screen monitor. On the opposite side was four drawers. The office was made of wooden paneling and the floor had a light chocolate colored carpet with white swirls swilling to form a spiral.
Up on the wall he had his Wonka candy bar wrappers from through out the years all hanging up in frames. Against the wall stood a water dispenser. This water dispenser was no ordinary dispenser at all. It held chocolate milk. It had two tabs on it, one for cold chocolate milk, one for hot chocolate. This was filled with one of Mr. Willy Wonka's special stay cold chocolate milk. This milk could stay out of a refrigerator for hours. It would stay cold and never go bad.
On the wall on the facing his desk sat a 62 inch flat screen LCD, HD Wonka TV. This TV was specially designed by Wonka him self. What was so special about this TV is that the remote of this TV had many buttons. One reading, News, One for Cartoons, One for movies already programmed into the TV it's self with a list of every movie you could ever possibly think of. This remote would switch to the channel of your desire with one touch of a button, instead of having to flip through the channels. This TV also could fast forward, rewind and pause shows. It also did not require a cable box, this was already built in the TV.
In between the TV and the desk sat a couch. This couch was very comfortable. This was one of those couches that had four special cushions in it that could recline.
This is where Willy was sitting. He was sitting on the couch in the center of his office and had the remote in his hand and had decided to watch some TV. Willy had meant to hit the button that read Cartoon Network, but instead he had pressed the button by accident that read BBC. Willy had noticed this and went to switch the channel. Just before he had pressed the button for Cartoon Network, the anchor man who had announced what would be on the news that day, said something to catch Willy's attention. Willy watched with a confused look on his face with one eye brow up and one down.
Part of the news….
"Hello This is BBC news reporter Bill Turn." the reporter said and smiled at the camera. The anchor man at the station had replied " Good morning Bill, what do you have for us today."
Bill smiled again and was standing on a street covered with snow by a telephone pole with a flyer on it.
"Well Bob, I am standing here in Switzerland where we had to come to see this our self. Ha-ha" he chuckled and said then turned to look at the advertisement on the pole.
"What is Mr. Wonka up to this time." Bob responded with a look of wonder upon his face.
"Well Bob.. It looks like Mr. Wonka had sent out six golden tickets." Bill replied with a smile.
"Lets have a look at that advertisement Bill." Bob said.
The camera man with Bill had turned the camera to the poster. Willy was now getting a little anxious, but still with the confused look on his face. He sat up to look at the TV closer as the camera was zooming in on the advertisement on the telephone pole. "What's it say! What's it say!" Willy said anxiously at the TV. Finally he was able to read what it had said and it had read…
"Women of the world. I Willy Wonka have sent out six gold ticket's hidden inside my Wonka Bars, for six lucky women to find. There will be a grand prize for the lucky women chosen to receive it. Good Luck!"
Willy's eye's had lit up and he was in shock. He had shut the TV off in slow motion because he was so in shock he was brain storming. Brain storming, trying to figure out what in the world was that he had just seen on TV. Willy knew he didn't send those tickets out and he certainly did not write what was written on that flyer sticking to the pole. Willy then got a hold of him self, but still confused and rushed to his great glass elevator. He had to tell Charlie at once.
Willy had quickly got on the elevator and pressed the button for the candy room. The Candy Room is where Charlie's house now stands.
Charlie's house, thanks to Willy, has had some improvements on it. It no longer slanted. It stood up. It no longer had a hole in the roof and it was a little bigger. Willy had fixed their house for them. With a room for each one of them. A decent sized kitchen, a living room and bathroom. It had also, up to date house hold appliances and a HD TV in the living room. Willy thought this was the least he could do for Charlie and his family, after their little conflict about Charlie not being able to see his family again.
Once the great glass elevator had reached the Candy Room, Willy went to rush out of the elevator and had smacked into the elevator doors.
"Ow" Willy said while rubbing his head and stumbling a little bit. He looked at the door and gave it a evil look like it was the door's fault. Then he reached over to press the button that read Open/Close. Once the door opened he ran directly to Charlie's house yelling "Charlie! Charlie!"
Willy had barged into Charlie's house. Everyone was sitting at the table about to each lunch, accept Charlie's mom who was at the stove cooking. Everyone gasped when the door swung open and all eye's were on Willy. Willy looked directly at Charlie with the same confused look on his face and said " Charlie! You wont believe what I just heard."
Charlie looked confused wondering what Willy was on about this time and said " I don't know." with a short pause "What is it Willy ?"
Willy rushed over to the chair Charlie was sitting in. The kitchen table was a long, wide rectangle and it was in the same place that it was. In the room that the door opened up too but at a small distance so no one would get hit by the door.
Willy got close to Charlie. Willy then grabbed his arm lightly pulling and said "We must go call the authorities."
Charlie looked at him confused, he did not move and asked "Why?"
Willy shifted his eye's to look at Charlie with a look of disgust from what he had just heard on TV and said "We must call the authorities because we need to catch a copy cat ticket making cad!"
Charlie still did not know what Willy was going on about and asked "What do you mean, Willy ?"
Willy shifted his lip and raised his finger to point up in the air and in a huff " Well, Someone thought it would be a good idea to put posters up forging words on it, that I would say. I saw it on the news." Willy said shaking his head up and down "Someone had sent out fake golden tickets. The copy cats!" Willy had said then tugged on Charlie's arm again lightly to get him to come with him.
While doing this Charlie started to giggle a little but did not show it. Willy did not notice this and had said in his normal tone of voice that lead to a higher tone "Come on! We must hurry up and catch the copy cat before it's to late!"
Charlie could not hold it in no more. He looked up at Willy with a big smile upon his face and he burst out laughing. Not in a mean way though. He was laughing at how Willy was acting.
Willy shifted his head back slightly with a confused look on his face and asked "What's so funny?"
Charlie was still laughing and got it under control to a giggle Charlie looked up at Willy and said while giggling "Well, you see, Willy. I sent out those tickets."
Willy's jaw dropped and eye's widened in shock. He had let go of Charlie's arm. He looked at Charlie confused while walking to the opposite side of the table . He was wondering why Charlie did such a thing with out his consent. He plopped down on a chair on the opposite side of the table from Charlie. Willy sat in silence with the same confused look on his face. Once again he was brain storming, wondering, why Charlie did this.
Charlie was still smiling, he had got up to go over by Willy. He put his hand on Willy's shoulder and said "Willy, Are you alright?"
Willy now staring off into space still brain storming. He took a moment to respond. While he was thinking he though maybe Charlie had a good reason for this, that maybe this could be fun to run a tour of the factory once again. A smile appeared on Willy's face, he looked up at Charlie, then his facial expression had changed to a half dazed look and he said "Huh?"
Charlie smiled at him and repeated him self " Willy, Are you alright?"
Willy smiled at Charlie and shook his head yes then said "Oh yeah. I'm alright…. Maybe this could be fun."
Charlie said with a smile on his face "That's the spirit, Willy." He went to walk away from Willy to sit back in his seat.
Willy slanted his lip a little and shifted his eye's to look at Charlie. Charlie was not getting off the hook that easily so Willy quickly, but lightly, grabbed him by the arm and pulled him back saying "Uh…Where do you think you're going mister. Do tell me why on earth did you do a silly little thing like that? Why didn't you ask me first?"
Charlie put his hand to his mouth to giggle he smiled at Willy and said "I wanted to. You know. Surprise you."
Willy smiled, he shifted his head a bit sideways with a big smile on his face and said "Oh! I sure do love surprises." Then Willy looked up at Charlie with the same big smile and said " Well, what's the grand prize?" Willy then changed his smile to a confused look and asked" Why are the tickets for women and not children?"
Charlie put his hand up while shrugging his shoulders with a smile on his face "Well, You see Willy, I sent the tickets out to surprise you, right."
Willy shook his head and said in a excited tone of voice "Right!"
Then Charlie continued "Well, the reason they are for women, is because. I thought you could use a women around."
Willy cut Charlie off he was now confused again and asked in a rush with a smile on his face, shaking his head " Why would I need a silly thing like that?"
Charlie then continued. "Well I mean like a friend. Or you know, girlfriend…."
Willy's eye's lit up and his smile went to a straight face when Charlie had said the word girlfriend.
"So you would be the grand prize, Willy." Charlie had then finished what he was saying.
Willy had let go of Charlie's arm slowly, he now had a semi evil, crazy glare on his face, in disgust to the word Charlie had just said. Willy asked in a low slow disgusted tone "I Need A What!"
Charlie didn't think nothing of it and said with a smile "A girlfriend."
Willy closed his eye's and closed his mouth puffing up his cheeks to fake a gag when Charlie had said the word girlfriend again. Specially now knowing why the tickets were for women to find. He suddenly thought this may not be as fun as he had thought.
Willy shook his head and closed his eyes with all sorts of thoughts running through his mind. His expression on his face now changed to where his mouth was slightly open and his lip was slightly curled up on one side, like a disgusted look. He then said in a snobby kind of way " Uh-No.." he got a hold of him self and firmly said while holding his hand up " I don't need one of those things." He said waving his fingers in the air as if to shoo something away.
Charlie giggled and said "Come on. Don't be to mad. I think you do need one. Don't you ever feel. You know, lonely?"
Willy then closed his mouth and pointed one of his fingers up in the air and scrunched his eye brows down like he was thinking hard of something to say to that. Then he said "Uh, ew! I do not. No Way." He turned to Charlie with a smirk on his face and said "I got you and your family. Now why would I feel lonely?" Willy's tone of voice changed a bit and in a fading sound he said "That's just silly."
Charlie looked at Willy with a smile and said "Well…."
Willy was not listing when Charlie began to speak. No, Willy's face had went blank, he looked dazed. Willy kept staring into space, apparently Willy was having a flash back. In fact Willy did remember him having a girlfriend. A girlfriend that he had in school when he was young.
The Flash back…
(Young Willy has had a crush on this girl Allison in school. This girl he liked very much. Young Willy was very shy, but one day young Willy had got the nerve up to ask this girl out . The girl had said yes to young Willy. He was very surprised and excited. That following evening, after school was out, he could hardly contain him self from infatuation. He ran home from school to tell his father the good news. Young Willy had ran in the house shouting happily "Father! Father! Guess what!"
His father was sitting on a chair in the living room reading a news paper and said "I'm in here, Willy."
Willy quickly walked to the living room and said " Father! Father! Guess what!"
Willy's father held the news paper down and looked at him with a straight face and said "You know, I don't like guessing games, Willy." He tilted his glasses slightly, looked at Willy and said "What?"
Young Willy went over to one side of the chair his father was sitting in and held on to the arm of the chair and said with a big smile on his little face " I have a Girlfriend."
Young Willy's father sighed in disappointment and folded the paper up in his lap. He looked at Willy and said in a low tone of voice " A what?"
Willy walked away from his father and started pacing in enjoyment. He was so overjoyed, he did not pay attention to the look on his father's face or tone of voice and delightfully said " A girlfriend, at school. I asked her and she said yes!"
Willy's father set the paper down next to him on a small end table with a lamp on it by the chair and looked Willy straight in the eye saying " No son of mine is going to have a girlfriend!"
Young Willy kept staring at his father then sunk his head a little and said in a soft tone of voice "But why father?"
Willy's father had a wicked grin come across his face and said "Your far to young for a girlfriend Willy. At your age a girl would ruin your mind. They are nothing but trouble. She would be an interference with your school work."
Young Willy sighed and sunk his head a little lower. It broke his heart to hear this coming from his father and he looked up at his father with a slightly sad look and said "But…but father? Maybe she won't interfere with my school work. I promise she wont."
His father gave him a stern look and said "But why take a chance?"
Willy again said "But father…"
Willy's father had cut him off and said " That's enough, Willy. I said no. Now go on, go do your homework."
Poor young Willy had put his head down in sadness. The sadness didn't last for very long though. He knew how strict his father was, poor Willy had to sneak around to experience some things in life. He decided not to listen to his father and thought he would sneak around to see her.
So he turned around and walked off to his room to do his home work. The next day came and it was time for school. Young Willy got ready and walked to school. But we will continue that later…)
Back to reality…
Willy heard a voice calling his name "Willy?… Willy?" Charlie had said while slightly shaking Willy's shoulder.
Willy moved his head to face Charlie with the dazed look on his face. His mouth was slightly open and he had shut it. Then he slowly turned his head to look around at everyone else looking at him with concern and he said in a low tone of voice " I'm sorry. I was having a flash back." Then he blinked his eye's a few times and snapped out of it. His eye's now lit up. "MmmmNo! I won't allow it. I don't need one. No-Way!" then he forced a irritated smile upon his face and saying in a sarcastic light laugh "Eh-heh-heh-heh.."
Charlie rolled his eye's he shook his head with a smirk on his face and said " Well, I'm sorry Willy. Their coming at the end of this week. Besides. I think you do need one."
When Charlie had said "I think you need one" Willy was shaking his head no quickly. He then smiled and said "I Do not!"
Charlie giggled and smiled saying "I think you do."
Willy closed his eye's and sighed in disgust and said like a child" Do Not! Do Not! Do Not!"
Charlie was laughing a little, but did not want to argue with Willy and asked "What harm can it do?"
Willy shifted his head slightly up away from Charlie with his eye's closed and said " Uh-Ew! What harm can it do!" Then he opened his eye's and with a serious tone of voice said "Women are nothing but trouble!" then he lowered his voice a little and said "That's what."
"Eh-Hem!" Willy heard come from the stove. He looked over to where he heard that sound and saw Charlie's mother there with her eye brow raised with a semi offended look on her face. Willy quickly smiled at her and nervously said "Eh-heh-heh. No offence." He had forgot she was there when he had said that out loud not realizing that he may have offended her.
She took it with a grain of salt, she looked at him and said "I think it's a good idea." then she looked back at to what she was cooking and continued " It just might teach you a lesson about women."
After she had said this Willy quickly shook his head no.
Then she said "It may do you some good."
While she wasn't looking again Willy again quickly shook his head no with a smirk on his face.
Then she turned over what she had in the pan, looked over at Charlie and said "But Charlie, you should have asked Mr. Wonka first. That wasn't very nice."
Charlie didn't see it that way. For he was still young and seen it as him doing Willy a favor. He thought for a moment and looked at his mom nodding saying "Right. Sorry mom. I was only trying to help." Then he looked at Willy and said "Sorry, Willy."
Willy sighed childishly and thought about it for a moment. After a few minutes, Willy rolled his eye's and looked at Charlie with a straight face saying " Fine. I will go through with it. "
Charlie smiled ear to ear when Willy had said this.
Willy had raised his hand and pointed in the air and looked straight ahead of him saying "But. On one condition." then he shifted his eyes to look at Charlie and continued "The grand prize will certainly not be me." Then he stopped to think for a minute. He was trying to think what the new grand prize would be. Then it came to him and he said "It will have to be a life time supply of chocolate or the worlds largest Wonka bar." After saying that he looked up at Charlie with a smirk on his face and said "Kay?"
Charlie smiled and shook his head yes, "Alright." He had said in response.
Willy smiled and said "Oh good."
Charlie finally went back to his seat.
Willy had got up to leave, on his way to the door he turned to look at Charlie and said " Oh Charlie. By the way, I want you to come see me in my office when you get done. There is far much work to be done, so we must not dilly, or dally. I have a new idea for a candy that I would like to get your opinion on and get right to work on it."
Charlie smiled and nodded his head saying " Sure Willy, I'll be there, after lunch."
Willy smirked and turned to go out the door and said in a high tone of voice "Oh good!" Willy waved goodbye to the rest of Charlie's family that were sitting at the table then turned to go out the door and left the house.
Out side in the candy room his smirk went to a disgusted look, like how a child would look while pouting to their self. Willy walked over to the side of the river. He figured he would leave the glass elevator there for Charlie to use. So he looked around and called an oompa loompa by making that sound"Lulah-lulah-lulah"
When he made this sound an oompa loompa came to him and tugged on the bottom of his red overcoat. Willy smiled and bent down to talk to the oompa loompa and said " I want you to bring the boat around. I feel like riding it , kay?"
The oompa loompa nodded and walked off. Not to long after his big pink sea horse boat had arrived to where he was standing. He got on the boat, folded his arms and sighed while looking at Charlie's in disappointment, like a child who was mad over nothing.
End of Chapter 1