Hello everybody! Welcome to the first chapter of my new story, "Brothers" a story about two brothers, Humphrey and Ayden Freeman and there poor single Mother Karen Freeman. A Mother at just the age of 16, with her son at the age 2, an unexpected gift from God will come to her and her son…
Black Screen: Chapter 1 Introduction
Location: Manchester, England
Date: 1995
KARENS POV
Karen is a Caucasian English Woman, has green eyes, with long straight brown hair, usually wears dresses and black or white sandles and is about 5'7
"It is a cold day in Manchester. Grey skies, light rain and I am walking with my Son whose Father left us when I was 16… And my Parents were killed a long time ago when I was 11. With no one to take care of me, I was on my own when I was 12…"
"We start walking down a staircase towards our home surrounded by six office buildings and an abandoned park was our shed-like home is."
"One! Two! Three! Four! Five! Six! Seven! Eight! Stairs!" I say to my son Ayden who counts as we go down eight steps towards the abandoned park now going through an alleyway
"He then runs off to a dumpster"
"Ayden!" I shout
"I then see him looking down at a crying baby on the right side of the dumpster"
"Oh my…"I say
"I look at the crying baby wrapped around a blanket who looks like was born today"
"I pick him up"
"When I raise him high enough he stops crying"
"I start tearing at the sight of him being by a dumpster"
"Humphrey Joseph Freeman is your name…"I say smiling at the baby
"I then bend down for Ayden to see"
"When he bends down, he puts his hand on Humphrey's "
"He's your brother…"I say to Ayden
"Brotha?" Ayden says
"Yes…"I say giggling
Black Screen: Brothers
17 Years Later
Location: A football (Soccer, whatever) field somewhere in Manchester
HUMPHREYS POV
Humphrey is a English Caucasian Adult with long straight black hair, blue eyes, and wears Football and casual appeal mostly and is 5'9
"It is a sunny/cloudy day in Manchester, no rain. About 78 degrees, surrounding me is a maintained Football field, with plenty of Home and Away supporters waving flags and showing banners"
"HUMPHREY! PASS THE BALL!" My brother Ayden shouts at me
Ayden is a English Caucasian Adult at age 20 with long curly hair, green eyes, and wears Football appeal mostly and is 5'11
"I got this brother!" I shout
"I look at my feet dribbling the white and blue Addidas tango 12 ball"
"A defender attacks me by trying to slide tackle, but I tap the ball under his ribs and jumping over his torso getting past him still dribbling the ball"
"I look at the scoreboard that reads FC Manchester Boys v Liverpool Young FC (Football, Soccer teams whatever, are fictional in this story due to copyright. I am not getting my account banned.) 1-1 at the 90th minute"
"Another defender attacks me but stays still in front of me trying to get the ball from my feet"
"I scoop the ball up over his head and I tap his shoulder running past him going after the ball"
"He looks back at me dumbfounded that I did that"
"I get the ball past the defense, and I get in the goalie box and I shoot it right away landing the ball in the right corner of the net"
"The Home supporters go nuts waving flags cheering and screaming"
"I start cheering running after my brother Ayden hugging him along with my other teammates"
"Hey! Dis-obey me like that again and I'll kick your ass!" He says laughing hugging putting our heads together
"What a game!" Our mother shouts running up to us hugging us
"Thank you Mother…"Ayden and I say chuckling
"And a fantastic goalkeeper!" My mom shouts talking about our friend and goalkeeper Henry
"Thanks Ms. Freeman…"Henry says smiling
Henry is a Portuguese/English mix with a dark skin tone, brown eyes, short shaved black hair and wears football appeal most of the time and is 5'11
"I'm so proud of you boys!" Our mother shouts hugging all three of us
"Come on! Let's go home and I'll make you guys something to eat!" My mother says still excited about our game
"Yeah!" All three of us shout
"We all race to Ayden's old 1990 car"
"Still a piece of shit, but whatever…" Our friend Henry says laughing
"Are you seriously going to talk like a monkey in front of our Mom, Henry?" I say laughing
"Like you don't…"Ayden says laughing starting the car
"We start driving off towards our home"
Black Screen: The Freeman home
"We all walk in and head to the living room"
"We all sit on the couch in the middle of the room"
"That was a fantastic finale you put up, Humphrey…" Henry says
"That goal you made too, Ayden" I say
"Yeah, until Matt decided to slide tackle that one guy that was in our goal box and give them a penalty…."Ayden says
"Good thing he was red carded…"Henry says
"Yeah, we don't need that play in the finals..."I say
"But I can't believe we won with ten guys left!" Henry says
"Matt is a midfielder… Me and Ayden play Striker and Midfielder…. One man down doesn't mean anything to us…"I say smiling at Ayden hugging him
"Guys! Your lunch is ready!" Our Mom shouts
"Lets go…" Ayden says
"I see Three Peanut butter and Jelly sandwiches with milk and cookies on the table"
"Man! Your Mom knows how to make good food!" Henry says
"Thank you Henry…"Our Mom says giggling
"About Five minutes into eating, Ayden gets a text message on his phone"
"Oh shit…"He says
"What is it Brother?" I ask
"Unless you want to go and find out… Be my guest…" Ayden says getting up leaving half a sandwich and two cookies
"More for me…"I say getting his plate
AYDENS POV
"I get in my car and I start it up"
"I start driving out of my parking"
Black Screen: One Drive Later
AYDENS POV
"I get out of my car and I put my keys in my back pocket and I take out my switchblade"
"Good you're here…" My boss Johnathan says in front of a jewelry store
"What is it boss?" I ask
"The prick who owns this Jewlery place owes me money, and hasn't gave it to me yet…" He says
"Here, put this on… And go "Negotiate" with him and if he doesn't give you the money… " He says making a neck slice gesture
"I grab the ski mask"
"Alright…"I say
"I walk in with the knife in one hand covering my face so he doesn't see me for now"
"Hello sir, what can I help you with?" He asks me
"I put the ski mask on and I grab my knife really quickly jumping over the counter pushing him to the floor"
"Listen… You owe my boss 11,000 Pounds... Pay up before I fucking kill you…"I say
"DON'T KILL ME!" He shouts crying
"Go to the back, get the money… And I'll leave… If you don't I'll kill you right here…."I say putting the knife to his throat
"Alright!" He shouts
"Good… Now go get it!" I shout
"He walks to the back getting the money"
"I see him grab 11,000 Pounds"
"He gives it to me in a bag"
"You'll live…"I say
"I run out with the money towards my boss in his car"
"How did it go?" he asks as I give him the money
"Better than expected…."I say
"I give him the bag of money"
"And your pay sir…"He says handing me 1100 Pounds
"Thank you, boss." I say grabbing it
"I then hear Police sirens"
"Shit… You better get out of here kid… Give me the ski mask and run!" Johnathan shouts
"I run out of the car towards mine and I get in"
"Where the fuck are my keys?!" I shout
"Oh shit! Please tell me I didn't drop them…"I say to myself
(End Of Chapter 1)
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