Elemental Spinners

Part 1: Enlightenment

Hello everyone this is the first story I ever wrote. This is an original story which was created by me and a friend of mine who remain anonymous until further notice, but until then I hope you enjoy my story.

Disclaimer: Let me say this again. This is my FIRST story. I understand if you would like to give me some helpful criticism, but please don't go out of your way to put down my creative ideas.

Keys:

': Internal thoughts

": Actual speech

Setting:

It is the year 2008 in Okinawa, Japan

Pilot:

Kai and Jidan are fighting. Kai, who manipulates fire, sends wave after wave of heat attacks while Jidan, who reigns over water, swiftly dodges all his rough attacks.

'Damnit! Why can't I hit him?' Kai thinks.

Jidan retaliates with a barrage of water attacks. Kai is unable to dodge the water and is pelted by jidan's attacks.

"Gargarg!!" screams Kai

Jidan then rushes in and hits Kai with a combination of physical and his water attacks.

After being pushed to his limits, Kai uses his powers to heat the surrounding area so that Jidan's water attacks evaporate before they reach the point of contact. Jidan, shocked by the sudden loss of his aquatic powers, ceases his assault.

'What's wrong with my powers?' Jidan wonders. 'Is this his doing?'

Kai then suddenly throws two quick left jabs and a right straight into jidan's face which sends him flying through the air.

"All right!" Kai yells excitedly. "I got him"

Kai, thinking he has won, cools down and the surrounded area regains its former temperature. Then, suddenly, Jidan recovers whilst in the air.

"Don't get cocky!" Jidan yells back.

He then attacks with water in the shape of a serpent. Kai, stunned, is hit with the water at full blast and is pummeled to the ground.

"Aargg!!" Kai exclaims in pain.

Jidan confidently approaches Kai.

"Idiot! Did you really think that someone with skills as pitiful as yours would be able to stand up against someone like me?" Jidan questions.

"Well…I had to tr-" Kai responded.

Jidan, ignoring Kai's response, says, "And not only that, it seems to me that you have very little control over that pathetic waste of energy you call a power."

"Well…my powers have only been active for two days, but I think tha-" responds Kai.

"Two days?!" Jidan interrupts. "No wonder you were no match for me. You're nothing but an amateur!"

"Well…" Kai starts again, "I wouldn't necessarily call me an amat-"

"Is making excuses your only proficient skill?" Jidan asks.

"Wow" says an astounded Kai. "You're a jerk."

Jidan twitches in anger, 'He sure has a way of pissing me off,' he says to himself. Jidan quickly regains his composure and then responds, "No matter, it will all be over soon….and seeing as that your death is eminent, I will show you the true depth of my powers.

Suddenly, the surrounding area becomes colder.

"What the hell!?" yells Kai. 'What is with this sudden drop in temperature?' Kai begins to shiver. 'Its like my insides are freezing!' 'What is this feeling?'

Jidan smirks, "Hmp, don't you get it?" he taunts. "Not only do I control water……..I also…..command the air"

"Shit!" Kai exclaims

Jidan laughs maniacally. Jidan then uses his abilities to form three dozen ice spears. "Time to die!!" yells Jidan.

'No….this is impossible!' Kai thought. 'How can he…no…How can anyone reign over more than one element?' 'I must know….I WILL KNOW!!'

Jidan launches his attack.

'Even though his powers are not refined, he possesses the highest amount of potential I've ever seen in a spinner.' Jidan thinks to himself. 'If he is allowed to mature he could be a threat, please forgive me…..ancestors.'

Jidan's attack is headed toward Jidan when suddenly……….

END OF CHAPTER

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