Hello! I am writing this whole story with my friend, over email. As you can guess, that is pretty hard! So i will be slow uploading all of the stories, sorry about that! Hope you like it! R&R!
Star jerked back, loosing part of her ear that way. She was one of the three poor tribe cats that were forced to face the menacing Sharptooth, the giant cat that was terrorizing Stars tribe for seasons.
All of a sudden, there was a heavy object on her back, pinning her down. She hissed and then started to gasp for air as a huge claw unsheathed paw clasped around her throat. The force flipped her around.
The dark figure had a smirk on his face, and he was panting hard in Star's face. "Hello little kitty." He spat, then used his longest claw on his empty paw to make a gash around her right eye, letting the stream of blood blind her in that eye. "Now, what is a little kitty like you doing out here with these weak toms. Didn't you hear?" He slashed at her ear, cutting off most of it. His voice was mocking, and full of fun and her pain and fear.
Star tried to slash back, but she could not get her claws to hit their mark. She was in a puddle of blood, and she could smell strong fear scent, not all hers. She turned her head, squinting her eyes. She could barely breathe non-no-less-talk. She tried to find the other two cats from her tribe that were also forced to come with her, but she could not see either of them. She then closed her eyes, loosing air.
All of a sudden Sharptooth just sighed and leaned closer to Star. "Oh such a pretty kitty. I already have a nice plump meal. I guess I can spare you, but not without a little thing to remember me by." He hissed in her ear, then slashed her flank, then cut off her right ear.
Star let out a hiss of pain, but then let out a short sigh of relief as Sharptooth jumped off and then slinked over to an object. Star struggled to sit up, but couldn't manage to. She turned her bloody head to see what he was moving to. She then gasped and had to look away in pain and sadness.
Sharptooth went over to two limp bodies that where blood covered. He smirked over to Star, and then grabbed the two cat's scruffs. Right before he was out of sight, he let go of the scruffs. "Oh, and fragile kitty? Don't let me find you again, or you will be my meal!" He hissed, grabbed the cats again, and then slinked off into the shadows, leaving a trail of blood.
Star opened her eyes and looked to the sky. "I'm sorry, Tribe of Endless Hunting. I have failed you, and my tribe, Whisper Tribe. I have let Sharptooth take the lives of Fang of a tiger, and…" She trailed off. "And my love, Night with no moon." She flung her head up and started to mourn.
Suddenly, the sky was filled with a flash of lightning, and then there was a boom of thunder. Then the sky opened up and it started to rain hard, harder than it had in moons.
Star was crying hard still, but she was in the valley below the huge mountain. The water started to gather around her. The rain thankfully washed all the blood away from her, taking the physical memories of the battle away, but it was not all good. The ground around Star was beginning to flood, and the water was pushing all sorts of bad minerals into her open wounds. She winced, but managed to get to her paws.
She managed to get to the mountain, but she couldn't walk up it. She found a round and struggled to get up it, but did. She was full of pain, and bleeding hard. She soon passed out, crying and sopping wet from the rain, and covered in cuts and blood.