Please, PLEASE, PLEASE Review. This is only my second Fanfic attempt, and first at fluff, so I want to know if I'm any good at the fluffier angle.
Disclaimer: I do not own anything of or relating to The Looking Glass Wars, by the wonderful author Frank Beddor.
Before-hand:
The wedding had been long, drawn-out, and elaborate. But what would you expect for the queen of Wonderland? Usually a caterpillar would have been the one doing the "pronouncing of husband and wife", but since the caterpillars had turned in to butterflies, and left, they had to come up with a replacement. The replacement happened to be none other than the great, wise, older than hell albino himself: Bibwit Heart.
He was very proud as he went through the proceeding of the marriage. The original lines for the marriage of royalty had never been written down, due to the fact that only caterpillars were to speak them, but Bibwit had been to enough royal weddings in his time to know them by heart.
The reception had been even longer. It lasted for the annual 3 days, giving every one in Wonderland time to celebrate the marriage. But afterwards, the queen and recently proclaimed king had not been able to go on a honeymoon. Even with all the joy almost floating in the Wonderland air, the queendom had still held the need to be looked over. And although any number of people could manage, some such being Bibwit, General Doppelganger, and others, none of them were the queen, and only she could do it. She had to stay.
The first night alone:
After the three days of constant celebration, The newly wed couple retired to the queen's chambers. They shut the door behind them and locked it.
"You know, I had tried to propose to you multiple times before you did to me," the line was from Dodge's mouth, at a just barely audible whisper.
They walked towards the bed. Once there, they got on it and sat next to each other, Alyss' head resting on Dodge's shoulder.
" I know, I could sense it every time, but in the end, I couldn't wait any longer, and I had to do it. Other wise I would have allowed you to do it, but I was afraid that if I waited till you found the opportune moment… it would be even harder to make it happen." She replied back, in the same tone. " But either way, we're here now."
She looked up at him, has he looked down at here. Although they both were year older mentally, they were still young physically. Their hormones would still be the same. Only now they didn't have to worry about holding back; they were married and they knew they were ready.
She pulled herself up, and he tilted his head down, reaching a middle point, their lips met. The kiss started out as a gentle one, but grew more and more frenzied as they got into it.
They were now standing on their knees on the bed. Alyss pulled her hands out of Dodge's hair, and down to his neck, were she started to unbutton the neck of the coat. He brought his hands up to the breast of her dress, were he would have to untie the decorative corset that was part of the dress for that night's party.
Alyss then realized that Dodge would have a very hard time doing that, so she stopped on his shirt and brought her hands to her dress, were she proceeded to untie the lace that went in X's to her waist. The work was hard, and she often had to break the kissing to look down and see what she couldn't feel. Dodge was now making fine progress with his own cloths and were already to his undershirt and pants. They both got off the bed then. Dodge to take his pants off, and Alyss, who was done with the corset and skirt and now working on her last layer of clothing, a simple white dress that also served as a nightgown. They got back on the bed, Dodge in his boxers, and Alyss in her night dress. They once again started kissing, now backing up to the pillows.
Once there, Alyss rested her head on them, and Dodge crawled over her so that he was on top of her, but not putting any pressure on her.
They both made a silent agreement that that was all they need to do for tonight, for neither of them were ready to go all the way. The would keep the cloths they had on, on.
When they woke up the next morning, Alyss was encircled in Dodge's arms, and they were curving around each other, with his back against her front. She smilled and put her arm on top of the one around her waist. The person who's arm that was was already awake, for he then leaned his head from being behind hers to kiss her shoulder.
"Mmm," Alyss rolled over so that she was facing Dodge, and kissed him on the lips. He groaned.
"I wish we could go on a honeymoon," he said against her lips,"then we could stay like this in bed all day. But we can't so we still have to get up, and we only have the nights to do anything. And, we still have to sleep."
"Ya, but you only have to look over the palace guards, I have to look over an entire queendom."
"True, but you don't have to make sure that all the gaurds are loyal to you, so that none of then would ever think of hurting the love of your life." With this she smiled against his lips.
"Well, we better get up." Alyss was reluctant, but knew that she still needed to work, and that she couldn't let even the love of her life stop her from running the queendom.
Like I said before, I am begging you to review. I need to know weather or not I suck? Or, if you want, you can just make up some song about a hillbilly and his dog (though dogs are awesome) as your review if you would like. I don't care. JUST REVIEW!