Continuing from Series 6, A good man goes to war (episode 7) Please Review! I like hearing ideas and tips on how to make my writing better!
The Tardis engines sprang to life as the Doctor pulled the lever. Of course the doctor had left the brakes on as usual. The tardis came to a noisy landing and the doctor rushed outside to find himself on top of a sand dune. He turned around to check out the surroundings and came face to face with a huge yellow wall of bricks. "Egypt! Year 2040, perfect!"
The Doctor came do an archaeology site near the pyramid. "Excuse me sir, this is a private site, may I see some ID" said a guard.
"Err, yes of course" He pulled out his psychic paper "I'm Dr. John Smith from the Archaeological Research Centre"
"Ah, Doctor Smith welcome, please wait a moment"
The guard went into a tent. "Madame, Dr. Smith from the ARC is here"
"Dr. Smith? I haven't been expecting anyone from the ARC, well get Jack to show him round quickly we have to get ready" said the woman.
The Doctor was looking at some of the artefacts on a table next to the tent and was pointing out what each of them was from to a young archaeologist, then he noticed a little girl was looking at him. "Hello" he said to her but she just ran away. He shrugged his shoulders and looked back at the table. Suddenly he came across something. It was a round, flat object with writing on it. The doctor picked it up. "This is very interesting, this writing is the people of the Gamma Forest's language" But before he could read it properly a man came running up to him "You must be Dr. Smith, I'm Jack I suppose you want a tour of the camp"
"Ah, yes excellent!" The Doctor slipped the object into his pocket and followed the man.
"This is our main dig site, we are making good progress at the moment"
"May I ask, what are you looking for?"
"I'm sorry I can't tell you, it's classified information" replied Jack.
"But you're archaeologists! What could be so important that you're not allowed to tell anyone?" Jack just looked at the doctor and carried on walking.
"Here is the section for our trainees" said Jack as they reached another smaller dig site and 3 large tents.
"Jack, can you come over here for a minute?" said a young woman in the dig site.
"Ok, hold on. I'll be back later Dr. Smith, feel free to look around a bit more" Jack said as he turned and went to speak to the woman.
The Doctor watched as the trainee's in the smaller dig site were practicing identifying objects with the help of a rather plump looking man. The Doctor turned around as he heard someone come out of one of the tents. It was the girl who was looking at him earlier. She seemed to be in her early teens and the doctor wondered what she was doing here because she was obviously too young to be a trainee. She seemed familiar to him but he couldn't work out where he might have seen her before. When she saw him the girl froze at the door and went back into the tent. The Doctor decided to follow her.