I'm new at writing so please let me know honestly what you think.

Clary pov

I love the feeling of wind in my hair. I don't get to feel it very often. I sigh and look out at my view and its beautiful. I see a open valley laying about 50 feet below me. I can feel the gentle spray of water on my face as the wind makes the water change course. I know I need to go back but not yet. I hear if you look out as the sun kisses the earth you can see a flash of light. now I know this is just an old wives talk but I still watch for it because its something I use to do with my mother. a tear escapes from my eyes and travels down my already wet face as I think of her. I know it has been 2 years since she left us, left me but it still hurts. during this time my father has changed. he has become more anger and lashes out at me because he believes I look like her and im the reason she died. I use to think I was the reason she died but I have heard rumors that a neighboring kingdom had revenge on my father. I have had many attempts on my life so I am trained by the general for my protection. my father has tried to hire many gaurds to watch over me, but I end up giving them the slip and they get fired (sorry not sorry). As I take one last look out toward the sun kissing the earth I see no flash so I start heading home. I turn Shakespeare. Shakespeare is my horse. I have many horses back home but I sort of founD Shakespeare and he lives in the wild but he lets me ride him. he is a dapple grey with a white mane and tail with a sort of black ombre. he is my pride and joy, even if no one knows about him. as the castle enters my vision, I sigh it may look like a dairy tale but it's my prison. As I slowly enter the gloomly place I hear foot steps I already know who it is before they round the cornor. I lean against the wall and watch " hey there" I smile sweetly to Luke and he looks furious. " where have you been young lady" " oh you know here and there" " I don't have time for this right now I have a meeting, now go to your room!" I stalk away and I y'all haven't realized it yet that was my father. King Lucas the third. Yes, I am the princes. Princess Clary Sophia greymark the first. I'm not your average princess, you see I hate who I am. I wish I was just some peasant who lived in town and could do what I want. As I entered my room I jump straight into my bed. I start to dose off and then there is a knock on the door and I mutter a simple come in and my father enters. He looks drained but I don't say anything about it. You see my father has a bad heart, but no one is suppose to know but I over heard his doctor talking and we'll now I know. He comes and sits on the edge of my bed and rubs his face and sighs " clary you know I love you right" "of course I know that" "ok, keep that in mind when I tell you what I'm about to tell you ok" I'm suddenly really confused and slightly scared "I know that you know I'm very ill but I need you to...

Im going to leave you guys hanging... I want to hear your feedback good and bad. Like I said I'm new I need to hear what you think! What do you guys think Luke is going to ask clary?