Hello and welcome to the Remake of Maelstrom Dragon

I Know a lot of you are hoping for another chapter, but I want to remake this story so that it will come out more refined. so enjoy

"Talking"

'Thinking'

Location
Technique/jutsu

Chapter 1

Hidden leaf Village 7 now almost 8 years after the nine-tails attack

Here in the Hidden Leaf Village is where our story begins. More specifically 7 almost 8 years after the Fourth Hokage Minato Namikaze with help from his wife Kushina Uzumaki had sealed away the Kyuubi within his two children. The Yin-half sealed within Mito Uzumaki Namikaze and the Yang-half sealed within Narumi Uzumaki Namikaze.

The two 'Princesses' or 'Saviors' as proclaimed by most of the civilian population for being said containers not that they knew, but mainly by word of the Fourth saying they are heroes and had a great 'responsibility' and had 'influenced' the outcome that gave him and his wife a chance to defeat the Nine-Tailed Fox.

Why tell you this? Well, this does play a huge part in this story and while that family does have a part in this story, but the main player in this story is none other than the twins eldest brother Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze. He is called The Family's Failure, The disappointment, and what some of the villagers call him The Demon Brat.

Another title he has that rarely anyone knows is The Neglected Child.

You see Naruto ever since he was five years old has been neglected by his family, but the truth is that it started very subtle by mainly focusing on his sisters a bit more when they were two years old and started to grow as the years went by. As the years came and left they would forget he's around sometimes, ignore him by saying they were busy, but when his sisters go and bother them they suddenly have time. Then it went to forgetting to call him down to dinner and having the birthday's only focus on his sisters.

It only got worse when a bit after their sixth birthday Minato and Kushina said they were going to start Mito and Narumi's training. When Naruto asked if he too can start training, but just responded with "Sorry Naruto, but your sister's need it more at the moment" They said. Naruto nodded sadly and watched as they began their training. as time passed his sisters started to show off their training to Naruto calling him names and saying he will never be strong and remain weak.

It seems that his parents had dedicated more and more time to the two sisters and so have the godparents Jiraiya and Tsunade.

His problems with the civilians had gotten worse as well. At first, they just glared at him and called him a demon when he is not around his parents and now they tend to throw things at him and sometimes get their kids who are older than him to pick and beat him up.

Namikaze Uzumaki estate (some time afternoon)

Naruto a blonde boy with sky blue eyes and currently is covered in bruises and a few inches deep Kuni cuts. The bruises are from the bullies while the cuts are from a fresh genin who was with them. Said genin was actually showing off a Kuni he took from his father and when they saw Naruto….well you can guess the rest.

Naruto was just at the steps when he heard an angry irritated female voice "Naruto!" He sighed and turned around to see his mother Kushina Uzumaki Namikaze. She had red hair fair skin and violet eyes "You got into another fight again did you!" Kushina exclaimed. "No, they just attacked me!" Naruto said trying to defend himself, but kushina wasn't buying it. "Don't you dare lie to me! For that your not going to attend your sister's birthday tomorrow!" Kushina said with anger.

Right after that Naruto felt something that he was trying to keep inside explode out "So you forgotten it is also my birthday AGAIN!" Right after he said that he felt a stinging pain in his cheek. Naruto looked up to see his mother had slapped him with anger filled eyes "Don't you dare say that. It's not just about you, but Mito and Narumi's as well so selfish and as punishment, you will spend the rest of the day and tomorrow in your room!" Kushina said not believing what her own son just said.

Kushina then went and walked back to get dinner ready for the family. Naruto looks away from her and continued to go up the stairs and to his room while trying to hold back the tears that threatened to spill out his eyes. Naruto had just made it to his room and was about to open his door when he heard a familiar voice in the hallway "Well look Mito it's our worthless brother. I thought he would finally decide to leave this house and live on the street already" The voice came from Naruto's youngest sister Narumi. Narumi had their mothers face with blue eyes and red hair with yellow at the bottom making it look like it's on fire.

"Well, you have to remember that even if he left it wouldn't change anything. Except he would finally accept that he nothing of a lowlife that shouldn't be an alive right big brother" That came from the middle child of the triplets Mito who had looks from both of their parents with violet and had similar hair color like Narumi except reversed.

Both of them also wear identical clothes mainly battle kimonos with combat shorts and sandals. How people can tell them apart is mainly that they like to have the same colors as each other except they have to colors reversed. "If you two are done I'll be on my way," Naruto said passing his sisters who just shrugged and walk downstairs.

Naruto's room

Naruto entered his room which looked very barren and spartan. The only things in his room were his plain looking bed, an old wooden desk, and a small bookshelf with a few books he could get his hands on. Naruto was about to walk to his bed when he suddenly feels a jolt of pain and his vision started to blur 'What's going on?' he thought right before he fell to the ground.

Naruto with his remaining strength to crawl on his bedroom floor in an attempt to try and stay awake. He made it all the way to his bed when his strength ran out 'damn it' Naruto thought. As his vision started to become consumed by darkness he though one thing 'Why does this all have to happen to me?' and then he finally let unconsciousness take him.

Dreamscape (The place where Spyro went to when he passes out in eternal night. if I got the name wrong please tell me)

Naruto returns to consciousness and began to get up and immediately began to notice that he was on a giant blue rock with blue glowing crystals and then quickly ran to the edge to see that the rock he was on was in the middle of literal nowhere. "It's good to finally meet you young Naruto" a voice spoke behind him. Naruto turns around and sees something he never expected to see. A FREAKING DRAGON WAS RIGHT IN FRONT OF HIM. Being almost eight years old our young blond did the only thing that seemed reasonable at the time. He went and jumped off the large rocky platform into the dark nothing.

The dragon who just sat there turned around and looked up to see Naruto fall from the pitch black sky and hit the ground with a thud. Naruto then looked up and saw the dragon again and then ran to jump off the edge again, The Dragon stood there looking at him continually do the same thing time and time again 'This is going to take a while' The Dragon thought.

LATER

After Naruto had calmed down and listened to the dragon who finally had enough and stopped him from jumping off the floating dock for the 10th time that he was just here to talk to him and offer him something. Naruto at first thought this was a dream and then proceed to pinch/hit himself to wake himself up. In the end, it didn't work and then had finally taken in the dragon's appearance. The Dragon had dark blue scales with a lighter blue underbelly. His tail end looked to be a part of a sword that looked like it was a shape of a blade and said blade was made to look like fire. His horns looked like they were pointing up backward a bit and then stops then the rest go up at an upward angle and his eyes while light blue held a great amount of wisdom and experience. His wings looked to be a dark blue, while the membrane was a light blue.

One thing that Naruto was quick to question was why he wears the dark almost black blue cloak with that book on his side. The Dragon who introduced himself as Ignitus had said because he can, which aggravated Naruto. Ignitus had decided to get to the reason to why he had brought Naruto here and the offer "Naruto I brought you here to give you an offer, but before I tell you I must tell you that the only reason why I am talking to you now instead of another is because we could only have this conversation if you were close to dying more specifically your body" Ignitus said.

After Naruto heard that he immediately felt a huge lump appear in his stomach "No no no no no" Naruto said while backing away a bit "You're lying I'm not dying I'm NOT!" Naruto yelled looking an Ignitus clearly seeing no deceit in his eyes and then broke down on his knees crying. Ignitus then looked sadly at Naruto and put his wing on his back as a way to comfort him and then told him why his body is dying "Naruto do you remember earlier that you were attacked by a group of children and a newly graduated genin" Ignitus asked Naruto who looked at him with tears in his eyes.

"Yes, but what does that have to do with it?" Naruto asked Ignitus who closed his eyes and then opened them again "That genie wasn't really a genin. I know you won't understand now, but I will tell you the full truth when you're older, but now I will ask you this" Ignitus said getting Naruto interested in what he has to say next.

"Naruto how would you like to have a new life. A life far from the Elemental Nations where you could live with a real family and become a dragon like me" Ignitus said causing Naruto's eyes to become wide. Naruto looked down on the ground and began to think back to his life in the hidden leaf. How his family had neglected him, how the villagers and some shinobi hated/despised and/or saw him as nothing, but a disappointment, and he didn't even know if anyone would actually miss him when he's gone.

Naruto looked up at Ignitus "Yes please" he said causing Ignitus to smile. "Wait," Naruto said causing Ignitus to raise an eyebrow(?) "How will you turn me into a dragon and isn't their poison in my body. Won't I just wind up dying again?" Naruto asked getting a chuckle out of Ignitus. "Naruto I will use your current body to help develop your dragon one. Not only will this help speed the creation of your dragon body, but also adapt more quickly to the body since it was created from your previous one and I'll be sure to remove the poison from so it doesn't weaken or kill you" Ignitus explained to Naruto who was a bit confused but understood a bit of what he said.

"Alright Naruto it will take a bit to make your new body so you will be asleep, but when you wake up you will be in your new home and body," Ignitus said causing Naruto to be a little bit worried hoping that this all wasn't really a dream or some genjutsu. A bright light came and then Naruto disappeared leaving Ignitus "Time to get to work" Ignitus said to himself as he to then disappeared in a bright light.

Chapter End

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