hello! this is bella. first off i would like to say that this is my first! fan-fic. soooo any constructive critisim would be wonderful! if you loved it tell me why. if you hated it tell me why! the only way i can get better is by relizing my mistakes.
this story kinda got started randomly. i watched ohshc a long time ago and the other day i saw a music video for it and once again was reminded of my complete adoration for the hitachiin twins! so that is what this fic is based on. it is still in the planning stages so any ideas of how to continue the story would be great! i would love to get other's ideas.
soooo with no further delay onto my first fanfiction!
I ran quickly through the hall ways of Ouran high school. I cursed silently under my breath as I twisted and turned around students in the hall way. As I made my way out of the school and across the vast grounds I collided with someone. They let out a surprised cry and tumbled to the ground with me landing on top. I quickly pushed myself off of the victim muttering apologies to the dazed boy while gathering my scattered books.
"haruhi are you ok?" for the first time I looked at who I had collided with. Haruhi fujioka. Freshman like myself and like myself he had the same home room.
"yea I'm fine" he took the hand offered to him and stood up brushing himself off. I looked to see the hitachiin twins looking at me. They seemed to be calculating and measuring my every move.
"sorry again" I gave a quick bow and hurried back into my run quickly exiting the gates of the school. 3 pairs of eyes followed my departure.
"ms. Reyna!" I snapped my head off my desk and out of my light slumber and my face turned a slight pink as snickers and giggles echoed around the class.
"gomen" I muttered averting my gaze from the stares I was receiving. He just hmphed and continued with the lecture leaving me back in my bored tired state. Suddenly a small wad of paper landed on my desk. I looked up into the smiling face of Haruhi who sat two seats to the left and one row ahead of myself. I carefully unfolded the note.
Tired?
I took my own pen and scribbled in my script a reply.
Yea. I was up studying. Sorry again for yesterday.
Checking to make sure that the teacher was pre occupied I sent the note in a crumbled ball back over to Haruhi. I was mystified by the sudden confrontation. I was some what of a loner in this super rich school. For among these pedicure and polished teens I was well normal. I was not rich, in fact I couldn't even afford the uniform. So his sudden interest led me to only one conclusion. He was mad about yesterday.
Then the note landed once again on my desk. I pulled it into my lap and read over it's contents.
Me too. Don't worry about it. I was wondering if you would like to join me at lunch today?
Ok. Sorry again. I would love to/J
I sent the note back over and a thousand thoughts ran through my mind. The only conclusion I could come up with was that he had some kind of revenge planned at lunch. But what else could I have said? No I would rather be anti-social and eat on my own in a corner like every other day? Bah! Class seemed to pass by all to quickly and soon the exit that led into the rest of the school had a stream of students heading towards their next classes.
"Reyna-Chan!" my hopes of sneaking away failed when Haruhi called my retreating figure. I turned away and faced the three host's. the twins stood on either side of Haruhi with similar smirks on their faces.
"please call me Ayden" I smiled as he made his way to my side the twins trailing behind. He nodded. We made our way to the lunch room in silence. I wondered if the twins had followed us out of the room but was too nervous to check behind me. When we finally made it to the cafeteria I took a seat across from Haruhi.
The seats on either side of me were then occupied as the twins sat down. A slight panic went off in my head as I tried to uncover the plot.
"hey Rayna-chan why don't you wear the school uniform." Hikaru… or was it Karou? Gestured to my out fit as he spoke. I looked down at my clothes taking them in for the first time today. I wore a simple pair of dark gray form fitting jeans with a set of black converse. A white t-shirt adorned my top with a red and black plaid tie circling loosely around my neck. Random buttons and patches adorned my shirt and a pair of black fingerless gloves sat on my hands which were currently removing a lunch from my messenger bag.
"ummm because I can't afford the uniform" I tried to keep my eyes on my food as I placed a bite in my mouth not really tasting the carefully prepared meal.
"are you scholar ship student?" Haruhi asked. I nodded swallowing the lump of food in my mouth.
"something like that" I placed another helping of lunch in my mouth. I was slowly starting to relax and my paranoia was subsiding. Silence fell over the table for a few moments. I cleared my throat bucking up enough courage to ask the question that was gnawing at me.
"ano.. I don't mean to sound rude but, Why did you invite me for lunch?" I inquired. Haruhi looked surprised at my inquiry but then surprise fell away to a sincere smile.
"well I just figured you were lonely eating by yourself" my curiosity satisfied I returned his smile.
"so. Which one is which?" I asked addressing the twins. They looked to each other then grinned down at me standing up.
"well how about a round of…"
"…which one is Hikaru-kun game!" Haruhi let out a sigh at the two who now posed similarly.
"wait. You haven't told me truthfully yet who is who. Whenever you are in front of the class you switch. So until you tell me who is who I can't play your game." the two blinked dumb founded at my outburst. Before leaning in at the same time to study me as they spoke.
"interesting…"
"…yes I don't think any one has ever noticed our switches before…" one stood up
"I am Karou." the other twin followed suit.
"and I am Hikaru" both gave a smirk but Hikaru's looked different somehow. The two then spun around in circles for a while mixing up their position. Then they stopped at grinned at me
"ok!" they chorused. I studied them for a moment. Then pointed to the twin on the right.
"you're Hikaru-kun." the two's smiled faded and they stared at me for a moment before Hikaru grinned.
"wrong! Don't feel bad though only Haruhi can tell us apart" I shook my head.
"No I'm not. Your Hikaru" I stated indignantly. Haruhi chuckled.
"she got you guys" he stated and I grinned at my triumph the two pouted.
"lucky guess" they chorused.
"don't feel bad." I quoted smiling. "I have a set of twins back home so I've had years of practice" they looked interested in the mention of home. They returned to their seats on either side of me.
"really…"
"…your brothers?" they asked. I hesitated in answering before nodding my head slowly
"yea something like that" Haruhi cocked his head to the side.
"Something like that?" he asked.
"were not blood related" I explained. I had decided to leave out a big part but that was ok. Haruhi seemed content to leave it at that. And moved onto the subject of what my scholar ship was for.
"the art's" I replied simply.
"really do you draw?" He inquired. I took a moment to chew and swallow
another bit of my lunch.
"a little. More so though I am into the musical side of the arts."
"do you play an instrument?"
"many. Piano, guitar, and my voice" I beamed as a wave of accomplishment washed over me.
"sing" Karou commanded from my right. A slight tint made it's way onto my cheeks.
"I'd rather not" I admitted once again turning my gaze back to my half devoured food.
Slender fingers wrapped around my chin and, gently turned my face and I was then greeted with Hikaru's golden cat like eyes.
"awe come on Aiden-chan" he cooed and I found it hard to even breath.
"knock it off you two!" Haruhi commanded. I was released from his gaze as Hikaru turned his head to the annoyed Haruhi but, my face was still held firmly in his grasp.
"awww Haruhi-kun…"
"…you're no fun" finally my chin was released and I quickly bowed my blushing face. And with that I was saved from certain embarrassment as the bells signaling the end of lunch ended and I was sent sprinting back to class so as to escape the twins gaze.
I was the first one back to class. I suspected the reason being it was free period for the next hour so everyone would take their sweet time. I set my bag down on my table and laid my head on it using it as a pillow. The day was only half way over and already I had received more then I can handle.
and with that i shall end chapter one of In A World So Lonely. Please let me know what you think! Any and all thoughts will be held at the highest respect!