Authors note: okay guys new account from old one; BulbaBabex and I'm discontinuing my old story as I couldn't get past my writers block ;( sorry x might continue it with this account if I can get past it though x this is a one off x

Disclaimer: I don't own pokemon (sadly ) blah blah blah

Hot Shivers:

My body was shaking, shivering violently. Heat shot through me, power filling my heart. I felt ready to fight anyone, I felt so good I would stand up to Arceus without a second thought! I felt my legs growing longer and my body and tail going more thin and slender. My warm fur that protected my neck and chest vanished; I could feel the cold wind blowing at me... it felt nice I welcomed it. I craved it! I shook my head and watched in amazement and two long eye-like things dangled back and forth beside my head.

I lifted my paw off the ground and stared at it, the two shades of blue connecting and coating my new body, I felt like I was wearing snow boots. I whipped my tail side to side and twitched my ears wondering if I still my super-sonic hearing. The glow from my body was dying down and I marvelled at my new body, I was a Glaceon!

I felt amazing! I tried walking slowly at first getting used to my new legs, I felt so majestic, so graceful. I started to run trying to see if I still had my quick attack, I did. I zipped through the trees, dodging them as snow glistened through the light landing lightly around me. I must have fallen asleep next to the famous ice rock.

I'm glad I did, ever since I was a pup I had wanted to become the Ice version of my kind, my brothers wanted to become a Jolteon and Flareon, always pretending they could shoot electric bolts and breath fire. My younger sister always admired the water evolution of our kind; Vaporeon. She loved the way my mother could melt into the water and disappear and reappear further away. Not one of us ever wanted to become an Espeon or Umbreon as our dad (an Umbreon) abandoned my mother as soon as she found she was pregnant with us and my youngest sister, barley 3 moons, evolved into the physic type, Espeon but a trainer came along and stole her away and since we all agreed to evolve into different types, we felt that we were betraying her memory if we evolved into her chosen evolution.

I decided to check out the new moves I learnt I tried out a move called Ice Wind and felt snow and the cool breeze swirling around me in a vortex of white. I concentrated and threw all my power at a large oak tree, smoke blasted everywhere upon impact and when it cleared the oak had a large round whole through the middle. Before I evolved I was quite high levelled for my age, around level 40.

I tried thinking of a Glaceon's moveset and remembered that I could learn a new ice move called Ice fang, after a few attempts I managed to bit and huge smouldering chunk out of a nearby rock.

I really liked my new moveset; Ice Fang, Ice Wind, Quick Attack and Bite. I spent the next ten minutes practising my new moves. When I decided to move on I left a destruction zone of ripped, knocked down trees in my wake. My glow had now died, yet the heat of my new power still tingled my heart. I lifted my head and started zipping through the trees once more, running towards the cries ahead; the cries of power. I felt strong and I was ready to battle and I was gonna win!

Please review! It's my first complete fanfic. Leave a note if you want me to do a new fanfiction on the evolution of a pokemon of your choice, plus leave their old and new moves you want them to learn xxx

That's all from me

Dark Umbreon x

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