TheFallenSoldier: Hi guys! First chapter into a story I'll possibly update!
Bardock: Ya right...
TheFallenSoldier: Wait, when did I invite you?
Bardock: Never. I just flew here.
TheFallenSoldier: Then how do you know me?
Bardock: *shrugs*
TheFallenSoldier: Ok...
Bardock: So are you going to start the story of what?
TheFallenSoldier: Oh, ya. Without further interruptions... Lets get on with the story!
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The Scanner quickly engulfed the saiyan in a blue aura, which fed off his energy readings. He did his very best to stand still, still rushed from the excitement that took place only an hour ago. His hair was the very last part to be scanned before processed; as his hair dabbles with triangular like shapes running around it, running away from the aura which in thought of their demise. As the scanner did its final test through, it signaled for the saiyan to exit the monster machine. As he did, he processed a weak smile, and faced the projecting screen with his face on it.
This is set exactly 10 years before the destruction of Planet Vegeta, 8 years after the conquer of the planet. But even in that time the planet boomed with life and death, both consuming each other endlessly. And where Bardock is at is Luna University, taking his final (But the most boring yet) day in school. Taking another boring biology report. In school.
"Initializing biology report" The machine spoke with a very robotic voice.
"Biology test run completed, projecting data" It shrieked, as it showed picture and information of the Saiyan's origins. After displayed a series of photos and information, the lifeless machine finally displayed information the class understand-ed.
Name: Bardock
Power Level: 8,500 "Heh,I've gotten a little rusty havn't I?" He said to himself. "Or does that worthless piece of machinery got the reading wrong?" He tried to control his embarrassment, even though no-one seemed to care.
Home World: Omni (This name is fanfiction! The true Home world's name was never stated.")
Age: 19
Most weight lifted at one time: 10000 Tons
Career track: Elite|Soloist
Possible Death: Killed by a Galactic Overlord "What? Absurd! How would I be stupid enough to die like that?" He says. Unable to see his death that awaits him 10 years from now.
At first, it seemed as another page of useless information was about to pop up, but instead showed a signified for the next student to come up stage. Luckily, Bardock was the fourth one to come up stage. He quickly exited, shifted uncomfortably, and left.
2 Months Later
Its been nearly two months since the end of school. Bardock already became successful, taking over sections of planets neighboring Planet Vegeta. He's also killed 300,000 innocent lives and decapitated 200 in the process. But this made the eyes of a Galactic Overlord gaze upon him. If Bardock paid even the slightest more attention, he would've noticed that people were expecting him to take over specific regions. Soldiers were designated with specific power levels in regions (But were not told they would die.) Everything was rigged ever since he destroyed his very first populated city.
13 Hours Later
A painful, but soft shriek was the final sound from that city's so-said greatest warrior. Bardock stood in the debris of what's left of a so-said mega city. He checked for any lethal damage upon him. Not a single drop of blood was shed.
"Such a pathetic town." He said out loud, hoping anyone heard him and tried to defend their home land. No one even dared. But before he turned back to his ship to collect the bounty, a narrow, green blast was concentrated straight at his head. He didn't even try this time. His saiyan's instincts kicked in and automatically defended himself, as the blast head to its journey in space, where it will evaporate.
He tried looking around the area where he saw the blast came from, but the only thing he laid his eyes upon was the ruins of the city.
"He-" He was quickly interrupted as green blasts similar to the first shot from all directions. Manually, the warrior jumped onward into the sky, leaving a large, thick cloud of dust behind. He was quickly joined as 3 Saiyans dressed in rune outfits appearing next to him, arms ready.
They quickly launched a barrage of fists at the Saiyan, hoping at-least one will make the journey into his chest or face. But such a journey was impossible. He quickly countered the attacks with blocks as the spiraled upward. And in seconds, he sent the 3 Saiyans to the ground with just one spiraling kick while they were off-guard. Before they could get a chance to escape, he quickly charged & threw a green sphere that quickly expanded every second of its life-force. Unfortunately, they were quick on their feet and stumbled out of harm's way.
As the dust cloud evaporated into the overwhelmed air, Bardock, prepared himself with another energy sphere, ready to attack as soon as he could find him.
"Wait!" One of the saiyan's said, her head nearly engulfed for her large hood. She flipped it open, revealing a stunning, blacked haired saiyan with crystal blue eyes.
"We were here already collecting the bounty of this city. Just who do you think you are?" She nearly swore, but it was Bardock's turn to speak.
"Name's Bardock. I'm glad we had such a pleasant first meeting?" He smirked as he hovered down to surface, pissing her off even more.
She opened her mouth to speak again, but once more it was someone's turn to speak.
"Sorry she caused so much trouble." A man said, also taking off his hood to reveal a handsome, black haired saiyan with slightly noticeable dented teeth, sharp nose, green eyes, and with smooth, straight hair.
"She's Cloud. And I'll be happy to tell you that my name is Kai. And my buddy over there is Zord." He pointed to the large but muscular man. His face was also masked but shown no attention of revealing his face. But there was no doubt that he is the most powerful.
"So you can leave and forget about what happened here, and we'll be on our way collecting our bounty. Ok with that?" He said, trying to make his nicest impression on him, but Bardock didn't buy it one bit.
"No." He said, also making his meaning impression on all of them.
"Who are they to boss me around?" He thought, trying to make sure he kept his emotions locked up.
"I've already checked their power levels, their no bigger then 15,000 combined!" He thought, double checking to see if he kept his emotions safely locked.
But he already made his decision. It didn't matter to him if he took the damn bounty. He'll always get another. So the best thing to do is leave.
"Fine.." He said, in utter defeat.
"Thanks!, and here's something for you.." He reached into his pocket to find 20 Zeni.
As soon as it was thrown to Bardock, it was dropped in the floor.
"Keep the change." Bardock said, before flying into the air, reaching to the pod that led him here.
But little did he know, he made a huge mistake in dismissing them so quickly. He should've formed an alliance, he would need it for the deadly foe that will arrive soon enough. But he didn't even care, as the wind pushed through his dark hair.
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So what do you think? Should I have let them had a friendly meeting? Or should I have changed the characters into Bardock's Team? And what should I make of the foe? a recurring member of the Z Cast? Review and fav! Next chapter soon!