Some Friendly Advice.
Original Author: Magicman.
Chapter 1: Lessons in men.
Rewritten by Jlargent.
Me: You never know what treasures you may find when you're not looking for them. That is a bit of advice to all authors and enthusiasts out there, because I found this story on another fanfiction site and I printed it off before said site was deleted. That being said like with the previous rewritten stories I could not contact the original author to get his permission to rewrite this story. And this story originally came out back in 2002 which is the oldest story that I had printed off. Now with that out of the way, I do not own the original story, nor do I own the series or the characters within. Typical disclaimers apply.
Hitomi sighed in annoyance.
The girl from the Mystic Moon was currently on the Crusade. Since they were in the air, she was bored out of her skull. Van was busy, Merle was being a pest, Allen was driving the ship, and Millerna was off by herself giggling over Allen, so her options for fun were limited. Eventually sitting in your room shuffling your tarot cards got a little dull. Especially since no one else was around to 'ooh' and 'ah'.
Hitomi got up and started pacing. Eventually, that too lost its appeal.
Finally, she threw her hands in the air and prepared to do the desperate. She would leave her room and go find Merle. 'Maybe the cat girl has found something to do'
She thought. She turned and left the room.
"Well, that plan was certainly a dud!"
Hitomi was back in her room, even more bored than ever, and grumpy to boot.
She had found Merle easily enough. But she was asleep. And a sleeping cat is not conducive to catching the mind. And so, here was Hitomi, sitting on her chair, head in hands and stifling yawns. Even fantasizing about Allen had lost its charms!
Suddenly, a knock came at the door. Puzzled, Hitomi lifted her head up. "Who the hell could that be?" she thought aloud. "No one comes to talk to me!" Curious, she got up and walked over to the door. Opening it, she found herself looking into the startlingly blue eyes of princess Millerna.
Millerna was wearing a long pink dress, buttoned to the top. Her hands were clasping themselves in a way that suggested worry. Her blue eyes were wide and held an innocent, naive look.
After a moment or so, Millerna asked, "May I come in?"
Hitomi, momentarily caught in her eyes, blinked and nodded. "Sure". She led the way into her room and gestured towards a chair. Millerna gathered her skirts about herself and sat down daintily.
"So, what's up Millerna?" Hitomi was glad for the distraction, the break in the mindless tedium of the day.
The princess held her skirts tightly. "Well, it's like this." Millerna hesitated, then came right out. "I need your advice."
Hitomi blinked again. "Okay". She said slowly. "About what?"
"About men."
"Err, what?"
"Well, you know how I like Allen?" Hitomi nodded the obvious answer to such a question. "I think he may like me. The problem is that he has all the advantages in this relationship. If he tried to put the moves on me then I wouldn't know what to do. I'd be helpless."
Here, Hitomi interrupted. "I think that's how he likes his women."
Millerna snorted. "Well too bad for him! I'm not about to stay helpless for some man who wants to court me!"
"So what is it you want me to do? Teach you about men and their ways?" Hitomi laughed at the thought.
"Yes" Millerna, said pointedly, cutting off Hitomi's laughter.
"Err, Millerna" Hitomi began slowly, "I don't think that's a good idea. What makes you think I know anything about men?"
Millerna put on a surprised expression. "I thought it was obvious. You've caught the eye of every man on the Crusade! I always figured it was due to talent."
Hitomi sighed. "Don't I wish. I think they all watch me because I'm from some other planet!"
"So you're not going to help me?" Millerna put on a sad, pouting expression. Her eyelashes half-closed, making her eyes turn from sky blue to navy blue. Hitomi wondered why she needed help attracting the attention of men. She was beautiful enough to play it by ear. Suddenly she realized that she didn't want the pouting princess to leave. She chalked it up to loneliness.
"I never said that." Hitomi sighed again. "Okay. I'll see what I can do to help you out."
A look of joy spread across Millerna's face, joined by a smile. "Thank you Hitomi!" she squealed. Jumping forward, she caught the other girl in a hug.
Startled, Hitomi let it continue for a moment. "Alright" she said eventually, "No need to get all mushy. I'm just giving you the four-one-one on men and their tactics."
"The give it to me! Give it to me good!" Oblivious to the double meaning her words contained, Millerna leaned forward, watching her new teacher attentively.
She continued to watch Hitomi as she gathered what little knowledge she had on men.
"Men" she started, "Are men."
Millerna looked blank. "Which means?"
"That it's nearly impossible to understand them. They're emotionally closed, and would sooner stab themselves than confess that they like a girl."
"Allen does that all the time."
"Allen's a pretty boy. They're the exception. They're the kind that goes after any woman they can find." Hitomi shook her head.
Millerna frowned as a though hit her. "Don't you like Allen?"
"I used to, but not anymore. It's fun to dream, though." Hitomi put on a goofy smile and giggled. Millerna put on an 'Are you insane?' look.
Hitomi recovered from her fit. "Where was I?"
"Pretty boys."
"Oh yes". Hitomi took a deep breath and prepared to continue. "Eventually, if a guy likes you, he'll work up some courage to ask you out. At this point, if you like the guy and want to accept, it's fun to tease them."
"Elaborate"
"Pretend to consider. Let them stew in their own juices before accepting. But if they ask you out and you say yes, then they'll usually show up on the day of the date with some flowers, or a box of chocolates, or something like that."
"Why?"
Hitomi shrugged. "You've got me. I figure it has something to do with making an impression."
"Oh". Millerna asked her next question. "What sort of places might he take you on a date?"
"There's all kinds of date places." Hitomi began to rattle off the names of all the date places she knew. "The mall, various restaurants, plays, picnics, fishing, boat rides, to their house, to your house, to a park, or maybe to a dance hall!"
Millerna sunk into her chair at that. "Dance halls? As in places where you dance?"
Hitomi nodded. "Dancing is what most people do at a dance hall. Why?"
Millerna sighed and shook her head. "Hitomi, I can't dance."
"Say what?" Hitomi's mouth was on 'coherent babbling'. "You can't dance?" Millerna shook her head and her mouth switched to 'incoherent babbling'.
As Hitomi made mouth sounds, Millerna explained. "Father set up dance lessons for me and Eries, but I could never go! After Marlene left I was always stuck in 'princess lessons'. So, while Eries was learning to dance, I was learning to comb my hair and put on makeup. Whenever a ball rolled around, I would just wait on the sidelines." She sighed. "I know what everyone says behind my back, about how dumb I am. But I can't help it! Those lessons are jammed in my head! And so, because my sister left, I get stuck with the nickname 'Princess Blonde for Brains'!" Millerna looked wistful, as she remembered unpleasant memories.
Hitomi saw this and shut off her mouth. She just watched as Millerna tried desperately to regain control of her emotions. She watched her blue eyes tighten, her rosy cheeks pale, and her soft lips press together with emotions held back, and suddenly Hitomi realized that she didn't want Millerna to be sad, to feel hurt. So, she leaned forward and hugged her friend.
"It's okay. It's okay" Hitomi whispered into Millerna's ear. The princess just stayed in the seer's arms until her emotional fit subsided. When she was back in control, Hitomi let her go. "Do you feel better now?"
Millerna nodded. "Thank you."
"Anytime!"
The two women watched each other for about a minute, neither saying anything. Finally, Hitomi stood up, pulling Millerna with her.
"Wh-what are you doing?"
"Come on. I'm teaching you how to dance." Millerna's eyes opened wide and her mouth dropped open. She was so stunned that she didn't even raise an objection.
Hitomi reached deep into her backpack, scrounging around for something. "Where is it?" she growled as she searched. "If Merle took it again I'll tie her tail to Escaflowne! Wait, here it is!" She straightened, triumphantly clutching a small plastic box. Millerna stepped forward for a closer view. "What is it?"
"It's my CD player. Good thing it has batteries, though". Hitomi set the machine on the table and popped in a CD. When she pressed a button, music floated through the air. Millerna jumped in surprise. "What is that?"
"'Can you feel the Love tonight" Hitomi explained. "It's a popular song on Earth, and it's going to help teach you to dance. 'Kay?"
Millerna thought for a moment before nodding. "Good. First I'll be teaching you to slow dance." Hitomi explained. "If you can't slow dance then you can't dance at all."
Hitomi took Millerna's hand and placed it on her hip. She wrapped up the princess in her arms and held her close. Millerna was blushing like mad. "Okay then. I'll be the guy, so I get to lead."
This comment caused Millerna to break out into giggles. Hitomi frowned. "Calm down. You're killing the mood." Millerna laughed even harder. Starting to get annoyed, Hitomi reached down and squeezed Millerna's ass. The princess gasped in surprise and stared deep into Hitomi's eyes. "I told you to relax." Hitomi said. "And remember that. Some guys will try to do that." Millerna didn't say anything. She just nodded and looked down, her face ablaze with color.
Hitomi started to lead Millerna around the room. Millerna stumbled a lot, and once she even stepped on Hitomi's toes. But Millerna was a fast learner. Eventually she figured it out, and soon they were gliding across the room. Slowly, they danced to the soft, drifting melody, bodies pressed together. Millerna sighed and rested her head on Hitomi's shoulder. Hitomi began to wonder why it was getting so hot in there.
As the music ended and switched to another slow song, the two women danced on through, not even missing a beat. Their embrace grew even tighter, and casually, almost unconsciously, Hitomi's hand slipped down Millerna's back. It stopped at her hip where it grazed her butt. The princess shivered but said nothing. Emboldened, Hitomi grabbed her ass, gently but firmly, and began to massage it. Neither woman objected, so deeply occupied were they occupied with their own powerful sensations. And if the song hadn't changed to 'American Psycho', then the two women would have spent all afternoon in each other's arms.
Hitomi blinked as the new song totally ruined the moment. Millerna shook her head as if dizzy. Comprehension dawned on them. They were standing together, breast to breast without a sliver of light in between, Millerna with her head on Hitomi's shoulder, and Hitomi with her hand on Millerna's ass. The women broke apart with startling speed. They blushed madly as the song blasted out its tunes.
"Err" Hitomi was stuttering. "I think you've successfully learned to slow dance."
Millerna reached behind and felt where Hitomi's hand had rested.
Hitomi saw this. "Look, I'm sorry about that. I guess I kind of got caught up in the moment." She scratched the back of her head.
Millerna didn't answer for a while. When she did, she asked, "Are there any other dances I could learn?"
Hitomi blinked. "Like what?"
"Well." Millerna slowly walked over to Hitomi. The other girl couldn't help but notice the sway of her hips. "That slow dance was fun to say the least." She blushed and fiddled with a strand of blond hair. "But the guy gets all the power. Is there any where I might get a word in edgewise?"
Hitomi was about to say no, but a thought hit her. She grinned at the very idea even as it struck her how weird that was. "Well, I could always teach you how to grind. That never fails to gain you control of any man."
Millerna raised an eyebrow. "Oh? Do tell."
Hitomi walked over to the CD player and selected another song. Soon the beat of Bloodhound Gang's 'The Bad Touch' was drifting through the room. The princess blushed as the lyrics started, but she didn't object. On the contrary, she found all of this…
"Now" Hitomi began, "I'll be the guy once more". Her look dared Millerna to laugh, but she had learned her lesson. "Good. Now." She stuck out a curved leg. "Come over here and straddle my leg."
Millerna bounced over eagerly, doing as she was told. "I think I get the idea." She grinned evilly. Then, with a flip of her long blonde hair, she began to rub herself up and down Hitomi's leg.
Immediately heat rushed between Hitomi's legs and she threw her head back with the unexpected pleasure. Seeing the effect and wanting to see more, Millerna doubled her efforts. Moving faster and harder, she rubbed her pussy against the bare skin of Hitomi's leg.
As they danced, Millerna found herself growing more and more excited. She clutched Hitomi's chest in her hands to pull herself upward, and, when their breasts met for the briefest of moments, to steady her as she began the slow descent. Then she would start the whole thing over again.
Hitomi's vision was being blinded by the pleasure she was feeling. Screw however weird this was! This was the most incredible she had ever felt before! She moaned loudly as Millerna's hands teased her nipples as she dragged herself up Hitomi's leg. She moaned even louder as Millerna's humping increased in pace. Her moans excited the hell out of the princess and she reacted wantonly, crushing her body up against the other girl's.
And still the music played. "You and me baby, we ain't nothing but mammals" Blared the CD player. "So, let's do it like they do on the Discovery channel."
Unable to control herself, Hitomi reached down and took Millerna's ass in her hands again, this time hard. Turned on by the princess' gasp, she helped her grind, pushing her slowly up her leg.
The feel of Hitomi's hands on her excited Millerna like nothing had before. With one last burst of energy, she furiously rubbed herself against Hitomi. The seer moaned long and loud until Millerna slowed and finally stopped.
The two women panted.
Hitomi gasped for breath and collapsed on the floor. "I think you've mastered the grind."
Millerna beamed even and brushed aside a lock of sweaty hair. "Do you have anything to drink? That made me kind of thirsty."
Hitomi stumbled to her feet. She made her way to the bathroom and grabbed a glass. There was a bottle of wine in the room, but there was no way she was drinking wine at a time like this. Instead, she filled the glass with water and brought it out to Millerna. The princess thanked her and slowly drank.
Hitomi watched Millerna intently as she melded her lips to the glass and drank the cool liquid. She watched her smooth throat as she swallowed. She watched her long vibrant hair as she knocked her head back to get the last few drops. And she watched her large firm breasts rise and fall as Millerna gave a sigh of relief.
Hitomi had never really thought about what her sexual preferences were. She'd always assumed she liked boys. But her crush on Amano had ended almost before it began. Allen was interesting to think about, but that thought was shattered. In its place was a lithe feminine figure with blonde hair and startlingly blue eyes.
"Hitomi?"
Hitomi shook her head and blinked.
Millerna was watching her. "You've been staring at me for the last minute. It's starting to freak me out!" What she didn't say was that it was turning her on.
Hitomi shrugged. "I was just thinking."
"Good. I was getting worried."
"Thanks Millerna! I didn't know you cared!"
The princess blushed. "So, ah, what happens after the date?"
Hitomi shrugged again. "Not much really. He takes you home and that's about it. Except." It was Hitomi's turn to blush. "Except for the goodnight kiss."
Millerna's eyes suddenly bored holes into her friend's head. "Really?" Hitomi nodded. "Would show me how it's done?"
"Wh-what? I thought you'd been kissed before!"
"There is a difference between kissing and being kissed. The former has involvement from both parties, and Allen wouldn't do that." Hitomi showed no signs of motion. Her eyes had gone wide and her mouth hung open. Millerna sighed and got up.
"I'm sorry. I've made you uncomfortable. I'll leave now. Thanks for the lessons." Disappointed, Millerna turned and headed toward the door. She was about to open it when she felt a hand on her shoulder. Turning, she suddenly felt a warm sensation in her lips.
Hitomi stood back, an unreadable expression on her face. Millerna touched her lips where she'd just been kissed.
"I believe that is called a peck." Hitomi said. "This one is a bit more intense." She leaned forward and softly kissed Millerna's lips once more.
This time, it lasted for several seconds. By the time it was done, Millerna was trembling and Hitomi was smiling. "That was the way Allen kissed me" whispered the princess. "Although he wasn't nearly so gentle."
"Thank you." Hitomi's smile widened. "You won't think I'm gentle after this one." She caught Millerna up in her arms and captured her lips with her own.
(Lemon Alert! If you are easily offended by two women having sex then either turn back, or skip to the end.)
Millerna stiffened in surprise at Hitomi's sudden roughness. But she relaxed and just enjoyed the kiss. Her eyes widened when she felt Hitomi's tongue part her lips, and soon she was moaning as the seer tasted her rough tongue. Hitomi's tongue ran through Millerna's entire mouth. Tasting, exploring, probing, it left no inch unfelt. Millerna could barely keep herself standing up, and she felt herself pressed against the door.
Hitomi's hand came down with a-by-now familiar squeeze. But her other hand clasped Millerna's breast. She teased her nipple, pinching playfully as the other girl wriggled in her grasp. Molding the soft flesh, Hitomi felt light headed as she fully realized what she was doing. So much for questions about her sexual preferences.
When Hitomi broke the kiss, Millerna was gasping hard. She could sense her arousal through her long pink dress and felt her own rise. There was no denying it. She wanted this woman bad. "When I kiss you this time, I want you to kiss me back." Hitomi whispered, trailing her tongue up Millerna's cheek as she did so. "I was doing it all. I want you to enjoy more."
Millerna nodded, breathlessly. This time when Hitomi kissed her, she wrapped her arms around her neck and kissed her back, fiercely. Eagerly, she opened her lips, and they began to French, their tongues striving against one another. Millerna pushed forward, her breasts mashed against Hitomi's, making both of them moan. She put her leg in between Hitomi's and began to rub her pussy. The feeling was so intense that she nearly came right then and there.
Finally, they broke apart again. The girls looked at each other through half-lidded eyes.
Millerna watched Hitomi lustfully flick her gaze down her figure and she shivered in delight. She was so gorgeous; it was a wonder that she'd never noticed before. Or had she? She remembered how horrible she had been to Hitomi because she thought she was trying to steal Allen. Millerna suddenly realized that she didn't care about Allen anymore. No, it was the brown-haired girl who had captured her heart now. Well, she was damned if this one was getting away from her too!
"So Hitomi" Millerna spoke, her voice low and seductive. She watched, pleased, as Hitomi's breath caught in here throat. "What comes after the goodnight kiss?"
Hitomi smiled lustfully. "Well, I'll show you." Taking Millerna's hand in her own, she brought the princess over to the couch. Once there, she kissed her passionately, trailing kisses all across her face as her hands fiddled with the knots of her dress.
Millerna pulled away for an instant. Expertly, she reached back and unhooked the one strap that kept the entire dress together. No longer needed, the long pink dress slowly fell to the floor, leaving Millerna clad in a bra and panties.
Hitomi's eyes lit up as she watched the princess slowly walk toward her. She reached up to her neck and pulled off her sweater. Her shorts were next to go, and then she was no more clad than Millerna.
Hitomi stepped forward, kissing Millerna's face. She kissed her eyes and lips. She kissed her cheeks and forehead. But she paid special attention to her soft white throat. As she sucked and kissed her, Millerna divested them of their remaining articles of clothing. The two held each other, kissing again, until they fell backwards onto the couch. Harder, almost desperately, Hitomi left a trail of kisses and an almost equal number of hickeys all down Millerna's neck and chest. When she reached her breast, she didn't pause. She clamped on to one of Millerna's stiff erect nipples and suckled furiously.
Millerna was gasping in pleasure, as Hitomi licked and sucked on her breast. She didn't want it to stop it felt so good!
Hitomi teasingly bit down and felt a surge as Millerna cried out. She circled the tip with her tongue and gave one last hard suck. Briefly coming up for air, she switched to her other breast and continued to suck.
After she dealt with Millerna's breasts, Hitomi trailed downward, leaving hot, wet kisses as she went. When she reached Millerna's legs, the princess opened the wide, giving Hitomi a wide view. Her eyes lit up. The smell emanating from Millerna's pussy was intoxicating, and it aroused Hitomi even further than she was.
Thrusting two fingers into the yawning vagina, Hitomi began to fuck Millerna slowly and deliciously. The princess was moaning steadily louder. This was so amazing! She had fingered herself before, sure. But this was a MILLION times better! Her wordless cries helped to drive Hitomi to new heights. She thrust into her lover harder and faster, desperately trying to hear Millerna's screams. Spreading her pussy lips with a finger, Hitomi knelt down in front of Millerna. Giving a reassuring smile, she thrust her head forward and plunged her tongue deep into the virgin pussy.
Millerna did scream then. Her voice bounced off the soundproof walls as she screamed again and again. The sensation of Hitomi's tongue inside of her was driving her mad! She enmeshed her hands in Hitomi's hair and pushed her head inward, trying desperately to make it go in farther. She felt Hitomi's hands wrap around her ass,
squeezing tightly, drawing herself in.
Whistling, Gaddes strolled down the halls of the Crusade.
The commander had sent him to get Hitomi. Apparently, there was something he needed to tell her I hope he doesn't try to put the moves on her again. The lieutenant thought to himself. Millerna would freak. Why can't he just settle down?
Deciding that his was not to reason why, Gaddes turned a corner and came to Hitomi's room. Still whistling, he opened the door and stepped inside. "Hitomi, I-" His words stopped as abruptly as his feet did.
His gaze was drawn to the couch. Millerna was lying naked on the couch, gasping and moaning as an equally naked Hitomi licked her soaking pussy. Gaddes had rarely seen such a turn on. Allen would have killed to see this.
It took a while for Hitomi to become aware of Gaddes' presence. Carefully, she withdrew her tongue from Millerna. Turning her head, she smiled, her face wet with Millerna's precum. "Can I help you?"
Gaddes' mind snapped back to reality. "Err yes. Allen wanted to talk to you."
Hitomi regarded Gaddes with a 'get lost' look. "Tell him I'm busy."
Gaddes nodded. He started to go but paused. "Hitomi?"
She turned to him again, annoyance on her face. "What?"
"Do you happen to have a bottle of wine?"
"Check the cabinet."
Gaddes nodded and walked over to the cabinet as Hitomi returned to the task of licking Millerna's pussy. He picked up the wine and left the room, all the while trying desperately not to hear the sounds of Millerna losing her virginity to the sandy haired girl from the Mystic moon.
When he got outside, he went to the bridge.
Allen waited for him expectantly. "Well?"
Gaddes shrugged. "She's busy."
Allen frowned. "Too busy to talk to me?"
"It looked like it, yeah."
Allen sighed and started to turn away when he noticed the wine. "Planning on getting drunk tonight?"
"Oh yeah."
"Do you need a drinking buddy?"
Gaddes considered it. "No, I think I'll need all of this for myself."
Millerna thrashed and screamed on the couch. Hitomi's constant ministrations were driving her to the edge. She didn't let up either. She was taking great pleasure in what she was doing to the other woman.
Finally, Millerna could no longer hold it. The orgasm struck her just as Hitomi's tongue had entered for another go. Her internal muscles clamped on her tongue, and a wave of juices struck Hitomi in the face. She gleefully buried her face in deeper, trying to get as much on her face as possible. The more for Millerna to lick off afterward!
Eventually, the flood slowed, and finally a mere trickle dripped from her opening. With her tongue free, Hitomi began to lap up the juices while Millerna lay back, gasping for breath.
(End Lemon.)
She was barely aware of Hitomi until her arms gently encircled her. She kissed her tenderly, tasting herself on the other girl. She licked the juices off her face, paying much more attention to Hitomi's skin than to doing a good job. Hitomi sighed and held Millerna tightly.
"Well, how was the lesson?"
Millerna stopped her licking and flashed Hitomi a dazzling smile. "I consider myself thoroughly taught in the arts of men."
"All the better to get Allen with?" Hitomi teased.
Millerna looked her straight in the eye and said, "Fuck Allen. Fuck him long, hard, and with a guy! I don't care about him and I never have! You're the one I want Hitomi! Not Allen, you." She tightened her grip about the other girl. "And I don't want this to be a onetime thing. I think I've fallen in love with you, and I'd like to explore that feeling."
Hitomi felt a slight thrill in her heart. "I'd like that too, Millerna." She whispered, kissing her forehead. "I'd like that too."
Chapter 1 of 5 completed.
Me: So, begins another story of love in the time of war. Next time: With a new relationship comes new secrets to keep. So how long will Hitomi keep her newfound relationship with Princess Millerna a secret? Tune in next chapter to find out. There were a lot of misspelled words and other problems when I was rereading the original story that I had printed off. As you can imagine it does poses a bit of a hassle. Anyway, until next time!
As always Hoody Hoo!