Yondaime's revenge V2!

Fourths' son

prologue

talk

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I'm back. Sorry it's late i know i said a week, but i got caught up in some shit, and i re-wrote this like 10 times. I'm still not satisfied with it, but my friend liked this version the most, so i decided to post this one. Tell me how it is. Sorry it's so short, it's just a prologue.

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Prologue begin.

Blood, The ground was covered with it. More blood seeped onto the ground through the broken body, as it began to gain more cuts, and tears. The man couldn't begin to understand how the same people for whom the boy would give his life could possibly do this to him. Oh no, he knew about the Kyuubi, the boy's tenant, but that didn't give them any excuse. Unless of course, they had a death wish, and wanted the demon to be free do as it pleased with their precious village.

The man wondered how the villagers felt, when they took their anger, and frustration out on a young boy, and knowing that the boy couldn't do a thing about it. How the tourists felt, when they saw how Konoha treated one of their own, how the Leaf Village wasn't all it's cracked up to be. How the youngest generation felt, being told to hate simply because everyone else does, being told to shun one of their own. How the old Shinobi felt, seeing the son of the great Fourth Hokage being treated as less than dirt, but too afraid to do anything, fearing what everyone else would think of them. How the Hokage felt, knowing that this happened on a daily basis, and yet he just sat back and watched, only interfering in the most extreme situations.

The man silently begs the boy to get up, and show the villagers the same treatment they show him. How it feels to be spit on, to be beat on, to have your heart broken daily from all the hate. He begs the boy to get up, and kill the villagers, so he won't have more blood on his hands. But the boy does no such thing, he simply lies there, hides his tears from the world, and absorbs all of the punishment that a boy shouldn't go through. His heart goes out to the boy when he hears the Container let out a desperate cry of help. His eyes narrow even more as he sees, and hears the villagers give a shout of triumph, thinking that they have finally broken the demon.

The man clenches his fists tightly, trying to restore his control, and resisting the urge to save the boy. Son or not, he was a shinobi, and a former Kage, if the other villages discovered that he was alive it could cause an all out war with Kumo, and Iwa. He relaxes when, out of the corner of his eye, he sees two ANBU heading towards the group. Hopefully they'll be able to stop this madness. A smile finds it's way on his face, as he sees the reaction of the villagers, the looks of fear in their eyes. He sees the ANBU talking to the fools, and his smile gets even bigger, until the villagers begin to grin.

He did a double take, and sure enough they were grinning, and laughing like Christmas had come early. He watches as the two traitorous ANBU casually make their way towards the beaten genin, as if this is an everyday thing, which it is. He unconsciously flicks his wrist, sending an unknown object zooming into the bushes near the boy, and his body leans forward, the brain already sending signals to the body, even though the man has no clue as to what he's about to do. His eyes follow the ANBU's movements, as they both prepare seals for a Katon jutsu, and he curses as the dragons begins to take form. He sees the dragons shoot off towards his boy, intent on devouring him with their flames.

He sees them getting closer,closer, and he's hoping for anyone to save his son. The dragons are ten feet away when he makes his decision, consequences be damned, he was not about to let his only son die by a bunch of fools. In a split second he's gone, leaving only a bright, yellow, flash in his stead. He rushes right into the dragons' path, not caring about the explosion as he grabs his son, and continues forward. When the smoke clears, the man is gone, along with the boy.

End.

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Like it? review. Hate it? review.

Important: I will be using Arashi Kazama, just because i'm going to keep it like the 1st version.

Anko might still be Naruto's mom. Now that i haven't written that chapter, I'm deciding to pick either Anko, or Shizune. Which one?

Will switch from Naruto's P.O.V. to Arashi's P.O.V.

Also, pairing will be naru/konan, and arashi/anko or arashi/shizune. So vote: anko or shizune.

And they might go to akatsuki, but i don't think I'll give Naruto any of Jaishins' powers. I might.

Oh, and next chap will explain how Naruto got caught, and beaten down.

all for now.

review.

peace.

Fourths' son

P.S. On the other yondaime's revenge, i got 100k hits! thanks peoples! let's see if we can beat that on this version, and if we can get more reviews. So please review.