Hey everyone this is my first story first chapter so this is probably not going to be as great as experienced writers but ill get better as
I go on
Also any advice or constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated so I can better myself as a writer and make my stories better. What I don't want though is flamers.
None of that "oh this story is gay and stupid" without at least putting a reason why
Anyway The story is set directly after the end of the Naruto shippuden movie one
Well here we go(AN I don't own Naruto so quit suing already)
Chapter one: the promise
The rookie 7(minus sauske) and sand siblings looked on in shock as the mountain which held the shrine exploded turning the mountain into a new volcano. Every one feared for safety of the jinchuriki(did I spell that right? Im not sure) and the priestess but just as they were about to send out a search party two figures appeared in the smoke. Everyone was relived when they noticed the infamous spiky blond hair of one uzumaki naruto.
As they emerged from the smoke shion got off of narutos back and turned to face the newly formed volcano.
"so I guess this is the end of your priestess days huh" asked naruto as they stared off into the distance.
"not exactly." said shion " as long as there is evil in the hearts of men moroybu will be reincarnated over and over again.
And so I must pass on my priestess power to the next generation to combat him. It is the only way to save the world in the future"
"so naruto how about it wanna help me" shion said suddenly in a seductive tone
However being the super dense person that he is naruto replied
"sure thing ill do whatever it takes and that's a promise"
At that moment 4 things happened
Sakura passed out from the sheer surprise of the situation
Kakashi got an evil look and whispered "I think I found jiraiyas next book"
Nejii simply stood there shocked at narutos stupidity
and shion stood there for about 5 seconds before yelling out
"youll really do it! Oh thank you so much naruto you've saved the world" declared shion as she embraced him.
Naruto blushed at the contact and the feel of her massive boobs on his chest
"there soo big"thought naruto as she hugged him harder
"I wonder if hes thinking dirty thoughts" thought shion as she smirked into his chest so he could not see.
"well hate to interrupt your moment but we should probably get shion back to her palace in demon country." Instructed kakashi as the two parted.
As she watched the two embracing each other sakura felt a pain in her heart that she had not felt since sauske left. "naruto I thought you liked me" she thought as she sadly started moving with the others.
Well thats it for chapter 1
I know it was pretty short but the chapter2 will be at least 2.5 times longer
Again reviews plz
Tell me what you want to see and anything i can improve on