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This is a short fanfic I made... I might make it into a bunch of chapters depending on the reviews. Satomi and ayushiki mostly. But I'll do some mayushigue (is that the name of their ship? I just made it up...) but ships will only happen if I get good reviews. I don't want a crappy story.
"Shooooooo howww are yooo thooing?" Said a drunk familiar voice. "Stop it yoshiki, you're drunk. Reeeaaalllll drunk." Satoshi went to hang out with yoshiki and everyone else. Then seiko said, "satoshi! Let him have his fun!" "But he's drunk!" Naomi and ayumi nlooked weirdly at me. "Wh-who're you talking to?" Naomi said. "Seiko of course!" Satoshi said. They just decided to just go along with it. "O-oh. Yeah." 'Whats up with them?' Satoshi thought. The rest of the night was spent in awkward silence ao satoshi was just talking with mayu the whole time. "So, how are you and morishigue getting along?" Seiko asked mayu. "W-what do you mean?" "You know what I mean guurrrlll!" Mayu blushed, "well, we almost kissed... once..." WHAAA?" Seiko said so everyone could hear. It interuppted satoshi and morishigue conversation about school. Then I realized ayumi and naomi had left. "Where did those two go?" I asked seiko. "I dunnoooooooo! Don't ask me!" Yoshiki was asleep too. We decided to call it a night and I left yoshikis house. [I try to write stories in third person but I always revert ack to first person lol, so this is satoshi pov.]
Naomi POV
'Satoshi was being really weird at yoahikis apartment. I... I... I killed... I killed seiko so why is he acting like she is still there? And mayu and morishigue too. What's up with him? Really, he was fine a month after the incident so why is he pretending? Now who will comfort me when I get a nightmare?' These were all the thoughts I had while I was curled up in my bed hugging a pillow. 'Something is wrong with satoshi, I have to investigate!' I stopped hanging out with satoshi for a while. I completely ignlred him. I wanted to see his reaction. I wanted to see if he would talk to imaginary seiiko, mayu, and morishigue. Then I started stalking him, seeing what he was doing. He went to the arcade with imaginary morishigue and yoshiki. Yoshiki still hasn't noticed that satoshi had developed imaginary friends. He can be so dense! But strangely enough, everyone was going along with him! Like they could actually see satoshis imaginary friends and talk to them! It was unbelievable. I decided to got to satoshis house and confront his parents about it. They said that his friends were actually real! What's wrong with everyone!? I started getting frustrated and asked satoshi about it. "Satoshi, could we meet up after school at the front entrance?" "Sure! I can't wait!" I can't see what he is so happy about.
Satoshi POV
'Naomi asked me to meet her at the front entrance after school! Maybe she is going to confess! And ayumi asked me the same thing! Who's going to confess first? Or maybe I should! That is assuming that they are going to confess. Still, I'm so excited!' Ayumi was there first when I arrived at the entrance. The sun was setting. The sky was a beautiful shade of red, orange, and pink and purple. Perfect time for a confession. "Hey ayumi! What's up?" She looked really flustered. 'Is she gonna confess?' I thought. "S-satoshi. C-come c-closer to m-me." I approached her slowly and then she embraced me. Then, standing on the tips of her toes she said three words. Three very important words. The wind was blowing and cherry blossom petals were fluttering by. Then Naomi came. It kinda killed the mood. She was shocked and sad at the sams time. I could see it in her expression. Then, she calmly turned the opposite direction then left. "Naomi wait!" I cried, pulling away from ayumis arms. She didn't answer. I pulled away from ayumis arms and ran after naomi. I grabbed her hand. "Naomi..." tears were threatening to fall out of her eyes. Then she turned towards me and smiled. The wind blew, shaking the leaves. "N-naomi... did you see?" "Yeah, I didn't want to ruin your moment together!" Her tears disappeared. "Naomi... naomi you have the wrong idea!" "What do you mean?" She frowned. "I love you, not her. So don't get the wrong idea." "Sorry, I'm not interested. You're a friend to me, best friends and nothing can change that." She gave a smile that looked so genuine, it hurt my heart to see how calmly she did that. Then she left. Ayumi caught up soon. "Satoshi... what's... wrong...?" She panted, taking breaks for air. "N-nothing. Its nothing. I left the opposite way and left ayumi there, dumb struck.
Ayumi POV
It doesnsnt make sense. It doesn't. When satoahi ran after naomi, I knew it was over. The war that hadn't even started and I already lost. I was heartbroken of course, but there was nothing I could do. I stayed there until it was dark. I decided it was time to leave. I was filled with thoughts that night. 'Why did he chase after her? Does satoshi have feelings for naomi? Satoshi didn't immediately pull away from my hug nor reject me confession so does that mean I have a chance?' Yoshiki called me that night and I told him everything. He was too drunk to rmemebr but I just needed someone to pour my heart out to. I went to bed crying that night.
Yoshiki POV
I called ayumi to ask her if I could borrow notes for tomorrow since we had a test. But before I could speak she told me everything. I pretened I was drunk so that she would be assured that I wou,dnt remember anything. But it hurt! I felt just like ayumi. I lost a war that hadn't even begun yet. It sucked. I wish it was me she was confessing to. But I wanted to know what naomi and satoshi were talking about. My brain hurt cuz I had so much feels. So I went to bed. Tomorrow was gonna be one hella day.
Naomi POV
I honestly had no feelings for satoshi. So ahy did I feel like crap? Arghhh! This is so hard! Now that satoshi confesed he is all that I can think about! I need to know why satoshi is imagining people! I called him and told him to meet me at the park near an italian resturaunt I go to sometimes with my boyfriend. "Satoahi, why are you imagining people?" I wanted to get this ovver with and I was quite irritated because I had just gotten into a fight with my boyfriend. "What do you mean?" "Mayu, seiko, and morishigue died in heavenly host. So why do you keep pretending they are still alive?" "They're not dead. And what's heavenly hlst?" I was shocked. "Don't you remember? 6 months ago?" "No, naomi are you okay? Do you have a fever or something?" He touched my forehead. I was angry and I slapped his hand away. "Fine then! If you dodnt want to answer me the so be it!"
But seiko was real. Mayu was real. Morishigue was real. So why?
Hope you like it! If I get a lot of positive reviews I might make it into a lot more chapters than just one short story!
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