A/N: I'm new here; please don't kill me for bad ideas! I'm just trying a story out on you guys. It's rated PG-13 For language and little abuse and violence. It is from Hermione's point of view, in case you don't get it. I don't own any JKR characters, only the ones you don't recognize. Ok please R/R.
Hidden Scars
I stared in the mirror for a while. I wasn't so sure that I was ready to show my two best friends my new look. My hair was straightened, with new blonde highlights, and I had developed a new style from America. I was tired of wearing long robes and school clothes, even though I'd still have to. I changed into a white top from an American store called "Abercrombie and Fitch" and a pair of blue sweat pants with a bar of velvet down the side from another American store called "Express."
I brushed my hair one last time, and practiced smiling in the mirror. I wanted Harry to see a different girl, not the same bookworm he knew so well. I wanted to be mysterious, and I wanted to be wanted. I wanted to be the girl all the bad guys want. I chuckled to myself for remembering the muggle song. I magically applied eyeliner and lip-gloss, then blush. I looked myself over, thinking that if I was Harry, I definitely want me.
All of a sudden the door burst open, revealing Ginny. I looked her up and down, envying her beautiful auburn hair, spotted freckles, and heart-shaped face. She was wearing school clothes, but looked actually good in them. It was no fair. Why did the damn Weasly have to have all the luck? She giggled and said, "Hey Hermione, It's time to go!" I followed Ginny out into the hallway, knowing he was there. I stopped for a second, Thinking I was going to do something horribly embarrassing, but crossed my fingers and walked out.
The first thing I realized about him was that his glasses were gone, he must have gotten contacts. His eyes were more fierce and vibrant. He was laughing and talking to Ron, who looked all the same. Harry had the same ruffled hair, but a different look about him. I grinned and walked in, getting cut off by Ginny. "Hey Harry," Ginny giggled, ruffling his hair. I felt the cold stab of jealousy run through my body as the two flirted, giggling and touching each other. I was about to run away, but I felt a hand around me.
Instantly I pulled back, no man was to touch me without permission. When I turned around. Ron was standing there, the same confused, stupid look on his face. I held up my nails, which were longer and sharper then ever. "See these? Touch me again, and you'll have them through your skin." Ron didn't get it. He just stood there, so I flung my hair over my shoulder and walked away.
When Harry finally realized I was there, he looked up. Stupid me, I giggled. Harry just looked me up and down, Said "hi," then turned back to Ginny. I took this as rejection, and quickly turned away, turning as red as the scarlet in Gryffindor. I just walked outside to get a cold breath of air. I sat down on the porch. My eyes wandered aimlessly as Fred and George came up to me from behind. "Hermione, was with the long face?" said George, or Fred.. I can't tell them apart. "Yeah, 'Mione, what's wrong with our princess?" Instantly, I let my anger get out of control. "First of all, I do NOT have a long face! And second of all, My name is not 'Mione and I am not your princess!" They ran off before I could get things right. "Oh no.." I muttered, sitting back on the porch, moping.
After a while, I heard the door open. I jumped up, pretending to practice spells. Ron and Harry walked out, followed by a star struck Ginny. I ignored them, but I still eavesdropped. Ron was rambling on how he was "good at.." and I didn't catch the rest of what he was talking about. "Bloody Hell, Ron, Let's just get on with it so I can.. Um.. Show Ginny some spells." Harry said, giggling along with Ginny. I drew a fist, but held it back as I watched an idiot, a hottie, and a princess talk.
I soon heard a loud scream. I rushed out, to find Ginny screaming.. with laughter. Ron was on the floor, and Harry's wand was out. "I win," muttered Harry as he took Ginny's arm and went inside. I walked off around the side of the house, leaning against a wall. I was there moping for about five minutes when I heard a loud yell from the front of the burrow. "Kids! Gather your things and make your way to the fire place!" It was Molly Weasly. I ran inside and up to her room. Then I grabbed my wand and levitated my suitcase down the stairs.
When I was downstairs, Ron was talking to Harry, and Ginny was just standing there. "Hermione, you'll go first, alright then?" I nodded and brought my suitcase into the fireplace. I was handed some floo powder, and I yelled loud and clear, "Diagon Alley!" I was suddenly flown into Flourish and Blotts, followed by Ron, Ginny, and Harry. Molly Weasly apparated, and we began on our search for books. Of course, books were my favorite topic, so I ignored Harry and Ginny for a while so I could gather school supplies.
An hour later, Ron came over and told me it was time to go. I paid my galleons, and went back to the fireplace to travel by floo powder in order to get to King's Crossing. Once we were there, we met up with none other than Malfoy. "Hey Mud blood," Malfoy sneered. "Why don't you spare your time and get yourself a different diss, Malfoy." I glared at the stupid Death Eater. I turned around and walked in the other direction. Stupid Malfoy, getting me all mad like that. He needs a new hobby. I lead the others to platform 9 ¾, and stopped at the magnificent scarlet train. I smiled, thinking it was good to be back at Hogwarts.
"Hey Hermione, Instead of standing on the platform until the train leaves, how about we get a compartment?" Ron said, startling me from my daydream starring Harry Potter. "Oh. Yes, Ron. That would be smart. Ginny? Harry? We're going on-" I said, turning around, realizing something that hurt my heart. Harry was standing over Ginny, Ginny beaming with all the light she had in her. They looked like they were about to kiss, so I just ran on the train.
I found myself a compartment, an empty one where I could read. I pulled out the same book I usually read, Hogwarts: A History. Halfway between chapters, the door to my compartment opened. I looked up, seeing Ron with his same confused face, halfway smiling. "Hermione! You're crying!" He yelled. I had no idea what he was talking about. I felt my eyes, and they were very wet. I looked at Ron with a sorrowful face, and he came over to give me a hug. "Now, What's wrong?" Ron said, trying to understand, but he really wasn't. I spoke up, "Well it's just, Harry and Ginny. I mean, it's no fair!" I felt more hot tears run down my cheeks, and Ron held on even tighter.
END OF CHAPTER ONE
Ok please R/R.. I know it's not good but give me feedback; I wanna know what people think.
Hidden Scars
I stared in the mirror for a while. I wasn't so sure that I was ready to show my two best friends my new look. My hair was straightened, with new blonde highlights, and I had developed a new style from America. I was tired of wearing long robes and school clothes, even though I'd still have to. I changed into a white top from an American store called "Abercrombie and Fitch" and a pair of blue sweat pants with a bar of velvet down the side from another American store called "Express."
I brushed my hair one last time, and practiced smiling in the mirror. I wanted Harry to see a different girl, not the same bookworm he knew so well. I wanted to be mysterious, and I wanted to be wanted. I wanted to be the girl all the bad guys want. I chuckled to myself for remembering the muggle song. I magically applied eyeliner and lip-gloss, then blush. I looked myself over, thinking that if I was Harry, I definitely want me.
All of a sudden the door burst open, revealing Ginny. I looked her up and down, envying her beautiful auburn hair, spotted freckles, and heart-shaped face. She was wearing school clothes, but looked actually good in them. It was no fair. Why did the damn Weasly have to have all the luck? She giggled and said, "Hey Hermione, It's time to go!" I followed Ginny out into the hallway, knowing he was there. I stopped for a second, Thinking I was going to do something horribly embarrassing, but crossed my fingers and walked out.
The first thing I realized about him was that his glasses were gone, he must have gotten contacts. His eyes were more fierce and vibrant. He was laughing and talking to Ron, who looked all the same. Harry had the same ruffled hair, but a different look about him. I grinned and walked in, getting cut off by Ginny. "Hey Harry," Ginny giggled, ruffling his hair. I felt the cold stab of jealousy run through my body as the two flirted, giggling and touching each other. I was about to run away, but I felt a hand around me.
Instantly I pulled back, no man was to touch me without permission. When I turned around. Ron was standing there, the same confused, stupid look on his face. I held up my nails, which were longer and sharper then ever. "See these? Touch me again, and you'll have them through your skin." Ron didn't get it. He just stood there, so I flung my hair over my shoulder and walked away.
When Harry finally realized I was there, he looked up. Stupid me, I giggled. Harry just looked me up and down, Said "hi," then turned back to Ginny. I took this as rejection, and quickly turned away, turning as red as the scarlet in Gryffindor. I just walked outside to get a cold breath of air. I sat down on the porch. My eyes wandered aimlessly as Fred and George came up to me from behind. "Hermione, was with the long face?" said George, or Fred.. I can't tell them apart. "Yeah, 'Mione, what's wrong with our princess?" Instantly, I let my anger get out of control. "First of all, I do NOT have a long face! And second of all, My name is not 'Mione and I am not your princess!" They ran off before I could get things right. "Oh no.." I muttered, sitting back on the porch, moping.
After a while, I heard the door open. I jumped up, pretending to practice spells. Ron and Harry walked out, followed by a star struck Ginny. I ignored them, but I still eavesdropped. Ron was rambling on how he was "good at.." and I didn't catch the rest of what he was talking about. "Bloody Hell, Ron, Let's just get on with it so I can.. Um.. Show Ginny some spells." Harry said, giggling along with Ginny. I drew a fist, but held it back as I watched an idiot, a hottie, and a princess talk.
I soon heard a loud scream. I rushed out, to find Ginny screaming.. with laughter. Ron was on the floor, and Harry's wand was out. "I win," muttered Harry as he took Ginny's arm and went inside. I walked off around the side of the house, leaning against a wall. I was there moping for about five minutes when I heard a loud yell from the front of the burrow. "Kids! Gather your things and make your way to the fire place!" It was Molly Weasly. I ran inside and up to her room. Then I grabbed my wand and levitated my suitcase down the stairs.
When I was downstairs, Ron was talking to Harry, and Ginny was just standing there. "Hermione, you'll go first, alright then?" I nodded and brought my suitcase into the fireplace. I was handed some floo powder, and I yelled loud and clear, "Diagon Alley!" I was suddenly flown into Flourish and Blotts, followed by Ron, Ginny, and Harry. Molly Weasly apparated, and we began on our search for books. Of course, books were my favorite topic, so I ignored Harry and Ginny for a while so I could gather school supplies.
An hour later, Ron came over and told me it was time to go. I paid my galleons, and went back to the fireplace to travel by floo powder in order to get to King's Crossing. Once we were there, we met up with none other than Malfoy. "Hey Mud blood," Malfoy sneered. "Why don't you spare your time and get yourself a different diss, Malfoy." I glared at the stupid Death Eater. I turned around and walked in the other direction. Stupid Malfoy, getting me all mad like that. He needs a new hobby. I lead the others to platform 9 ¾, and stopped at the magnificent scarlet train. I smiled, thinking it was good to be back at Hogwarts.
"Hey Hermione, Instead of standing on the platform until the train leaves, how about we get a compartment?" Ron said, startling me from my daydream starring Harry Potter. "Oh. Yes, Ron. That would be smart. Ginny? Harry? We're going on-" I said, turning around, realizing something that hurt my heart. Harry was standing over Ginny, Ginny beaming with all the light she had in her. They looked like they were about to kiss, so I just ran on the train.
I found myself a compartment, an empty one where I could read. I pulled out the same book I usually read, Hogwarts: A History. Halfway between chapters, the door to my compartment opened. I looked up, seeing Ron with his same confused face, halfway smiling. "Hermione! You're crying!" He yelled. I had no idea what he was talking about. I felt my eyes, and they were very wet. I looked at Ron with a sorrowful face, and he came over to give me a hug. "Now, What's wrong?" Ron said, trying to understand, but he really wasn't. I spoke up, "Well it's just, Harry and Ginny. I mean, it's no fair!" I felt more hot tears run down my cheeks, and Ron held on even tighter.
END OF CHAPTER ONE
Ok please R/R.. I know it's not good but give me feedback; I wanna know what people think.