My first fanfic on here! I've been working on this for a while now. While the first chapter isn't super-long it sets up the story. I'm still a "n00b" so keep your flames to yourselves. Constructive criticism welcome.
The Complex of Haruhi Suzumiya
Chapter-
Complex Part 1
"I'm Haruhi Suzumiya from East Junior High. I'm not interested in ordinary people but if any of you are aliens,
time travellers or espers, please come see me. That is all."
Haruhi's little inroduction monolouge at the first day of school. It will forever be burned into my memory.
"Yuki Nagato." Yuki Nagato. Alien.
"Allow me to introduce Mikuru Asahina!" Mikuru Asahina. Time traveller.
"I'm Itsuki Koizumi. How do you do?" Itsuki Koizumi. Esper.
All those 'irregular' students just so happen to attend our school. An alien, a time traveller and even an esper!
And how did I get involved. And why? Why did Haruhi 'choose' me? How do they all know me and everything about me?
Does Haruhi know about this mess in some way? I've been pondering this for such a long time. I feel like I'll explode any minute now.
I'm outside my school on a Sunday afternoon. Alone.
"Kyon?" I hear a soft voice behind me say. I turn around to see Ms. Asahina there.
"Ms. Asahina?"
She giggles slightly. "Just call me Mikuru. You don't have to be so formal all the time. Anyway, we've come to warn you!" Her voice suddenly turn darker.
Wait... "WE've come?" I say.
"That's right." I hear another voice say. I turn to my side and see Koizumi and Nagato.
"...well I don't know what's going on, but shoot!"
Itsuki chuckles. "It's about you and Ms. Suzumiya." He says.
"Me and Haruhi? Again? Is it like the last time?" Ugh... that time. In the Closed Space.
"We're not sure. But a colossal event is most certainly creeping up on us all. The Agency isn't sure if it's the 'end of the world as we know it' again but it's definetely something. Something big." Itsuki says, forebodingly.
Sigh... "That's all you can tell me? Just vague clues?" I groan.
"We do not currently possess enough data to throughoutly inform you," Nagato says, "but what we're absolutely sure of is-"
"Kyon? Kyon?"
Huh? A... dream? I suddenly find myself in my small, one-person bedroom. It recently got repainted to cobalt.
"KYOOOON?!" I hear my mom shout.
Sigh... "Whaaaaat?" I half-heartedly say.
"Your friend is here to see you!"
...wait... friend? What friend? Oh. God. Please don't let it be...
"HEY KYON!" I hear a far-too-familiar voice shout as the door to my bedroom is slammed shut.
"Ugh... Haruhi, don't you have a life or something? I mean, to come and wake me up on a Sunday morning-"
"It's 2 in the afternoon."
...I look at my alarm clock and to my horror I see "14:07" flashing smugly. I groan. Loudly. Haruhi looked at me and smirked evilly. She was wearing a red t-shirt, a pink skirt and white sneakers.
"Now go on, get dressed and come with me. We've got a buuuuusy day ahead of us. 3" Haruhi says in such a foreboding manner I might just give up and die already.
"Alright, alright. I'm getting up. Now go wait outside."
"Huh?"
I stare at her menacingly. I really hope she takes the hint.
"Riiiiiight..." she said, smugly, slowly walking out.
"HIIIII!" I hear my sister yell. Should keep her busy, for a little while at least. I slip into generic white t-shirt and jeans.
"Well, are we going?" I hear myself say as I open the door.
"Sure," Haruhi says bluntly, "bye, sis." Oh, great. They've formed THAT bond.
"You two play nice now." My mom says, smiling. I grin uncomfortably at her.
Haruhi walks along the road and I follow, waiting for her to fill me in on this little venture.
...any minute now...
...ah, screw it!
"So, Haruhi, where exactly are we going?" I ask her. She stops and turns around, smiling wide.
"I'm SO glad you asked me that." Dammit. She was waiting for it!
"A mysterious 'accident' occured outside the town," she began.
What? She dragged me out of bed for an 'accident'? "...umm... and?" I ask.
"A car crashed."
"So? Cars crash all the time!"
"Not like this!"
"How excactly is 'this'?"
"There was no driver! The car didn't collide with anything, either. It just... blew up! The police didn't find any traces of explosives, either!"
Hm? That's odd. But here has to be a logical explanation, right?
"Well, hasn't the police confiscated the car by now?" I ask her. She smiles even wider, worrying me.
"If they have... we'll just have to 'convince' them to let us look..." she says, smiling deviously. After that onimous remark she continued walking.
"So, is it just us or is the whole Brigade involved?" I ask her.
"I called Itsuki and asked him to contact Mikuru and Yuki and tell them to meet me outside our school."
"So, what exactly do you plan to do? Give me details."
"I'll tell you ALL about it, once we get there..."
And there's the first chapter! Tell me what's good about it, how I could improve etc. Stay tuned for
The Complex of Haruhi Suzumiya- Part 2