Tiny poems just about how I am feeling at the moment. Every new poem will be put into a new chapter of this little thing.
First Chapter; Poem 1: Gone
You wrote poems about me in your head
Well here is one for you, my love
You are a stupid hypocrite and I hate you
Don't let yourself fall because I wont save you
And I can care less about what do or say
I know you care, so don't walk away
You walk around with your head held high, but I can see
The sadness in your eye
You selfish prick, you think you've done nothing wrong
Think again because now I am gone
You've lost me now and its all your fault
How could you be so heartless? You never called!
All feelings for you have diminished because you didn't care
Well I don't care, I wouldn't have answered
Your exsistence is nothing to me, you worthless bastard
Here is a verse for you from my song:
Damn you to hell where you belong.
Original:
You're a stupid hypocrite and I hate you
Don't let yourself fall because I wont save you
I can care less about what you say or do
The fath that you are hurting me, you have no clue
You walk around with your head held high,
But I can see the sadness in your eye
You selfish prick you think you done nothing wrong
Think again, because now I'm gone
You've lost me now and its all your fault
Just leave me alone and don't try and call
Because I wont answer, I don't care
Damn you to hell where you belong.
I wrote this at school at my anger towards someone close to me. Where it says Original, that's what I wrote at school. The first one is how I fixed it up. Please, in all my poems that have the original one, please on your review tell me which one you like better. In my opinion, the first one is from the heart and is deeper. But just vote on reviews. I will update this whenever I write a poem. No telling how long. I can only write when its about my own life :) hope you enjoy! Bye for now :D