Hello, I am starting to write again. I just wanted to see what others have to say about what I write and to give me something to do since I'm getting bored and the fanfics i read arn't being updated very often.

Disclaimer: I don't own the guy with the fuzzy, white, dog ears and silver hair.

Warning: Cursing, rape, lemon, citrus, drug use, misspelling of words and anything maybe used in this story. So I warn you so that I don't get in trouble.

Chapter 1-In the Begining

Life, many treasure it but I wish I didn't have it. My life as it is has been messed-up, why don't I explain it to you more clearly. My mother is always on the run(from the cops that is), my boyfriend beats me, my dad is a drunk, and I'm made fun of at school. Who am I? Well, I can tell you that, I am Kagome. I have dark black hair with blue tints in it; brown, chocolate eyes; fair skin; and a skinny body(in which my body has bruises and scars from my so-called 'boyfriend')

If you want to know how my life got to this place, lets start at the beginning of the school year. In which, is where our story begins.

five moths earlier

I was walking to school because I am only 15 years old and a freshman at the new high school just built down the street during the summer. I have no friends because they moved to America during last year, but I'm not going to let this get me down. No, never, I have a chance to make new better friends that will respect me.

My friends always tried to make me go out with a guy named Hojo. I think this year I might just go out with him so that my friends will be happy and he would be too.

As I was walking along, Hojo walked beside me but I didn't notice him at first, only 'cause I was thinking of how to make this year better than the last. He tapped me on the shoulder and like anyone would do, i practically jumped a foot in the air... well, to tell you the truth I did jump that high. I took my hand and covered my heart so that it would slow down and turned toward him.

"Oh, hello Kagome. I'm sorry if I scared you, I didn't mean to at all." He said with sorrow in his voice and eyes.

"Its ok Hojo, I wasn't really paying attention, just thinking about everything and anything you know."I told him so he wouldn't freak about the heart attack he almost gave me."Anyways, how was your summer? Any thing different happen?"

"Not really, it was about the same as last year you know. Went to take care of my grandma and made sure she would be alright. Nothing to special. You?"

"Well, to tell you the truth... I went to a camp and learned archery, I'm pretty good at it except that when the targets moved I missed the bulls-eye."

"That sounds good Kagome. Well, since were at school, I'm going to head over to where my other friends are, see you later."he said while running off.

"ok, Bye Hojo."I yelled. I walked over to a tree with a bench under it since school doesn't start for 15 minutes at least. While sitting there, someone walked behind me and pushed me.

"Get up!" they yelled"Don't make me push you again, because I don't want to get sent to the office on the first day. So get UP!" What that being said, I pushed myself off the ground and turned around. There she was, the slut of the school. She, of course, was wearing the shortest skirt the school allowed, let alone the tightest shirt, it barely fit enough to be buttoned. Compared to my knee length skirt and loose button-up shirt to her clothes, I looked like I was wearing snow pants and a big coat.

Looking her in the eyes, she looked at me evilly and stared to smile, but not any normal smile, a twisted one like she was going to kill someone and show off the body. "What are you looking at? Are you a lesbian or something? Because if you are you should think twice, for one thing you couldn't get someone like me for I'm not a les. Also I'm taken, and to speak of the devil, their's my little Inu baby right there. Inuyasha, oh Inuyasha! Come here sweetly."She said while a guy with long silver hair came over and her putting her hands around."This is mine, so remember... wait, what's your name?"she asked with a slutest tone in it.

"Its Kagome, and no I am not a lesbian, I was just seeing who pushed me down." Oh, that just made her get mad.

"So, Kagome it is? Well, I was about to let you know that this guy here,"she pointed to Inuyasha with her free arm" is the reason you can't have me but, since you made it clear you don't want me then I guess were cool, unless you look at me the wrong way or get in my way. You got it?"

"Yea, I got it. But as I can see it is time for school to start soon so I'm going inside. Bye.."I started to say but stared to twist my hand around as to say 'what's your name'.

"Kikyou."

"Oh, sorry. Well, I got to go, bye Kikyou."I was saying that while running off.

Hello again.

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