This is my attempt to write another story after giving up on my last title to the story has nothing to do with the the actual story as far as I'm concerned. Wish me luck!!
Disclaimer:I own none of the characters in here except for my OCs. So don't sue me for having an imagination.
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"Usagi, don't come any closer!! I can handle this on my own, I don't need you getting hurt."
"But Big Brother, I want to help! I know I can do it!!. Don't you have faith in me?!" This fighting is starting to get worse and now he's fixing to fall of the cliff! I better do something!!!!!!!
"I do have faith in you but-"
"AHHHHHH"
"AHHHHHHHHH-"
"Man, I've been having the same dream, or maybe I should call it nightmare, for the past two weeks. My throat is hurting from waking up screaming every day."
This is the story of me, Usagi, a four-foot-four-inch tall cream-colored hair girl slash Soul Reaper.
I've been looking for my older brother for what seems like ages(which most likely is true since I'm a Soul Reaper, duh!). I'm hiding under-cover in the World of the Living trying to try and find him here.
So far.....no luck. All these humans are so rude! I get called midget every day and almost every-one who walks past me asks "Are you lost little girl?" and occasionally I hear "Where is your mother little one? You know it's not safe for a grade-school kid to be walking around alone."
And you know what they get as a response? "SHUT THE HELL UP!!!! I am NOT a little girl, I'm just a really short teenager. Got that?!"
Yeah I'm short but, I do pack a punch. And I know how to use my little girl innocence look to get these humans to buy me things that I don't have money for. I'm just good like that.
But never mind all that stuff, I think I sense a Hollow.
"Let's check it to see if it's worthy of being defeated by me."
By the time I had got there, some other jerk had just finished taking care of it. Damn, I wanted to beat the hollow up! It's no fair, I'm gonna go yell at the stupid jerk!
"Hey, Jerk-face! It's not fair to keep all the Hollows to yourself, some others might want to beat the stupid-"
I stopped talking after I had gotten a good look at the guy who had already turned around and was staring at me like I was crazy.
I thought I was weird, but this dude made me feel sorta normal. He had orange looking hair and carried this huge Zanpaku-to. I need to make a mental not to not make this dude mad.
After staring at me for a while he finally spoke. "Hey, I've seen you before. Don't you go to the same school as me? And you can see me?!"
"Yeah, I do. Most people know me as the short girl. And yeah I can see you! I'm a Soul Reaper, didn't you hear me shouting about how you were killing all the stupid hollows and not sharing them!?"
"Sorry 'bout that. Guess I wasn't paying any attention."
"Got that right Orangey."
"Who you calling 'Orangey' little midget?!"
"You. You haven't told me your name yet, so I figured I'd call ya Orangey since your hair is Orange. Is that a natural color or did you have to dye it to get it like that?"
"I'm Ichigo Kurosaki, and I didn't dye my hair? It's natural....."
"So since you know who I am, who are your and what's your business here?"
"I am Usagi and I'm here looking for my brother who I have lost years ago."
"And how has that gone for you?"
"Not good. I haven't gotten a single clue."
"Well would you like some help? I might be able to help you somehow."
Wow, some guy I just met has offered to help look for my brother. Maybe I should let him help me.... but how do I know if he's not gonna take advantage of me and hurt me? Eh, I guess I should trust him seeing as he hasn't tried to hurt me yet, and he might be useful to me later on.
"Alright. I'll let you help me as long as you don't try do hurt me. Oh, and one more thing, do you mind if I hang around you? I really don't have any friends and I would like someone to talk to every once in a while."
"Sure. I guess, it's probably not gonna be much better hanging around me either. But it may work out for the both of us."
"Yaaay! I made me a friend! I'm so happy! And I need a place to stay! 'Cause I live underneath a bridge and people stare at me weird!"
"You sure are optimistic for a homeless girl."
"Yes I am! I try to see the brighter things in life sometimes. Sooo can I stay with you, please?"
"I don't think that's such a good idea.."
*insertpuppydogeyes* "Pleeeeeeeeeeaaaseeeeee?"
"Alright. Come on. But don't say I didn't warn you."
"Yaaaaaay! I get to stay with Berry-boy!!!!"
"If you're planning on staying don't ever call me that again, got that?"
"Sure." "I can tell your gonna take the fun out of everything" I mumbled under my breath.
"Huh?"
"Nothing!" I smiled trying to act all innocent. "Let's get going. I'm hungry!"
And all was quiet until we got to his house......
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I hope that wasn't too bad. I think I put too much dialogue in it and the Ichigo was OOC but I think I might keep him like that. And I might have made the story move too fast.(I'm very self-criticizing so you have to excuse me...) I thought it was pretty good since I was writing as I was thinking this story up. It just all came to me.... I'll think I'll get more into depth with my OCs within the next few chapters.
So tell me what you think. Is it good, bad, tell me how I need to improve it if I need to.
