Alright this is my first fan fiction so can everyone who reads this tell me if it needs anything ?

I don't NOT own any of the twilight characters. Sadly :(


Gone.

He was gone. He doesn't love me anymore.

Instead of feeling pain,in my heart, I felt hatred flowing through my body. I've never felt this much hate in my whole entire life.

Edward fucking Cullen left me to die. He took my best friend away, Alice.

When I would think about Alice.. I felt pain radiate all over my body. Had I only liked her as a friend? Or was there something more.. I tried to remember all those times I would be with her.

All the hugs, and the sleep overs. I felt the tears threatening to flow. I wish my little pixie was here with me. I needed her in my life. She was like a drug to me. Her smell was way better than Edwards.

I went to bed, trying to remember all our times together. That is when I had my first dream of Alice. We were shopping. How ironic is that?

"Come on Bella!" Alice practically yelled. She really did love her shopping.

"Alice ! No more shopping please?" I whined. I hated shopping, but if it made Alice happy I would do it. Alice smirked and walked right in to a lingerie shop. I walked in right behind Ali. Alice started trying on different kinds of lingerie. I was sitting down on a chair they had. Then Alice walks out in a blue lacy bra and a blueish black garter.

As soon as I see Alice, I blush furiously. She asks" what do you think?"

I said it looks nice, while blushing. Alice then says its my turn. I started protesting, but Alice gave me her puppy dog face. She looked so cute when she did that. I finally gave in. I tried on a pink lacy bra and a pink garter. I didn't look so bad in this. I walked out to ask Alice what she thought about it. Her eyes darkened just a little bit when she saw me. "Well?" I ask nervously.

"Uhm.. i..it looks cute on you." She mumbles shyly. I was shocked, Alice Cullen never stuttered.

My dream ended before it even finished. As I start to get out of bed, I noticed someone in my yard, watching me. My heart stopped when I saw her.

Ha ha well what do you think ? who do you think is watching her ? I'm thinking about this story going to different ways but i'm not sure yet hmmmm. Pleassee review and tell me if its good ?