Hi everybody!

This is my first fanfic(also my first publish of anything than essays for school) so please don't hate me if it isn't as good as others. I will accept constructive criticism. N

Have Fun and hope you enjoy!

Percy POV

I am having the worst day of my life, and it started right when I fell asleep last night. I guess I should probably explain. See, last night I had a dream where I saw kronos rise from Tartarus (A/N: please review if I misspelled that).

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I see a weird looking muscular outline of a man, and behind him a cliff. By the sound of the echoes after the man said "FINALLY! I am back! And I shall get my revenge on that retched Perseus Jackson." I flinched at the sound of my full name. After that he went to his palace on top of Mt. Othrys, which somehow rebuilt itself from when Jason Grace, yes Thalia's brother, tore it down during the second titan war.

Kronos somehow knew I was there and said "well, well, well what do we have here? An eavesdropper? Let's see…" uh oh "AHA! Percy Jackson!"Dang. "You shouldn't be here now should you?" And then I saw Kronos take out his scythe and just before it hit me I woke up drenched in sweat.

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All of a sudden Mark, my really annoying half-brother who is very conceited, arrived at camp a couple of weeks ago, and since then he has been ruining my life. First it was minor things starting with snide comments like "what a loser". I just rolled my eyes and kept walking. Obviously that angered him so he started going after my friends.

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First he took my friend Clarisse by saying I was talking trash about Ares and then blaming me for braking Maimer, her favorite spear. And then he took Nico by using his powers with the water to pick up the entire lake and drop it on him and blaming me for it, and as if that wasn't enough he also had the powers to create earthquakes so he created a fissure in the ground to make Nico fall in and blamed THAT on me too.

But I still had Thalia, Grover and my girlfriend Annabeth. Whatever Mark tried he couldn't take Thalia, Grover or Annabeth away from me. That is until Mark broke all of Thalia's arrows and her favorite bow given to her by Artemis herself. Thalia came to my cabin to confront me about it after getting a tipoff from Mark saying that he saw Percy acting suspicious around her cabin that day. I said I was at my training classes the whole day which was the truth, and she still didn't believe me. But I still had Grover and Annabeth thank the gods.

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During breakfast the next day I decided to skip so that I could make Annabeth a ring to propose to her because we were 18 now going on 19. I asked Grover to help and he said "I would love to help!" After we finished it was around lunch time. I swam down into the lake and asked my dad to send me to his palace so I could ask him a favor. He did and I asked him to bless the ring. He said yes and 10 minutes later he came back and told us it was blessed I told him "thanks" and he said "good luck!"And then I found myself at the beach and I didn't believe my eyes! Annabeth was kissing Mark!

The whole camp was there even the gods. They were cheering them on. I saw my dad and he said "You're a lucky one Annabeth, getting to date the greatest hero of all time!" and then I saw a hydra head in Marks hands. Poseidon's voice shook me out of my thoughts "Mark, My favorite son, you will be granted immortality for your brave feat!" "Annabeth" I said "How could you? And dad right after you blessed my ring."

"Hey Perce!" said Mark "good to see you again, where have you been?" I said "Shut up! Why Annabeth?" Annabeth said "it isn't what it looks li-" "REALLY? BECAUSE IT LOOKS LIKE YOU WERE MAKING OUT WITH MARK! MY OWN BROTHER!" "Percy calm down." Said Poseidon. DON'T TELL ME TO CALM DOWN POSEIDON! I said Poseidon with so much venom in it he flinched. "AND TO THINK I WAS GOING TO PROPOSE TO YOU ANNABETH! I said while throwing down the ring into the sand. After that I ran to my cabin not even looking to see if anyone was chasing me, tears streaming down my face as I met Grover on the way to my cabin.

What do you think? Was it good for a first try? Bad? All tips are welcome and review please!