I don't own Inuyasha or the song. I want you to guess who the man is in the
Story and tell me in a review.
"I was a heavy heart to carry
My beloved was weighed down
My arms around his neck
My fingers laced to crown."
If you looked at her, you would think that she had it all. The perfect
husband, the perfect music career, and a perfect life. Yet that was where
people made the mistake. She had nothing, but her career and home. Yet even
then she had nothing. There was nothing left for her. He took everything from
her, yet didn't care. Their marriage was a joke, and the sad thing was that she
had nothing to show for it. After all those years of 'love and happiness' , you
would think that he loved her.
"I was a heavy heart to carry
My feet dragged across ground
And he took me to the river
Where he slowly let me drown" she sung. Her song expressed how she felt. Her
heartbreak and sadness was poured into every word she sung. He used her to
get famous and when he got what he wanted, he left. He didn't give a damn
about her. Hell he truthfully didn't marry her. The marriage was a fake. Her
wedding was a fake. Everything was a fake!
"My love has concrete feet
My love's an iron ball
Wrapped around your ankles
Over the waterfall" she sung as tears started to fall. her bandmates/ fellow
singers could do nothing but play and watched as the female slowly broke.
Yet they felt for her. She didn't deserve what he did to her. She didn't deserve
to be broken by the one man she loved.
"I'm so heavy, heavy
Heavy in your arms
I'm so heavy, heavy
Heavy in your arms" she sung as the crowd felt her pain and sorrow. People in
the crowd could do nothing as their favorite singer slowly break in front of
them.
The concert was over thirty minutes. Kagome thanked the crowd for coming
and walked offstage. As soon as she and her band was backstage, she broke.
Her tears flowed down her face like a waterfall, never seeming to come to an
end.
"WHY!" she cried out as her friends came to comfort her.
" We don't know kagome, we can't answer that" Sango said. She couldn't say
That everything would be ok. To her and everybody else, that would be the
most stupid thing to say.
"Why did he do this to me? Why did he have to hurt me?" she said as her tears
fell to the ground.
Yes, why did kagome have to suffer? Why am I doing this to her? That can't be
answer, because even I don't know the answer to the question. So how did I
do? Good? Bad? Tell me fellow readers! I need a beta! Anybody who is good at
editing, please talk to me. And readers, tell me how to improve! ~Emiko13