Here dawns the pathway

Of never-ending mists:

For this is how it is each day

Hidden beneath my soul mate's crypt.

As I fall from thought,

Dreams tempt me with sweet lies,

And my sole dream sought

Could be that I am free of pained cries.

This cruel temple has so many ghosts

All of which poison my soul.

I can feel my mind linger

On the delicious borderline of life and my body of coal.

This harsh place is such a fucking bitch,

And I cannot continue to live:

This fucking life of mine is just one big glitch,

Full of mistakes that I cannot sieve.

Tears of crimson depart from my weary vessel

Stained by the streams of blood…

My surroundings blur and blacken,

And I am left in miserable mud.

Razors fall from my filthy hands

The damage finally done:

I cannot believe just one person could affect these lands:

Could blacken its barren landscapes further, my body falling numb.

He pushed me too far

And abused my shell, he abused my fucking shell…

He will never know how much I miss that star –

The sanctuary of where I should still dwell.

He never gave a shit, never gave a fuck,

And I never struck him back –

All he could ever to do me was hit and hate,

Beat me until my body was black.

This void of torment will always be

As long as I remain in this misery:

My vessel can no longer hurt, yet living with he

Fuels my hatred for his delivery.

My divine ending is near,

Rattling chains lift and set me free:

I am finally gone from this fucking world,

The only good thing he's ever helped do to me.

My wounds begin to heal,

And it is now that I can express how relieved I feel…

How glorious I feel inside…

How I am ravenous for more of this kind of meal.

He is away from me now:

Nothing can hurt me where I am,

And I smile, for the first time ever…

Knowing that I am far away… from my yami.

Yami's koi: there you go, my crappy attempt at poetry. I got bored, so… yeah. This is the result. And look! I used symbolism. 'On the delicious borderline of life and my body of coal,' means Ryou's body is too dirty to live. 'Full of mistakes that I cannot sieve,' means that there are so many mistakes that he can't be forgiven.

Neutral Man: I won't say anything because she knows how sucky this was.

Yami's koi: yeah… sighs Later gies… review and tell me just how lame this was… or how not. Which ever you comment on, I'll be astonished by. Trust me.