Here dawns the pathway
Of never-ending mists:
For this is how it is each day
Hidden beneath my soul mate's crypt.
As I fall from thought,
Dreams tempt me with sweet lies,
And my sole dream sought
Could be that I am free of pained cries.
This cruel temple has so many ghosts
All of which poison my soul.
I can feel my mind linger
On the delicious borderline of life and my body of coal.
This harsh place is such a fucking bitch,
And I cannot continue to live:
This fucking life of mine is just one big glitch,
Full of mistakes that I cannot sieve.
Tears of crimson depart from my weary vessel
Stained by the streams of blood…
My surroundings blur and blacken,
And I am left in miserable mud.
Razors fall from my filthy hands
The damage finally done:
I cannot believe just one person could affect these lands:
Could blacken its barren landscapes further, my body falling numb.
He pushed me too far
And abused my shell, he abused my fucking shell…
He will never know how much I miss that star –
The sanctuary of where I should still dwell.
He never gave a shit, never gave a fuck,
And I never struck him back –
All he could ever to do me was hit and hate,
Beat me until my body was black.
This void of torment will always be
As long as I remain in this misery:
My vessel can no longer hurt, yet living with he
Fuels my hatred for his delivery.
My divine ending is near,
Rattling chains lift and set me free:
I am finally gone from this fucking world,
The only good thing he's ever helped do to me.
My wounds begin to heal,
And it is now that I can express how relieved I feel…
How glorious I feel inside…
How I am ravenous for more of this kind of meal.
He is away from me now:
Nothing can hurt me where I am,
And I smile, for the first time ever…
Knowing that I am far away… from my yami.
Yami's koi: there you go, my crappy attempt at poetry. I got bored, so… yeah. This is the result. And look! I used symbolism. 'On the delicious borderline of life and my body of coal,' means Ryou's body is too dirty to live. 'Full of mistakes that I cannot sieve,' means that there are so many mistakes that he can't be forgiven.
Neutral Man: I won't say anything because she knows how sucky this was.
Yami's koi: yeah… sighs Later gies… review and tell me just how lame this was… or how not. Which ever you comment on, I'll be astonished by. Trust me.
