Time Stands Still

Chapter 1

This is the intro which is gonna be really short. But its just like a intro for right now.

I run towards him smiling, reaching out my hand

Going Through all this, I finally understand

Why we have to endure all this

It's so we can enjoy these moments of bliss

But it happened so fast. Weren't we doing just fine?

My heart began to race as your hand slipped through mine

I stared in horror as you fell to the ground

Ignoring the chaos that was surely around

"Get that man behind him!" I faintly hear somebody yell

Was it Soujiro or Akira? Don't know. Couldn't tell

I grabbed him and pulled him up into my arms

Now it's my turn to save him from harm

I stood up, glaring at the people around me

As I walked us away, my clothes became bloody

On the way to the hospital, I pray and I pray

"Please Domyouji. Please be okay."

So it's short right now, but the next one will be longer. Should I include the interaction with Umi and Tsukasa's mother, or just have it be between Tsukasa and Tsukushi? Reviews and critiques are welcomed.