Hello^^ This is my first Fanfiction ever. I suck at story writing so i do it to improve my english skills and writing skills. I'm 15Years old and live in Switzerland. (Male)
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„Katie dear, where are you?" i shouted at the Strawberry-Field.
I wanted to take a Strawberry when vineflower holded my hand.
„What do you want in the Strawberry-Fields Stoll ?" I heard a voice behind me and i knew who this voice belongs to.
„Katie dear, i looked out for you" i said and looked to Katie. She stood there her arms crossed in front of me. She had black hair and brown eyes. 'She is beautiful' i thought but shook mentally my head on that thought because i had to answer Katies question. „Dont be so rude Katie and take a chillpill" i said and smiled at her. Katie started to look annoyed.
„You plan a prank on me Stoll ?" she asked me. I just smiled at that because my brother Connor and me loved to prank her and the Demeter cabin where she belongs to. But i wasn't here for pranking her. I liked Katie since i faced death at the battle of Olympus. Everytime i head a girl scream i was scared that Katie might be dead. I was pranking her for getting some attention from her. Hey im a son of Hermes, not of Aphrodite, love isn't my strong side. But honestly i love how she freaks out at the pranks and tries to kill me and Connor. Today i wanted to ask her out to the campfire. I know that it sounds weird but yeah, what should i do ?
„No, i wanted to ask you out for campfire." i said nervously. Maybe i also blushed a little bit.
Katie looked shocked.
„I dont know Travis, i hate you and also think that you are cute." she said.
„C'mon give me a chance, i wont prank anyone." i said with my legendary puppy face.
„Finde Travis, but if this is a p-" Katie said. Behind her stood Connor and in his hand where a bottle of Water. He let the water fall over her hair and gave me a thumbs up
I was so shocked that Connor stood behind her. „Yeah Travis we got her" Connor said but i didn't listen to him i was watching Katie how tears fell down her cheek. She pushed me away and ran to her cabin. „Katie wait i di-" i wanted to say more but she already ran into her cabin and smashed the door behind her. Now i turned back to Connor and saw him smiling. I faced him with full anger in my eyes. „CONNOR!" i shouted and he went a step back. „I JUST ASKED KATIE OUT FOR CAMPFIRE YOU IDIOT !" i shouted so loud that maybe people in China heard it. Connor looked confused and shocked. „I-I'm sorry Travis – I'm really sorry." he said with scared expression.
„Now Katie hates me, because of you!" i said and putted my hands in front of my face. Connor looked ashamed. „Connor, i love her and got the nuts for asking her out but then you come and destroy everything. Why Connor, why ?" i asked him.
„I dont know normally you like pranking her, i didn't knew that you love her. You never told me that. If i knew it i woudln't have done that. Travis im really sorry please forgive me, you know i dont want to hurt you." Connor said with sadness. I didnt expect that.
„It's okay but could you tell Katie that i am not responsible for that ? Please, else i dont have any chances." i asked him with some hope in it.
„Sure i will, i will apologise for all." he said and walked to the Demeter cabin. He knocked on the door. After a while one of Katie siblings came out. Conno and the girl talked a little bit but then she went inside and closed the door. Connor walked back with his head looking down. When he reached me his eyes were filled with sadness. „She dont wanted listen to me." he said being sorry.
„It's okay, you tryed" i said with a fake smile. „I will talk to her when she comes out." i told him. He just nodded at that and went straight to the Hermes cabin.