You are making me hot
Summary: Takes place at the beginning of the matrix, before Neo is freed, Trinity is watching him at the monitors and let her thoughts flow, while her desire is growing...
Disclaimer: None of these characters are mine:-)
Please, don't be too hard with your critism. English isn't my mother tongue, but I tried my best .I am not sure about this one, it's just a kind of experiment, I tried to write something different than usually, I hope I could describe Trinity's feelings when she's all alone at night, full of love and very lonley. Please read and review, I have to know what you think about it!!!!!!!!
Trinity's Pov:
Once more it is dark and cold in the real world, outside of the matrix, but I don't feel it the heat is growing within my body and I want you more than anything else in these rare moments. I let fall my guards and am following my desires when I'm watching you, you are making me hot. Than I am not the soldier anymore, but the woman who wants to be loved. I can't think about anything else but you, every day and night I observe you trying to imagine how your hands would feel on my body, how it will respond to the electricity of your touches.
When you are changing your clothes I am blushing and want to turn my face away, but my eyes are too fascinated from the muscles of your body, hard but also supple, making me sweat of desire. All the time I never talked to you, but I feel as if I've known you all my life and every secret of your soul is obvious to me like an open book. Do you feel the same?Deep in your heart, do you know that I am watching you for months? I think you do, when you toss and turn every night in your dreams, i can read your lips, when they are whispering my name...over and over again....and it is getting hotter from my toes until my lips. Like I know you had just a few affairs for one night in your life, the women were always very nice and pretty, but none of them could win your heart, because it was waiting for mine .I even watched you when you've had sex with those, you are a little shy but very passionate lover. When I see melting your bodies I am full of anger and desire of you and myself. The ship is dark and quiet and I can let fall my hard shell and admit that I am jealous. Your hands should touch me, even your thoughts are not allowed to left me, but you can't see me, my hopes, desires and my love. I'm like your invisible angel who protects and watches you, but I want to be your lover who sets everything on fire when our bodies come together. I want to shout out "Take me" but also leave me alone!These feelings are so new, strange and intense I want even to die than being one more minute without you. Every morning I wake with a pain in my heart when I realize that you are not at my side or in the arms of another woman within the matrix. I know that nothing of it is real, but it doesn't make anything of it better. I feel soft and wake and I hate it!In moments like these, before the monitors when everyone is sleeping you're making me hot. Let me control your body to make yourself loose control, until you know that you can't live without me.
My body trembles and I want just to hold you in my arms, saying stay with me forever, I'll never let you go,when I start to cry like every night.
What do you think?Good?Bad?Continuation or not?Please review!