Hey there FutureShock here and I am doing a little edit to this story, I have re-read it and noticed a few things. Apart from grammar errors the pacing is a little too fast, and I want to slow it down a bit. I will probably add a chapter or two just to add more detail and squeeze some more out of the story. So sit back relax and enjoy.

Chapter One: Feelings

It was a nice sunny day in Ponyville, Rainbow Dash had just finished clearing the clouds and everything was peaceful. It was so nice that Pinkie Pie had the idea of having a picnic, and luckily for her the rest of the Mane 6 were on board. Pinkie Pie bounced around and invited everypony, some of them still had to finish up a few things before the picnic. While waiting on the others Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash set it up at the location, they laid down the blanket and took out the cupcakes and drinks Pinkie brought.

Rainbow Dash smiled as she put on her shades. "You know Pinkie, sometimes you have some good ideas." That got a huge smile out of the pink pony.

"Thanks Rainbow Dash, you know I've always said that I had good ideas but nopony would listen to them before and that always made me sa..." She was interrupted by Rainbow putting her hoof over her mouth.

"Let's not spoil the moment." Pinkie Pie just nodded.

A few moments later Twilight, Rarity and Fluttershy came in view of the picnic area, which made the two ponies who were already there cheer. Twilight was organizing her library, Fluttershy was feeding her animals and Rarity had been taking inventory on her fabric. "Hey girls, sorry were late." Twilight said as the three of them had arrived at the picnic.

"Oh it's no big deal, but now we can finally start this picnic! Pinkie shouted which in turn made everypony cheer.

"Alright is everypony ready?" The unicorn asked and they all nodded their heads, well not all of them because somepony wasn't there.

"Hey where's AppleJack, she should have been here by now?" Rainbow Dash flew around but saw no signs of AJ. It was strange why wasn't AppleJack there, normally she would never miss a get together with her friends.

"She must still be at Sweet Apple Acres, she must still have chores to do." Fluttershy noted sadly. Everypony started to become sad, and a little guilty that their friend was working while they were relaxing. It just didn't feel right to them, so somepony was going to have to check on her.

Twilight knew that only one of them needed to go to Sweet Apple Acres to get AppleJack. "Somepony should go check on her, who wants to go?"

"I'll do it, I need to stretch my hooves anyway." Rarity volunteered and since nopony else had an objection she went off. The picnic spot wasn't that far away from Sweet Apple Acres, it was only about a five minute walk. On her walk she was enjoying the gorgeous scenery, it was days like this that Rarity enjoyed the most. Apart from her dresses Rarity did love a nice walk, and today was quite the day for a walk. She finally arrived at Sweet Apple Acres and saw Applejack bucking trees, luckily there weren't that many trees left to buck.

"AppleJack dear are you ready for... the..." For some reason Rarity couldn't help but stare at Applejack, and it wasn't because she was dirty. There was something about the orange earth pony bucking the trees in the sunlight that made Rarity think, it was as if she was under some sort of spell. She just couldn't help herself, she was locked in a trance at the sight of AppleJack.

"Umm Rarity what ar' y'all looking at?" Rarity snapped out of her trance and saw the orange pony standing in front of her, with a confused look on her face.

"Oh, nothing darling I was just... deep in thought." Luckily for Rarity, AppleJack believed her.

"Well I guess we should head to the picnic." They both headed to the picnic but along the way Rarity couldn't help but stare at AppleJacks' flank. She was also thinking about her a lot, but they weren't innocent thoughts... they were desires. Rarity's head was full of weird emotions, it's like something just came over her and she was all of a sudden infatuated with AppleJack. Unfortunately for her they had arrived at the picnic, so she would have to push those thoughts away.

"Hey Rarity and AppleJack are here!" Rainbow Dash shouted and the rest of the Mane six started cheering, they could finally get this picnic started.

"So AppleJack how did your chores go?" Fluttershy asked.

"They weren't too bad, I got em all done didn't I?" Everypony laughed and they all started eating the cupcakes that Pinkie Pie brought.

She had brought twenty four of them, so each pony got four. "You've out done yourself Pinkie Pie, these cupcakes are mighty delicious!" AppleJack exclaimed as she took another bite of her cupcake, the others were thinking the same thing.

"This juice isn't too bad either." Twilight said which made them all giggle.

"This truly is a gorgeous... day..." Once again Rarity was staring at AppleJack, she just looked so beautiful eating that cupcake. Her mouth was covered in frosting and Rarity would have loved to lick it off. The white unicorn was trying not to think about it but she couldn't help it, she was having all of thoughts/desires and they were all about the earth pony.

That wasn't the first time she was staring at AJ, and unfortunately for her she was caught the last couple of times. "Uh... Rarity why do you keep staring at AppleJack?" Fluttershy asked and everypony looked at Rarity and made her extremely nervous. Rarity would have to think of something to say, because she wouldn't want her friends to know she was having feelings for AppleJack. It wouldn't be fair to drop a bombshell on all of friends at once.

"Oh... well, I uh... oh would you look at the time, I must be getting back to my boutique!" With that Rarity ran off and headed straight for her boutique, she was running as fast as her legs could take her. With the rate she was traveling it only took a couple of minutes, and once she got there she locked the door and started to relax.

'Come on Rarity get a grip, you musn't stare at AppleJack.' Rarity tried not to think about AJ but she couldn't help herself. There was something so enchanting about AppleJack that Rarity found so captivating. She was wondering why these thoughts were happening, never before has she felt like this about anypony. She took some deep breathes and grabbed a glass of water, she took a big gulp and was starting to relax. Since she needed to clear her head, Rarity decided to go upstairs and work on a new dress.

She made her way to her sewing room and thought about what fabric to use, but she just couldn't decide. Earlier today she had thought of the perfect dress, but now she couldn't even remember it. "Oh why can't I keep my head straight?!" Rarity shouted to nopony as she became frustrated. The only thoughts that came into her head were of AppleJack, she had no idea where they were coming from. Picturing AppleJack in all of her naked glory, Rarity felt the same urges as before come back. Suddenly there was a knock at her door, she went downstairs and looked out the window and saw it was Twilight. Rarity sighed and opened the door, it was probably a good thing that Twilight stopped by.

"Twilight my dear, please do come in." Twilight walked in and Rarity immediately closed the door behind her. "So what brings you to my boutique, would you like something to drink?" There was a moment of silence and Twilight just gave Rarity a look, I think she knew what was going on.

"So is there something between you and AppleJack?" Rarity's jaw nearly dropped to the floor, she kind of expected that was what Twilight was here for... but she wasn't expecting her to be so blunt. Then again Twilight Sparkle was one of the smartest ponies around, so it wouldn't have been too much of a stretch for her to assume something was up.

"What kind of crazy idea is that, I'm not thinking about AppleJack!" It's as if she was in denial. Twilight gave Rarity a confused look, because she knew something was up. It was hard to try and hide something from Twilight, she's very perceptive.

"Then why were you staring at her at the picnic?" Now things were starting to get awkward, Rarity was going to have to tell Twilight that she was developing feelings for AppleJack. Twilight was definitely too smart to fall for a lie, and it was probably better to just tell her the truth. She didn't know how her friend would take it but she needed to tell her.

"Oh Twilight, I think I have a crush on AppleJack!" Rarity threw herself at Twilight and broke down into tears. Twilight padded her on the shoulder and handed her a tissue to wipe the tears off of her face.

"But you two are so different, you're clean and she's dirty."

"I know we are different but when I saw her bucking apples, something just came over me." This was a lot to take in for Twilight, not only was one of her friends a lesbian but she had a crush on another one of her friends!

"So why don't you go tell AppleJack that you feel this way?" It's true she should tell AJ before something happens to prevent Rarity from telling her.

"But what if she doesn't have the same feelings about me that I have about her?"

Twilight put her hoof on Raritys' shoulder. "Well if you don't tell her then you will never know how she feels about you." Rarity thought about it, and realized her friend was right. If Rarity didn't talk to her she would never know if AppleJack had the same feelings.

"Alright Twilight, I shall go over to Sweet Apple Acres tomorrow and tell AppleJack how I really feel." The purple alicorn gave Rarity a nod and left the boutique, leaving her alone to think about how tomorrow would go down. The more she thought about the orange pony the more she got turned on, and she started to clop. This was actually the first time Rarity had ever clopped, and she was enjoying it. The thought of doing it seemed so... dirty, but to her surprise it was actually kind of nice.

"Oh AppleJack... that feels soo good." She moved her hoof around her pussy even faster, and moaned even louder. Luckily she was alone in the boutique otherwise it would have been harder to control herself. The more she rubbed the better it felt. "Keep going don't stop!"

She was now going faster than before, she was reaching the end. "I'm going to..." Just like that The purple maned unicorn came all over her floor, cum was pouring out of her vagina. Doing that tired her out so she used her magic to grab her 'reaction couch', she then decided to lie down and get some rest. Rarity was now more determined to tell AppleJack how she felt, but a few moments later she passed out on her couch. Rarity had a dream of her and AppleJack sitting on a hill in each others arms, it was a very good dream... until it ended right before they kissed.

She awoke a couple hours later when there was another knock at her door, so she cleaned up the 'stain' and opened the door. It was Pinkie Pie and she looked very excited. "Pinkie Pie darling, what brings you here?" Pinkie Pie kept on bouncing, causing Rarity to wonder how much sugar was in that ponys' body.

"Ooooh I've got great news!"

"What is it?" Pinkie Pie didn't stop bouncing which was starting to bother Rarity, she just wanted to know what this news was.

"There's going to be a celebration today for AppleJack's big sale in Canterlot!" Rarity remembered her talking about selling apples in Canterlot but she must have forgotten, it happened a little while ago and it didn't help that she had other 'things' on her mind.

"Everypony is going to be there, you should come too!"

"Is AppleJack going to be there?" That sounded like a stupid question but considering what Rarity was feeling it was legitimate.

"Of course silly, it is her party." Luckily Pinkie Pie didn't remember what happened at the picnic earlier, or maybe she just didn't think anything of it.

"Alright, so when is it?"

The pink pony smiled brightly. "Right now!" That barely gave Rarity any time to compose herself/mentally prepare herself for the party. She knew Pinkie Pie wouldn't let her miss the party so they left her boutique and Rarity locked it up... she had to hope for the best.

"Shall we darling?" They both headed toward the party and like Pinkie Pie said everypony was there having a good time. They caught up with the rest of the mane six but there was the slightest bit of tension in the air.

"Hey Rarity I'm glad you could make it." AppleJack gave Rarity a hug, which wasn't helping her control her desires.

Rarity let out a sheepish laugh before speaking to her friend. "Of course, I wouldn't miss this... for the world." AppleJack could tell something was wrong with her friend.

"Somethin' wrong sugarcube?"The yellow maned pony asked.

Rarity let out a sigh and whispered into AppleJacks' ear. "I'll tell you tomorrow, meet me at my boutique." AppleJack was a little bit confused but she gave Rarity a nod and the party continued normally. It wasn't too over the top but it was a party none the less, there were games, food and plenty of partying. Occasionally Rarity would glance over at her crush, she liked what she saw but was careful to be discrete. Everypony else seemed to enjoy the party as well, and all in all it was a great party.

After a couple of hours the party had ended, which left everypony feeling worn out. "Wow that party was awesome!" Rainbow Dash shouted and the rest of the Mane six agreed, but the party went on so long it was suddenly night time. Sometimes ponies can lose track of the time at a Pinkie Party.

"It's getting pretty late and I'd best be getting home, thanks again y'all for coming out." Everypony said their goodbyes and they each headed to their homes, but when Rarity got home she found it hard to sleep. She was nervous about telling AppleJack that she had a crush on her but she also knew it needed to be told. To help her fall asleep she did some more clopping, which was once again amazing. After that Rarity had fallen right asleep, and could now only wait for the morning to come.

The next morning Rarity heard a knock at her door, she got out of bed and headed for the door and opened it to see AppleJack. "AppleJack you made it!" She led AJ inside and locked the door behind her, it was now or never Rarity thought.

"Well what was it you wanted to talk about?" Rarity used her magic to get the 'reaction couch and they sat next to each other.

"Can I get you something to eat or drink?"

AppleJack declined because she wanted to hear what Rarity had to say. "So what's this all about Rarity?"

"Ok AppleJack... if you must know I..." Rarity was having a difficult time telling the orange pony her feelings for her. Seeing how nervous she was AppleJack put her hoof on Rarity's and looked her in the eyes. 'Damnit AppleJack, why do your eyes have to be so lovely?!' She thought to herself as they continued to look each other in the eyes.

"You know you can tell me anything sugarcube, you just have to trust me."

Rarity looked around nervously before sighing, this was the moment of truth. "AppleJack, I have a crush on you!" This caught the earth pony by surprise and she didn't quite know how to react to this.

"H-how long have you had a crush on me?" AJ was very conflicted but Rarity knew that she would respond with honesty.

"I'm not sure I guess it really started becoming apparent yesterday at Sweet Apple Acres." AppleJack was taking all of this in, and wasn't sure what to say. It must have been a lot to take in since AJ was just sitting their deep in thought.

"Why me sugarcube, what is it about me?"

"I love how you are so hard working and honest, and you are really beautiful." AppleJack was shocked, she never really heard anyone compliment her this way.

"You really think I'm beautiful?"

"In my eyes you are the most gorgeous pony in all of Equestria!" That comment caused AppleJack to blush, she never had anypony compliment her like that.

She let out a small laugh. "Wow, I never knew you felt this way." Neither did Rarity until yesterday, but through their past experiences together these feelings started to form.

"Well, now that you know how I feel about you... how do you feel about me?" AppleJack had to think for a moment, she was caught off guard by this whole thing. After a few moments of thinking she still wasn't sure.

"Well... I think I need some time to think about this, but I'll have an answer for you later toady I promise." Rarity had a small look of disappointment but also some understanding. She wasn't going to force AppleJack to answer right away, that could have led to a bad situation for both of them.

"Alright darling, I'll be here waiting and whatever you decide, I will accept." Rarity opened the door and AppleJack left her boutique, and as Rarity closed the door she became extremely nervous. She really wanted AppleJack to love her but if AJ said no Rarity couldn't force AJ to be with her. It was up to fate now, and that was something Rarity didn't want but she did have a 50/50 chance. So all she had to do was wait/hope for the answer.

So here is the first rewritten chapter, no major changes except more detail was added... at least I hope I added more detail. I still kept Rarity telling AppleJack her feelings in this chapter, I could have moved it to the next chapter but I like it this way. The updates for this won't be regular, since I have other fanfics going on. R and R and have a good day!

FutureShock