the new girl (the new version with most of the mistakes fixed ) chapter 1
Kagome walked down the halls of her new school, just then the bell rang don't want to be late for my first day of school . (lets just pretend that means peoples thought ok ok any ways ) kagome ran to class the teacher was a woman who looked slightly under the age of 30, any ways sorry I'm late said kagome its ok class today we have a new student, her name is kagome higurashi, hi said kagome she heard a bunch of people whispering, take a seat next to sango, sango please raise your hand so kagome knows where you are a brown haired girl with pink eyeliner and had her hair tied back in a ponytail raised her hand .kagome walked over to sango, hi said kagome hi was sango's reply, sango asked kagome if she wanted her to show her around sure answered kagome, hey kagome can I see your schedule, sure hey we have all the same classes cool said kagome
well since you guys kept on reviewing saying that I need to put more punctuation and better grammar I did ok well please review and sorry for the short chapter