This is my first story that I have written. I would love for feed back. I can take criticism…I only think that when somebody gives you advice you can improve a lot. So please Read and Review…
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Chapter 1:
Sam walks into the bar not knowing what was going on. She was new in town and only Jax new who she was. As she walked in she saw Jason(who caught her eye), Carly, Jax, Courtney, Nikolas, Emily, Lucky, Elizabeth, Patrick, and Robin, but to her strangers.
As she walked in Jason noticed her, he had never seen such a beauty, neither had the others. Petite frame, long luxurious brown hair, and beautiful deep brown eyes. Some of the girls got a little jealous, but not Carly. She was very confident about herself.
As Sam walked around scanning the crowd she went to the bar and ordered a drink.
Robin asked, "Who is that? I've never seen her around before."
Jax was at a different table, but heard what Robin had asked and said, "Her name is Samantha McCall, but she goes by Sam. She's new in town and from what she did with my friend, a slut!"
When he said that everybody turned and looked at him to get the gossip.
"Yeah, my friend met her the first night she was in town and they hung out and partied and you know one thing led to another and they slept together," Jax said, "then I met her a few nights ago at the store and she was coming on a little strong."
"What," Courtney said in shock, seeing as how Jax and Courtney had been dating for the whole summer.
"It was nothing," Jax said, calming her down, even though he thought Sam was gorgeous. He couldn't let that show.
As all the gossip is being spilled, Jason is listening but really hasn't taken his eyes off of Sam. Sam has noticed Jason or as she thought a very sexy hunk with nice blue eyes and dirty blonde hair, since she didn't know his name.
Carly noticed him eyeing Sam up.
Carly whispered to Jason (so nobody else could hear), "You like her don't you or you think she's hot?"
"Yeah," Jason said under his breath.
"Why don't you ask her if you can buy her a drink."
"No, she doesn't even know who I am and plus, she just walked in here and already everybody knows her story or at least part of it."
"Fine."
"You must be right Jax. She must be a slut, look at what she's wearing. It is saying, 'Whoever wants some can get some,'" said Courtney.
"Oh, I like what she's wearing. I would wear it," Carly said.
"Of course you would," Courtney replied back in a sarcastic manner.
Jason noticed that a guy walked over to Sam and was talking to her. Most of the group was watching and then that faded in and out.
"So, I haven't seen you around her. You new?" said a guy about her age.
"Yeah. Just moved a week ago from boarding school."
"Hey can I buy you a drink?" With a devilish smile on his face. Thinking to himself, 'She is hot and I wonder what she looks like in her uniform.'
"Sure…," while having a smile on her face.
BACK AT THE LARGE GROUP
"Look she's already with some guy," Courtney said. Looking at Sam dancing with the guy that bought her a drink.
Jason didn't know why but he was getting jealous and his stomach was in a knot. He tried to shake it but it wouldn't go away.
ON THE DANCE FLOOR
Sam and this guy were dancing very close together, like they were at a club. All the girls were thinking, 'What a whore. You don't even know the guy and you're letting him all up on you.'
All the guys were wishing they were with Sam.
At first it was innocent. But then Sam noticed he was trashed. He was all over her. She was trying to get away from him but he wouldn't let her. He started to kiss all over her and started to grope her.
BACK AT THE LARGE GROUP
Nobody was really paying attention to Sam and the guy she was with. They were all into there own conversations. But then Jason noticed that she wasn't really digging the guy and was trying to push him away but he wouldn't let here. He was getting concerned.
ON THE DANCE FLOOR
"Come on baby, let me take you upstairs…"
"No, can you please get off of me?"…As he's pulling her closer and kissing her.
"Seriously, get away from me…Please stop." As she is pushing him away.
I hope that you guys liked it. I have the 2nd and almost the 3rd chapter finished. I don't know when I will post them but it should be soon. Sorry this chapter was short, the next ones are longer. Please Review. I want to take in everybody's opinions. Thanks
