Strange things often happened in Jump City. Not a day goes by when someone isn't in trouble or in need of any assistance from the Teen Titans. The team finally caught a break after a fight with Slade. Robin, of course, was on the monitor searching for any sign of the escaped villain. Beastboy had challenged Cyborg to a play a videogame, and they sat on the couch, racing their cars on a never ending track. Raven sat at the table, book in hand, ignoring the boys and an insistent Starfire.
"Please friend Raven? Would you like to do the hanging out today?"
"No thanks Starfire. I have a hundred pages left and would like to finish."
Starfire eventually gave up and went to the others, trying to get them to come with her. None of them were interested at the moment so she decided to go by herself. She had been gone for a few hours when the alarm sounded.
"What's the trouble?" asked Raven, who after finishing her book and started another. They boys stopped their game as Robin typed a few keys on the monitor.
His mask seemed to grow twice its size and his jaw dropped to the floor, "You're not going to believe this."
He made the image show on the big screen for the others to see. They figured it was Slade at first, but when they got a camera view of the mall, they looked the same as Robin and couldn't find any words. The mall had been almost smashed to bits, and the attacker was none other than Starfire. The titans raced as fast as they could to the t-car and Robin ended up taking his cycle as they hurried to the mall
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